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Title: LilMizTake63@aol.com
Reviewed By: Debz xx On: March 16, 2004 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breathes calming breaths* Im sorry i had to get that out of my system ^__^ But seriously, this story is amazing i love how u portray the characters...even tho Yami is a meanie....oh well HES A FIT MEANIE hehehe PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! i beg you!!! *bats Chibi eyes* pretty pleasums!! Lotsa Luv and Huggles Debs xxx
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Reviewed By: Katie_the_saru On: March 16, 2004 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST HAVE MORE FIC!!!
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Title: Third Review! I think...
Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy! ;) ) On: March 16, 2004 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until the next chapter! Please hurry up *gives Ryou a big hug, and slaps Yami* That was for being so damn mean!
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 16, 2004 01:30 CST
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>.< Poor Ryou! *flays Yami and then throws him into a flaming inferno of white hot flame* Die you stupid pharaoh! I usually like Yami, but damn...you make him so hateable!! *hugs Ryou* Down with the arrogant rapist pharaoh and his sadistic priest boyfriend! Have mercy on poor Ryou!! I will be most displeased if he doesn't get a break soon. Update asap!! *tends to Ryou's wounds and throws darts at a picture of Yami*
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 16, 2004 00:28 CST
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awwwww.....poor ryou!! poor Bakura!!! poor Malik!! poor Marik!!!! poor EVERYONE!!!! such a sad chappie!!! good thing they all got out (partially) fine. update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 15, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sniffle. my poor Ryou!! WAAAHHH!! You are a very talented writer! I liked this story alot!! Please e-mail me at goku_the_saru@yahoo.com when you update, so I can read it. :)
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat/DD [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Just so you know I love ALL Yugioh characters. ^_^ Even Tea... *random people throw moldy tomatoes* AAAAHHHHHH!!!! But I really want Bakura to get something good out of this because well... YOUR A FIEND!!! Ugh, poor Ba-ku-chan... Anyway... PLEASE INCREASE CHAPTER LENGHT! 4000+ words are fine but... 2000+? -_- *sigh* Its not a must. Wow, I yell alot. Actually its just at you, but its not your fault. ^_^ I like the story. I just hope you won't end this with Bakuchan gutted alive until he dies. As for the Malik pairing... make it Tristan! *random people throw dirty gym socks* I admit it! I love EVERYONE in Yugioh! Well mostly everyone...
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 14, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad story really. I'm thinking since most of the main male characters are in yaoi pairings that Malik should have a refreshing hetero pairing just to throw in a bit of spice to the story. I'd like to see him with a past version of Serenity or Mai. I frankly can't picture him with anyone but Yami Bakura if it's yaoi. But that's personal preference I suppose. So really...Serenity or Mai or some other girl would be a refreshing surprise.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:16 CST
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I feel so sad for ryou! *sobs*
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 14, 2004 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay update!!!!! i love this fic!! write more plz!!! oh yeah, i don't have yahoo, but i have msn, so if you want, i'll just email you in the meantime wonderful fic, continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat/ Dirty D On: March 13, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What are you talking about big chapters? >_< I want bigger! LOL Yeah right, like the world evolves around me. I'm not that naive, unlike some stupid Pharaoh. I like what you've done with the story. The only thing I really don't like is the torture Bakura is going through, but then again, nobody is evil enough to like it are they? Yami being evil I think is right. Most Pharaohs believe themselves to be desendents of Gods (I think everyone in Egypt did, but enough about history class) so you making him as such is a thumbs up. I'm hoping for a RyouxSeto fluff but hey, either way is good. Just tell me Bakura gets a happy ending! Kill everyone else but do something else for Bakura by the end! He went through 9 months of torturous torture! Don't be evil! SAVE YAMI BAKURA!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 13, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here, I'm gonna give Bakura a dictionary, he needs to know what he eats. The moisture thing was good! Very smart, I like it. Well, now Ryou knows the way down there, POOR RYOU!! I HATE PHAROAH POIRCUPINE HEAD!! He's being a REAL ass! I can't wait to see the look on Marik's face! YAY! You're right, NOBODY'S PERFECT! Sorry, gotta give you a nine, I STILL LOVE YOU THOUGH!! Stupid, misspelled "had". I HATE that word! I ALWAYS get it wrong!
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Title: afsdfd
Reviewed By: Deme too lazy to login in On: March 11, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.. i like this story... ^^ i feel bad for baku, wanted to cry ;-; and poor marik and malik too.. MEAN, lol.. update sooon. i wanna read more ^^
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 11, 2004 19:37 CST
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Ok, that scene was INTENSE! Lol, what really got me was how Ryou has a fetish for marshmallows! And Bakura: What a 'maggots'? Funny guy! Well, with the story, I feel really sorry for Bakura. The pair up with Bakura/Marik is good one! What about Malik! You hafta do something with him! And Yami? guilty? Yeah right!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 11, 2004 19:27 CST
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LOL! I love that little bit: Bakura--are you my conscience? BWAHAHA!!! Funny guy! Wow, Ryou met Bakura! This is getting interesting! Please continue!
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