| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 18:03 EST
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Wow, nice chapter. It's so cute Kenshin and Misao
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Reviewed By: Evil DM On: March 19, 2005 11:22 EST
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I discovered this story at about eight AM on Saturday, and sat here, reading the damn thing straght through. I can't say I've found many fics that are in the same league as this. I'm normally not much for this pairing, but I've found I enjoy your twist on it. The plot is amazing, and entirely plausable, which makes it a real pleasure to read. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not going to let you not finish this. Damn good job.
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Title: ; )
Reviewed By: AngelAngel On: March 19, 2005 07:31 EST
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Aoshi is so whipped (hee hee whip cream) and Kenshi is acting like a caveman on a full moon (ha ha ha .... i like ... grins like mad). Won't A/K get a "noisy" surprise when they get back (those 4 people just look so cute together ... and like opposite attracts). It's so ad that Aoshi is scarred by his past to say those words ... but when he does i'm sure it will be all the more sweeter to Kaoru (more scene on them pls). Love the interactio between K/M it's so funny. You are totally going down as one of my most fav writer. Looking forward to your next chpt. It's great to you are enjoying your writing coz it shows in the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ...... On: March 17, 2005 02:04 EST
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I didn't feel old until the cartoons I watched as a kid appeared as "Old School" on Nickelodeon. Anyway, I love the banter between Kenshin and Misao, sure, his staying around is sweet but I say he should stay wtih Misao for comic relieve. Meanwhile, I dislike Aoshi's inner struggle; I don't like seeing him hurt like that but his answer was good...yeah. ^.^ I loved this chapter as much as I do the rest--though I wished it was a A/K scene at the end...but...I still enjoyed it and I can't wait tell more! And don't feel old, just switch the numbers around on your age--except for the ages like mine (instead of 18 I'd be 81 ^.^;;;). Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: catti-dono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 23:08 EST
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LAUGHS; dont read AFF review; this baka was a baka; Im so glad that you went with your heart on this...screw the flames, koishi, this is what you wanted and you did it...does it not feel good?
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Reviewed By: tameka On: March 16, 2005 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i say anymore?...my ratings speak for themselves....i read two of ur fics on fanfic.net..Bad kid and Do you?....i was hoping for more Aoshi/Kaoru or even Soujiro and his sis in this chap but the develpement of Mi/Ken relationship was a good subsitute...i liked the chap...keep it up....
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: March 16, 2005 17:32 EST
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Hmm, this was an interesting one Mangetsu-san. I don't really know what to think of the M/K pairing, it tasted a bit different on my tongue, heeheeheehee. Do you not like Misao-channy? Idk...it sounds to me that you don't like her! Demo, the chapter was top-quality as usual! Kepp up the awesome work master-of-lemons!
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Title: Awesome Chapter!
Reviewed By: Caskas Lyrik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Chapter...just so you know I am Oneida..I just got an account so I will review under this name =) I am glad you got an idea from my previous review! This chapter was great as usual...nothing but the best comes from your writing! I am glad there was a break from Kay and Aoshi and I was wondering when there was going to be a chapter where Kenshin/Misao hooked up. The way you have created new personalities for character already with a typical "Personality" (If that makes sense) is wonderful and innovating! Please don't take that long to update this time...I was in agony waiting for another chapter ;) Take Care!
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Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter!i revied at the other site!but i soo wanted to review here too!i like where the story is going(mmm where is it going?)i like it anyway!please update soon and good luck
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Reviewed By: Sarah-chan On: March 16, 2005 13:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOO GOOD. oh man keshin was soo mean but soo sweet, i was soo happy for misao and kenshin, it was soo passionate *keeps rambling abt how much of a writer u are*
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Title: Awesome Chapter!
Reviewed By: Caskas Lyrik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Chapter...just so you know I am Oneida..I just got an account so I will review under this name =) I am glad you got an idea from my previous review! This chapter was great as usual...nothing but the best comes from your writing! I am glad there was a break from Kay and Aoshi and I was wondering when there was going to be a chapter where Kenshin/Misao hooked up. The way you have created new personalities for character already with a typical "Personality" (If that makes sense) is wonderful and innovating! Please don't take that long to update this time...I was in agony waiting for another chapter ;) Take Care!
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Reviewed By: Sa-chan-708 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 16:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story...keep up teh good work
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Reviewed By: tameka On: February 25, 2005 12:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH, great fic...it's the best Aoshi/Kaoru pairing i've ever read.....can't wait to see what happens with Sou and his sister..im sure their gonna bounce up with Aoshi and Kaoru....i loved how u changed up the characters to suit their scenerios, it's the best OOC i've ever come across...Your one of my fav authurs and this is just another story that has keep u on top of my list.....i started reading this story with 10 full chaps so that's how im now reviewing...on't worry i'll review again....see yuh next chap....
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: February 23, 2005 22:11 EST
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Bravo! Heh. Another very cute chapter :) The plot is advancing really well! ^^ Aww now I have to wait for another chapter to come out... That's okay though I will just have to suck it up and wait! lol I'll catcha later!
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: February 23, 2005 21:09 EST
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Hey!! Aww this was such a cute chapter! Oh hyena Misao... Well I have to go read more! Great job as always!
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