| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: August 02, 2004 13:18 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I loved how Shippo was practically screaming at Miroku 'cause he wanted to stay with Kagome. I bet he knew what was going to happen and didn't want it to. Yay! InuYasha and Kagome are finally mates! I'm so happy.
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 13:00 CDT
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Yay! They finally did it!!! I'm so glad they're officially mates... really hott lemon lol wow chapter 30 already? I can't believe that you can keep stories going for so long without them getting even the tiniest bit boring! that's a hell of a lot of talent right there! Great job, as always! ^_^
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Title: great chap!
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good chapter! Im sooo glad you didnt stop writting it before Kagome got to be marked! I was kinda wondering how long it was gonna be till they would mate.... but now i cant wait for the next chap! Is it gonna be about the next day when they tell everyone? I bet you didnt mean to do this but its still a sort of a cliffy ya know! Oh and i wanted to know if you could tell me what Ja Ne means? Maybe in the next chap? Well updates soon! CYA
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Reviewed By: Niko with a I [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I like your style of writing. =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: August 02, 2004 09:07 CDT
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aww they're mates now? That's so cute. That wass an ultra sweet lemon too. You're a littereary genious, you know that right? lol I cant wait till you can update again.
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Reviewed By: Aewi (not login) On: August 02, 2004 05:10 CDT
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Your Lemon was well written!
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Title: don't stop
Reviewed By: ladonna On: July 25, 2004 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got me hooked and addicted please write more!!!!!!
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Title: *tear*
Reviewed By: Lady Battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i LOVE ur story u are like my fav writer of all time!!! i could read ur stories ALL DAY!!! i'm sorry to say but Kouga is too kind-a full of himself eh?? i mean i love the guy but idn i would like beat him up if i saw him lmao n.e.wayz...(my cuz wants u to know that her stomach is hurttin' lol sorry) i think it is soo cool how u put ur story together and added everyone and the way they act is similar to the shows but still different. well thats enough for now i will review soon....PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 22:59 CDT
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aww, you can never stay mad at InuYasha for too long... Damn Miroku for interrupting! >_< I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 21, 2004 18:11 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jaw drops* OMG that was good keep up the good work!! ^_^ updtae soon again please?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 14:55 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a grr eat chapter! i hope you update soon again! gosh this story is soo good!
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: July 21, 2004 11:46 CDT
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Jeez, poor Inu & Kagome getting interrupted every time they go somewhere for privacy. I hope that they make their relationship official soon.
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Reviewed By: darkempereror not signed in On: July 21, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading your story on and off in between my own writing. I really like the plot and the direction the story is going. (Burn in heel Kikyo!) Ahem... yeah. I have some constructive criticism, and a favor to ask. First the favor. You said rated for future lemons, do you mind seperating the chapter from the lemon with a signal like (~*~) or something? It means I don't hvae to read the parts that I don't want to read. For the criticism, try to find some alternate ways to say things, be a bit more descriptive, and try to write less simply. I know that its really easy to sum things up in a paragraph into a sentence, but it gives everybody a clearer image of whats going on. Instead of 'Inuyasha was happy she was awake.'(from story), try 'Inuyasha felt Kagome stir, and breathed a sigh of releif, worry washing away from his presence.' I sound like my english teacher! Please and Thank you.
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