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Title: HI THERE!!! Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:34 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As usual another totally beyong magnificent chapter. I hope all is well with you and all us reader are readily awaiting all that you still have up your sleeve for this story. Thank you soooo much for writing such a wonderful piece. Take care...your 150 review fann!!! woohoo!!! ^0^!!
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Reviewed By: the evil one On: October 23, 2005 05:21 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: okay the reason i gave those ratings is because this is the first fanfic that i have ever read and wanted to continue it. it never bored me and i love the way you write it. if maybe you can email me when you have a new chapter up. ripleyhoward@hotmail.com please. if not thats okay as well. hope your doin okay and thanks for such a good story. I thourghly enjoy every word of it.
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Title: catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai) Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 01:57 EDT Comment/Review: Poor Kenshin and Misao....Poor Kenshin can never cut a break....Was not expecting Misao to act like that though...who would have thought...laughs....love this story but I think you already know that....
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Title: Untitled Reviewed By: cede On: September 08, 2005 13:24 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Iluv this story i read it over and over again, i was one of da people who read it since it was written, please update, i check back every now n then 2 see if you did. U left us wanting more, please please pplleeaassee update! Lubb ~Cede
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Reviewed By: msky On: August 23, 2005 08:22 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ooohhhhhhhhhhh! I love this fic. I also think it's hlarious how u paired aoushi with karou and kenshin with misao. i love kenshin's and aoushi's sarcastic bad boy characters. BTW, can saitou make an appearance puhleees? (puppy eyes) ORO! LOL, update soon!
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Title: write update Reviewed By: allleeezzzzzz On: August 11, 2005 17:28 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yayayayayayayyayayayayayayayayay i luv your story.......geuss wat its in my favourites..pwleeze keep on writing its the first kenshin fan fic i read and i really like it..yay...lol
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Reviewed By: Blood_fae On: July 29, 2005 03:50 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy this story. The characters are fun an interesting, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 02:59 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. The fifth chapter was the last time, I think. Sorry! But my computer died, and so we got a new one, then all sorts of stuff happened (family issues, but we're dealing) and I completely forgot about this entire site, let alone this story. But I'm back and I have to say that I absolutely love the recent chapters (for me, that would be chapter 6 and up, lol). Your work is excellent, as always, and I really hope you are able to get another chapter out soon. Sorry for the short review, but it's 3 in the morning so I've already stayed up way later than I should have reading this, and I have a huge, really important End of Course Test tomorrow (today?) that is 15% of my grade. (It's summer school. The family issues messed with my grades, and Biology is a difficult subject for me anyways and so I managed to fail. *sigh*) Whoops, I'm blabbering on and on and I really need to go do my homework and then get some sleep. Again, it was wonderful reading your work and I hope you can update soon!
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Reviewed By: garbage On: May 28, 2005 11:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: gosh, i have'nt read a fic that is so close to reality yet very chimerical. keep up the good work.
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Title: WOW!!! Reviewed By: AngelAngel On: May 14, 2005 13:19 EDT Comment/Review: Rather deep this chapter is ... you're keeping me on the edge of my seat with the plot. Looking forward to your next chapter. All the best and many blessing to you & your family. Take care : )
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Title: Chapter 13=GREAT!!! Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 11:13 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the new chapter....I had a feeling that was going to happen with Sou and Nina. Anyway, still loving your story and my heart goes out to you and your family!!! Take care!!!
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Title: Chapter Thirteen Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 09:01 EDT Comment/Review: I suppose it would have been better if I reviewed Ch 13 on Friday the 13th...oh well. Great job with this chapter. I love that it focused on Aoshi and explained his motivation for doing what he does. Soujiro was a little prick, glad Aoshi strangled some sense into him! Kaoru was a sweetheart as usual and I enjoy seeing the love between her and Aoshi because I adore both of their characters. She's sweet and Aoshi is brooding and sexy. There was a lot of action in this chapter. It was great to see Aoshi foil Soujiro's attempts to rob him, I really got a kick out of that! The Shishio Yumi scene was nice as well. They have a really twisted relationship, just like in the series. But its kind of sweet because they really do love one another. Yumi is a nice person, but her love for Shishio...or Karl I guess, often blinds her. I'm glad she's opened her eyes! Fantastic job here! Sorry to hear your brain dried up on ideas for your vampire fic, I loved Aoshi's character in that...hehe. Geez...I'm totally obsessed with him and you write him so well! I love that you give him so much depth!
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Title: Welcome Back! Reviewed By: Caskas Lyrik [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 12:36 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Welcome back! Awesome come-back chapter! I like how you are slowly introducing all of the characters from RK. You got to see how Aoshi really feels about his father more so than the other chapters...Another Brilliant chapter as always! Update when you get a chance and I hope everything is going well with your personal life! I will keep you and your family in my prayers =D
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Title: :)))))))))))))))))) Reviewed By: MEGASUPER [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 10:55 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HELLO BABY!ANOTHER GREAT STORY!I HOPE EVERYTHING IS ALLRIGHT IN YOUR LIFE NOW!YOU DESERVE NOTHING BUT THE BEST AND WE ALL DO LOVE YOU AND YOU CAN COUNT ON OUR SUPPORT AND FRIENDSHIP! NOW ABOUT THE NEW CHAPTER: OOOOO MY GOD!GREAT GREAT GREAT!IF THERE ARE WORDS TO EXPRESS MY ADMIRATION OF YOU, AND THE HAPPINESS THAT EVERY CHAPTER OF THE STORY BRINGS TO ME,THEN IM SAYING THE WORDS!GOD BLESS YOU AND EVERY PERSON CLOSE TO YOUR HEART! ps:OH, AND CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Tameka On: May 12, 2005 19:18 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved it..it was soo worth the wait....thoes this chapter mean that ur family is doing ok...hope it means more chaps soon.... UPDATE SOON....loved it
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