| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: ...... On: August 20, 2004 19:52 EDT
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You updated! Yes! This chapter offered alot into their relationship, hasn't it? With both of them being afraid of having their hearts broken and all. It was rather sweet, and I hope Hawke/Aoshi gets his energy back soon. I also hope that Misao and Aoshi get off on the right foot in the morning. And I hope you update soon, please update soon. Pretty please with a cherry on top? Keep up the wonderful work and update soon (I just can't leave that alone, can ? ^.^)!
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Title: super
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER On: August 20, 2004 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you sooooooooo much!This chapter is also a great one!thank you so much for continueing this story!and you are really turning me into A/K fan!thank you for the chapter!i hope that the next will come sooner than this one!please update soon!
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Reviewed By: paline On: August 20, 2004 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What do you mean?Why wont you continue?It would be a shame not finishing the story!you are great autor!you story is great and i beg you to continue!please please please!
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: blueberrylove On: August 20, 2004 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!update soon please!
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Title: i love it!
Reviewed By: Kres On: August 20, 2004 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update soon!cant wait for the next chapter!update update update update update!
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz On: August 15, 2004 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur fic. keep on writing, please. love Aoshi and Kaoru in this fic so dont stop writing. ciao :D
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Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER On: August 15, 2004 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh please please please update the story!I like it so much!After i read the story i became fan of the Aoshi/Kaoru pairing!So please update!I cant wait!I check every hour when Im on the computer if the next chapter is here!Please dont delay too long!Im sure that many people love your story but they are too lazy to push the review button!They are just like me!I hope you will forgive me and update soon!Thanks again for the incredible story!OK enough with my blabing!I PROMISE THAT I WILL REVIEW YOUR NEXT CHAPTER WITHOUT DELAY!THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR EVEN READING THIS BULLSHITS!BYE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 19:32 EDT
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HAHAHAHAHA; I WAS RIGHT YES; ITS AOSHI!!!! DAMN GIRLFRIEND WE THINK SO MUCH ALIKE, sorry had to do the caps for that....yesyesyesyes.... you know you have to continue this story!!!!!!the only reason you are not getting the reviews is because we only know you as Tsuki-sama on AAF.net and not Mangetsu of media... We love you, please do not leave us hanging....if AFF ever comes back online bring this story over and you will get the raving reviews that you love....well except for the K&K fans you know them....their so hard to sway over...I still have fantasies about Kauro and Saitou, giggles evilly, dodges thrown fruit catti
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 19:22 EDT
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Mangetsu-sama sensi: Gashi, shin-yuu why was it when reading this chapter the theme song from Pretty Woman kept going through my head, aaaaaahhhhhhaaahhh... (giggles and starts humming Pretty Woman).. I really like this story, but am still waiting for Hawke to rinse the dark hair coloring out (giggles again) I see RED roots.... Bows to hide her giggles... catti
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:24 EDT
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Mangetsu-sama sensi: Wait, wait, wait!! How come you did not make the "Hawk" Kenshin??? Who is this dark haired man, if you had described blue eyes, I would have thought maybe Aoshi(giggles evily, I LIKE Aoshi!!). Good writing, though, I am going to keep reading. Bows and blushes (I like the park scene, so naughty) catti
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: August 13, 2004 18:32 EDT
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Wow... This was a great story!! I loved it so far... It actually has a really nice plotline which makes for an enjoyable read. Plus it's partly angsty which just makes it all the better. I hope you update this fic soon.. Please say you will.
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Blonde_B-Ball_Star On: August 12, 2004 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is so great why won't you continue... U MUST!!! For the sake of all us A/K lovers out there... no really this story u hae written isn't just one of those lemons without a plot but a real elborate thing, you have turned the whole sterotypical A/K story and turned it upside down... but really the only reason I found this story was because I joined the Aoshi/Kaoru group and most of the viewers are on fanfiction.net but since they banned NC17 I can see where u are at a lose... but this story is so great I love the gang involvment.. oh please you must continue thise story I love it so much... but maybe try joining adultfanfiction net.. you might get some more reviews from that sight and it might encourage you to continue.. and I am glad there is no former love Misao at least with this "Rebecca" she is not someone I can actually respect.. though I personally have never SEEN MIsao in the anime I still think she is a good person... how ironic of me...so yes KEEP UP THE A/K the WORLD needs more... ppl might not say it but they love em... and this is truly one of the most fasinating fanfics I have ever read.. great and update soon... could ya maybe e-mail me when you do?? PLease,,, just a thought but here is my e-mail in case you decide to take me up on that blonde_all_star_23@yahoo.com thanks and peace...
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Reviewed By: KenshinsAngel On: August 12, 2004 16:07 EDT
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i loved ur latest chapter to ur story i hope to see a new one soon
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Reviewed By: jodibetz On: August 12, 2004 11:43 EDT
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The fic is great, don't stop...
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Reviewed By: Nguardian On: August 12, 2004 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey 'Old Lady' how are things going? I really don't think you should take it to heart if not that many reviews are given. Sometimes it's hard to express how good a story is. Plus I don't think many know about the site. However, I loved this story, normally alternate pairings don't appeal to me, but his one was really well done, and I firmly believe that you should continue it. All us faithful readers will definitely appreciate it. Hope that those of us that reviewed can be enough to change your mind. Until your next update (crosses fingers in hopes of a next chapter). Later.
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