| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: I. LOVE. THIS. STORY.
Reviewed By: drop it to de floor On: August 18, 2008 09:24 EDT
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OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY. THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY IN THE ENTIRE WORLD. PLEEEEAASSSEEE finish it i cried when i saw that u didnt. please i love this story so much! and you could actually make this into a book you know... i know i'd buy it, and my sister, and her friend. so thats like 3...but there are probably like 234823984239842734 other people who love it =] please finish it :(
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Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never guess, that Aoshi x Kaoru and Kenshin x Misao would be a good pairing and a really fit couple each other. While I found that Aoshi x Kaoru is romantic couple and I really like them, I think i like Misao x Kenshin better. They're funny, wild, passionate and so much fun than Aoshi x Kaoru pairing. Could you write more about Kenshin x Misao , cause I really like them. Kenshin's Character although OOC, it really suit him. He's even sexier than Aoshi. I hope you will write the happy ending, include the happy ending for Yumi x Shishio. Poor Yumi… oh, and i feel this story is a bit like pretty Woman movie, but because it's romantic, i will not complain for that ^^
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Reviewed By: dangerously obsessed On: October 15, 2007 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! I'm miserable and I've had enough of waiting for you to continue with the story. I want to know how it continues or ends, either is fine, just update! I know the story doesn't end in letters "TBC", it's bubbling on in that head of yours and I BEG for you to type it down and upload... Give me more of this joy, please.
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Title: Where are you?
Reviewed By: anita25 On: October 13, 2007 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aye...I have been waiting for an update for this story for over a year...Are you going to continue to write the story? Please, please, please let me know... Thank you and God bless, Anita
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Reviewed By: KeAndrea On: June 21, 2007 22:20 EDT
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Oh, please write more! You said there were only a few more chapters left, so please finish this story. I love it! It is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! And I've read a lot of fnafics....
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Title: Nudge...
Reviewed By: MiraResQNU [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've had this one on my favorites for a while now, excited by how much I love the style and complexity and embarrassed about how much I love the smut (the sex is... yeah). I kept hoping you would update sometime soon but I see now that it's time for me to wave my magic wand- of begging. PLEASE update this story soon! It's entirely too addictive and I MUST know what Shishio is planning! The Kaoru/Aoshi pairing is an unexpected hit for me; I can't wait for more! How dare you leave such a clever, erotic, compelling, action-packed fic like this for so long! You should be ashamed ^_^ So please don't abandon this fic- too many of us are counting on you for our fix. (I can only go back and read the old chapters so many times...) Very sincerely, Mira
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Reviewed By: SeaRhapsody [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 12:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just love your story! You have some amazing characterization going there! It really pulls you in!
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Reviewed By: ehu On: September 06, 2006 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story! i hope that you will be able to continue such a great masterpiece!
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Title: please update!!!!!
Reviewed By: Omg Its KT On: July 08, 2006 19:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to finish the story!!! i usually dont ask, but i've noticed that you've left everyone hanging for a LONG while. Now,please this is a really good fic and i have to KNOW what happens till the end!!!!!!! please update SOON!! I'm coming back to check!
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Title: When are you gunna update????
Reviewed By: Angel170384 On: July 06, 2006 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you gunna freakin update? I want to know what the crap happens.
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Title: Grrrrr
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 08:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the biggest cliff hanger I have ever seen! I have been waiting for the next chapter will they get her back in the fold or will they die or get injured I have to know. PLEASE UPDATE. Also I am trying to find someone to at least view my fic and tell me if I should continue it. I have 2 chapters, but I have 7 more not yet typed. I just want some feedback so I know if my story is liked out there, it's called Angelus Bloodlust someone check it out please.
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Reviewed By: chibilee On: March 22, 2006 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's been a long time for me. i'm a fan of your works. it's just that life (and messed up computer) kept me from reading ur fics. since i finally got a notebook i can get here and catch up on ur works. i still enjoy black hawke. one of my favorites. like the kenshin and misao coupling. they're great together. i hope u are doing well now. please know that if i had known sooner that i would've join the others in wishing u the best in your time of need. i give u my best in the future. again, i just wanna say that i'm loving the fic. i'm hopefully back and will continue to look for updates from u. n expect reviews from me from now on. keep up the great work!
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Title: SWEET!!!
Reviewed By: Pip! On: March 21, 2006 11:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sweet, I'm so glad things turned out this way...I might change my mind once Shishio enters the picture, but what the hell, right? Not like it's gonna stop me from reading. :P Keep it up, honey. :P
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Title: OMIGOD! SO CUTE!!!
Reviewed By: Pip! On: March 21, 2006 10:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't like that he spanked her and got away with it, but the ending patched things up just fine. ;;) And here I thought I'd never enjoy a Kenshin/Misao pairing. :P
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Title: MUST...READ...MORE...
Reviewed By: Pip! On: March 20, 2006 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Won't say much...rushing to read more... ;P
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