| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 06:32 CDT
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I like this fic. At first, I had a hard time getting in to it... but now I really like the plot line. I want to give you credit for your tactful way of dealing with Kikyo. Usually when she's mentioned, writers bash and slam her to no end (which, I don't always feel is fair. Yasha running off to be with her, though... *grumble* makes me like Sess/Ka, Mir/Ka and Kou/Ka scenarios all the more. (Heck, I'd even entertain a good Nar/Ka.. haven't found one yet though.) That's a whole different can of peaches, though). So, instead of taking the usual road like other writers, you took an approach I haven't seen too much of: you decided to seperate her and (so far) make her a non-issue. I like that. I think it's a creative way to handle it, and I will say that it put me at ease knowing our dear little Kagome wouldn't get heart-broken _this_ time 'round. (In other fics, that always tugged on my heart-strings. Sigh.) Anyhoozle, keep up the great work. I can't wait to see an update! I get giddy at the thought of Yasha and Kagome having a litter of pups.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW....another kid that's just so sweet!!!!! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:59 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked that chapter but i wish you had put more in it, please up date soon! And coud you tell me what Ja Ne means?
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 07, 2004 20:26 CDT
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I wonder who the boy could be...excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: LaDonna On: August 06, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue I can't wait to see what the next thing you write
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 00:03 CDT
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great fic, i haven't reviewed before because i was to busy readind, keep up the good work
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Title: Best
Reviewed By: Niko with a I [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the best author. I've only read like three of your fics, but so far they are all good. I can't wait until you make another fic. =^_^=
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Title: Cute Cute Cute
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:28 CDT
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I apologize for not reviewing every chapter but I love this sotry so much. I loved how Inuyasha and Kagome met in the very beggining and everything about the story. I wonder how Kouga will take Kag's getting marked by the Inu and how Shippou will take it too. Also I am looking forward to the evil Naraku coming back. I think he would make a good character to take Kag away from the Inu. Specially if it happened while she was pregnant and when he takes her away he tries to rape her and put a spell on her to make her his...sorry I just love plots like that though. They rule. Your story rules too. Anwayz I am planning on reaching the limit on the letter countdown I am going to make this review pretty long or I'll at least try to. What I liked the most about your story I think was how Inuyasha just up and marked Kagome and she didn't do the whole resistantance thing. In fics like that my head hurts because they are too sorry to get together. I hope Sango and Miroku get together soon. They really need to hurry up and get to gettin it on. I hope that if Inu/Kag have a kid I hope it's boy though. And Sessy did promise to come back and kill Inuyasha so what'll happen if he does threatening Inuyasha's little pups. I hope that happens though I love it when there is conflict. But I can't wait for Kouga to figure it out though. Hehehehehe. I know Shippou is going to be on Inuyasha. Well here's my super long review. Anywayz this is for not reviewing. See Ya! ^_~ Mic Mic
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, IT WAS GETTING GOOD!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, IT WAS GETTING GOOD!!!!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:01 CDT
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Yippeee...finally, a lovely lemon for Inu-Kag... I'm a vewy, vewy happy lil girl :)
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:56 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 02, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Excellent chapter, glad to know the two of them finally advanced their relationship to the next level. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...........................update sooon again please and keep up the good work!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww.... they finally bacame real mate's how sweet keep up the good work update soon again pleasE?
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