| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 19:28 EDT
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Yup, it's official. I am in love with your stories. It's all so sweet and cute!! Yes, I'm going to be sticking around this story until the very end! Anyways, sorry for taking so long to review this chapter, but school has kept me much too busy for my liking, and even now I must cut my review of this story short because of the homework I'm supposed to be working on. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: XxSilentxDreamerxX On: September 19, 2004 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! YOUR NUMBER 1! I love your ficcy its one of the greates ones I have read so far! I can't wait for you to update soon. I hope you really do update fast, cause i'm addicted to the story now!
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: September 19, 2004 17:08 EDT
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Mangetsu, you made me blush the whole way through this chapter! aoshi is just irresistable with that cocky attitude of his, LOVE IT. and i wanna see more of aoshi vs. weasal girl...its so funni to watch them go at it. please update soon! Jen
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: September 18, 2004 21:09 EDT
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Hey! It's me again! Haha don't worry about my expectations, you far surpass it anyways :P I have none so you don't need to worry. Haha so my reviews make you laugh huh? Well that's good I wasn't aware of that! Anyways haha wow what a war... Glad you managed to get this chapter up! But see now the problem is that I have to wait until the next chapter to come out! lol don't worry I'll check back soon. Just get it out when ya can! Until then I'll see ya.
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Title: Great, as usual...
Reviewed By: twishinky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 11:44 EDT
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Hiya sweetie!!!! I'm learning a lot from you, it seems... this was a sweet, sweet chapter... I really love the pairing even though i thought that i could never like alternate pairings, but you seem to fit everyhting in place! I love you too!!! Actually, I'm in the States, now, in Georgia to be exact, but I'm leaving tomorrow for chicago... Helping my mom with something so i may not update at least for another three weeks, but i'm keeping my notes and thoughts jotted down so i just have to put them together when I get back in Manila or here if I get enough time to myself... I mean its total work 24/7--- *sigh* anyway, hope your anemia isn't acting up again and take care, the mother hentai friend *hehehe* update please!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: September 18, 2004 11:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I absolutely LOVED the chapter! Kaoru and Aoshi teasing each other was cute. And I like that they actually feel for each OTHER and not just their prowess with one another. Hawke was certainly surprised by Kaoru's reply that she wanted him. I wonder when they are going to share their whole names with one another. I just realized that half-way through the chapter. They share so much and yet don't know one another. This scene could certainly give some romance writers a run for their money. And I love it when Aoshi laughs and lets loose. I was really worried that Kaoru would wet the bed at least twice! Then I burst out laughing, wondering what Aoshi would do if he suddenly found himself covered in ammonia because of his own devious methods! Very cute indeed!
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER On: September 18, 2004 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS CHAPTER!SORRY FOR MY IMPATIENCE!PLEASE FORGIVE ME BUT I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!YOUR STORY IS SO GREAT THAT I READ AND REREAD IT!I NEVER GET BORED OF IT NO MATTER HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE ALREADY READ IT!THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT STORY AND THANK YOU FOR NOT ABANDONING THE STORY!I CANT WAIT FOR THE MOMENT OF YOUR NEXT UPDATE!PLEASE LET IT BE NOT VERY FAR AWAY!THANK YOU AGAIN AND CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!THANK YOU VERY MUCH! LOVE:MEGASUPER
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Reviewed By: ...... On: September 17, 2004 22:20 EDT
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*Massive hug* I'm so greatful that your busy life let you have time to update! This chapter is rather...hot and spicy. ^.^ I enjoyed reading it...and rereading it, and so forth. My name is rather cute, ne? Keep up the wonderful, hot and spicy, work and I hope your life lets you update soon!
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Title: The Black Hawke
Reviewed By: Sephiresss On: September 17, 2004 21:34 EDT
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Tsk tsk tsk...Kanzen-sama must love lemons cause she sure is good it writing them...and she sure likes to write them a lot. The smut scene was wonderful of course, and the little bit with Misao-chan was really cute. Sumthin I have noticed is that when ever there is a lemon, Aoshi is always having his thoughts about how he can't believe Kaoru came in his life and that she still wants to be with him. Its a clever way of doing it...but I was wondering if you would be building their relationship in other way then sex. NO, I am NOT complaining about the amount of citrus...your lemons always leave me wanting more...but i guess that the amount of smut kinda takes away from the plot and the character's daily life. Perhaps this was your intention as the writer...hmmm This story is still the BOMB, I can't believe the incredible quality of it all. And I really hope Aoshi and Misao will not end out badly, as they are one of my absolute favorite couples. But however you choose to twist it, I know its going to be wicked awesome. Awesome work my friend...hope you are well Sephiress p.s. So sorry about not reviewing this in a while...I'm so used to getting Author Alerts off FF.net that it slipped my mind, Gomen. But I must depart from the beloved comp now...as tomorro I have to wake up at 6 for a HUGE volley tournament...6AM on a Saturday...what bullshit *grumbles*
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Reviewed By: catt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 19:18 EDT
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KAMI!!! Tsuki-sama, can you please turn on the air conditioner, it seems to have gotten hot in here; hey belledaynight are't you hot too??
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Reviewed By: catt On: September 17, 2004 18:25 EDT
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KAMI!!! Tsuki-sama, can you please turn on the air conditioner, it seems to have gotten hot in here; hey belledaynight are't you hot too??
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Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 19:06 EDT
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Well, I can't blame you for needing a while to get the next chapter. After all, I'm a teenage girl, and I'm perfectly aware of how much of my parents' time and attention I take up (but of course my older brother is MUCH worse than me, lol. j/k...sorta...). Anyways, all I can do is beg you to get the next chapter out soon!
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Reviewed By: neko|chan On: September 12, 2004 02:24 EDT
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::currently trying to imagine a mother of three thinking up a rape as the opening to a relationship:: can you tell i fail. however, it is the perfect opening to this very passionate relationship. you've done a wonderful job with character building to a very original story, as well as a very original take on Aoshi. i absolutely love the working of the darker aspect of emotions in your fic, they come closer to reality than the 'fluff' and 'waff.' i can't wait to read where you will take your characters. (excuse the grammar there are tons im sure.) great work so far.
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Reviewed By: Katarina Arev On: September 11, 2004 10:24 EDT
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Back again. I was starting to wonder if you had stopped working on the fic. You have a whole bunch of dedicated readers, so don't give up! And if you are actually still working on it and have not been planning anything of the kind, ignore me. XD Goodluck! -Kat
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Title: pleaseeee
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER On: September 10, 2004 08:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT IS TAKING YOU SO LONG?PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!DONT ABANDON YOUR STORY!I WOULD LOVE TO READ THE HOLE STORY NOT ONE NOT FINISHED!PLEASE PLEASE IF YOU CAN UPDATE SOON!
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