| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 17, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gleep, that's a funny word, gleep. GLEEP! Oh, if it's yours, I wont take it. I know how we TREASURE our words. Anyways, good job, poor Bakura and poor Ryou, but Ryou should forgive him, and I think he will. Sorry about putting you off raw meat. I see, you DID pair Malik with Jono, it's becoming quite popular now. Good luck with the rest of your story!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 19:37 CST
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aww....poor ryou Yami, you're so mean!! *whacks Yami over the head with a mallet* Yami: >_<
anyways, continue!! love the lemon
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 17, 2004 17:05 CST
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Aw, hell no! This is getting sadistic - the kind of sadistic that holds you in it's grasp and doesn't let you turn away. Malik and Jou are alright as a couple. But damnit! Give Ryou a break at least one chapter!!! *borrows the millennium rod and points it at the author* You will give Ryou a break, mind slave! j/k
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 16:49 CST
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yeah, why are you threatening us?
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Reviewed By: al On: March 17, 2004 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHH why are you threatening us readers with reviews! I wrote something but i don't know where it went. that could have happened to 10 other people. and i never really read a joey and malik pairing before. not bad but i'm not into it. although i like the idea of bakura and ryou and maybe marik. Bakura sure has a strong will to survive. last comment. i thought joey healed with the touch of his hand. medicines are good too.
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Title: asds
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NO! JOo CAUGHT RYOU! AND WATCHU DOIN TAH MEH POOR BAKUCHAN??! ;-; MEAN! WHY STOP THERE! EBIL CLIFFIE... POOR BAKURA.. i was about to cry.. ;-; AAAAAAAAAAAAHHH EVIL!
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Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 17, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you stopped there!! how cruel! LOL!! More I say more!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 07:05 CST
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you can't do that to Ryou! you can't! besides, even Bakura isn't that mean! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 17, 2004 04:45 CST
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what a great chapter!! poor Bakura, but at least Malik's happy with Jounouchi. i feel very sorry for Bakura, please make his life better again!!! he's not gonna RAPE Ryou-chan, is he?? please no, that's just too upsetting (both for Bakura and Ryou-chan). Continue!!!
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Reviewed By: couldn'tthinkofaname On: March 17, 2004 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me lovin this fic, keep up the good work:D oh and i think malik's secret lover should be either yugi or otogi
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Title: SWEET! ^_^;
Reviewed By: JJStar On: March 16, 2004 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES,YOU WRITE SO GOOD! BUT PLEASE GO ON!
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Reviewed By: zoey hellmaster On: March 16, 2004 20:21 CST
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mmm...i LOVE lemons!! Please write more soon!
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Title: lovin it!
Reviewed By: Ryou-Bakura1 On: March 16, 2004 17:34 CST
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I'm really loving this fic, since you entered my contest i should review everyday but oh well, i'm horrible at reviewing but other than that i'm really enjoying this fiction keep the updates coming!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 16:26 CST
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*crying so hard* why does Yami have to be sooo mean! WAAAAAH! Why can't he just realize what he's feeling and get over it! WAAAAAAH! but it is good writing...
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Title: Yami's So Mean!
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh Yami's so mean!!! ( Though I still love Yami)But I love the story lol, I hope Bakura gets freed. And Poor Ryou, he doesnt deserve that. Cant wait till next chappie.
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