| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: February 13, 2005 20:09 EST
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ahahhaha. funny. heh. man. at least they finally did it. and out in the woods too. and miroku calling them in the middle of it all. funny junk..
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 12, 2005 01:06 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap and a whole lot more! oh my dear sweet Kami! by far, that has had to be the BEST lemon i have ever read before in my entire life! amazing...simply amazing. i have so much i want to add but i can't formulate it in my mind!! i have never read anythign that was filled with such a raw passion between two people. you brought it toghether so perfectly that it was a near work of literary genius. amazing. i wish i could say more but i swear to god, all the words are running together! this story has astounded me since day one and it just keep getting better! this is one of the best AU fics i have ever read!!
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Reviewed By: Leni_ara On: February 09, 2005 15:54 EST
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The third thing turned on in the room should never ever be the cellphone. Annoying little fu*kers. And 'break out'? 'skin against skin'? 'can't exactly see'? Wow, they're having a lot of fun there, aren't they? It's amazing that after that she'll still go back to her house (didn't IY say something about it being perfect if she slept in his bed?) I must say, too, I've read lots of high-rated scenes, but this one must be one of the 20 best I've ever come across. Not cheesy, really hot and detailed enough but not TOO detailed. Me likes. I also loved those scene with Mrs. Higurashi. You write her very well and her conversation with Inuyasha always manage to surprise me. Looking forward to the next chapter. K&S Leni
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, numisma, it's almost one o'clock and I told you I'd finish all 26 chapters. Curse you for keeping me up with this awesome story. I LOVE IT! Especially that part about the underage thing, classic! And that last chapter was very steamy. I thoroughly enjoyed how you drew the smut out. Good work. I'll be looking for your next updated! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 02:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just laughed my ass of that was funny as hell great job with the storyand I dont think they should have patrinized you about when the lemon was coming up still funny as hell! Luv ya ~Randi~
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: January 24, 2005 19:19 EST
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The new edited lemon seems better. Great work, as always. :D
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Reviewed By: rinjii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love the ending! it was so so so funny! and i'm so happy that you finally put in the lemon! it was awsome! please update soon! love ya!
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Title: It's about time
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took him long enough to finally make a decision about her.
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Reviewed By: Ashley C. On: January 20, 2005 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found this story thru a link on the ICAF home page. i love reading fanfics and this one did not dissapoint. i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: This chapter was long awaited and I thank you
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: January 20, 2005 13:42 EST
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Numisma, Oh God I thought I wouldn't be able to review your new chapter! I loved it by the way! A lemon. I loved it and I could have waited. It was what I expected and a little more. So what's the next part and turmoil that they have to go through. I know things aren't going to go smoothly from now on. Come on tell me what's popping! This chapter was 44 pages and I printed every last page. I sat down and I read every last page and I squealed for the good parts and laughed for the funny and panted for the hot parts. I expected more pain. I see InuYasha as Masochistic. I'm not sure how I see Kagome, she's shy one moment and outgoing the next. I guess I see her as a little sadistic and masochistic. She's kinda like me. Although I like to give it a little more then recieve it and Kagome seems like she likes to recieve a little more then she likes to give. That's alright with me I'll never sleep with her. I love the way InuYasha came to terms with his situation. Talking about wet dreams! I like the way a cranky Miroku answers the phone and I think I would like to give him a test drive too. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for that next update. It took me forever to find your user name bacause I refused to log into my eamil and I can't search for your story because these computers at work are strick about what they consider inapporiate. And honey your story falls into that "NO-NO" bracket. So I have my friends open, cut, copy, and paste and email it to me. Love MN
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 12:20 EST
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Holy cow that was a HUGE chapter! I have one question - Inuyasha's inner diagalog: "Hate these things, but whatcha gonna do, right?" he drawled as he tossed it lightly to the side. And as long as he used them religiously, she'd never find out. There were some things other people were not meant to know. When are you going to explain this hum?
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Title: dragoninu2
Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 08:21 EST
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Just one word will sum up what I have just enjoyed. . . DAMN
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Reviewed By: The Random Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 06:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic (just found it ^_^) and I really liked the way you make Kagome all bitchy about not being able to read Kanji (I can't do it either) but I just wanted to ask why her clock was singing out "Itadekimasu" when that means "what a wonderful feast" so...is that just like...what clocks sing over there or what? anyways, good chapter. On to read some more...
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Reviewed By: lammora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 02:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Its about time Inuyasha got to it. I was wondering how long he would make the poor girl wait. And the rest of us as well. It really makes me wonder what he is going to do to her now. I really do hope that this isn't the last chapter. But something tells me with the whole Naraku thing still up in the air, i dont' think it is. I can't wait for your next chapter. i already know you wil make it just as good as the rest. keep it coming PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Tsubasa (Damn thing wont let me stay Logged In) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the wait is always worth it when it comes to this story, and I have one thing to say. ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME! I've been waiting for this moment since I began reading this. My friend got me hooked, but I found it through Kris. So yeah.Can't wait for the next chapter to come out, and I know the wait for that will be well worth it. Your style of writing always has me feeling like I'm right there with the characters, witnessing it like a third person viewer. But then that just makes me seem like a voyeur, when I'm not. Hopefully the next chapter will be just as good as this one, so don't keep your readers waiting for too long. I'll be checking in on you frequently to see what's up, and maybe even to re read some stuff because its that enjoyable for me, I especially love how you described the piercings in the beginning to the story, I hate to sound like a rabid fangirl, but I had shivers running up my spine every time you mentioned one. I'm getting shivers right now. I dunno, maybe I have a piercing fetish, but now I'm getting off topic. Speaking of fetishes.... I like how you incorporated the school uniform into the story, I wasn't expecting it. So to make a long review short, I love your story. And now I must be getting to bed because it is 10:50 P.M. and I have school in the morning.
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