| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: glasclach On: January 15, 2005 03:24 EST
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Tsuki-san! I'm sorry I didn't review for ch. 9, it wouldn't let me for some reason. I loved this chapter. I don't usually go for Kenshin/Misao, but I think you'll make it work - I like it so far! I like your Kenshin, although he reminds me more of Sano, but I love that he and Aoshi are so close and that Kenshin is still a strong character. I like that 'Aoshi' is coming out more too, which began in the last chapter; seeing Kaoru and AOSHI settle into a relationship is grand. Hope your holiday was a wonderful one!
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Reviewed By: ...... On: January 12, 2005 18:24 EST
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Sorry for not reviewing earlier! TIme hbad been a hastle, but I enjoyed taking time to read this. Kenshin and Misao's argument was cool, and I really enjoyed it. And Aoshi buying ther house Kaoru and Misao live in was also cool, especially with him dishing out the money to fix it up. And finally, the conversation with Kaoru's ex-boss, I really enjoyed that. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon please.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: ShioriShikaKaze On: January 10, 2005 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! This is so good! Uh...it's Jan 10, just started reading it...I'm gonna review every chappie b-c...uh...I just do. *Wow I'm slow* anyways, keep up the good work *how common* -_- Byes! ~*~ShioriKaze
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Reviewed By: Blondie B-Ball Star On: January 10, 2005 18:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Ok I OMG can u say I HATE media miner.. Ok I went to review so it tells me I have to be signed in... ok I sign in (Which means I open up and ACCOUNT just to review this one fic).. and it WON'T let me review at all... ok I was SOOO mad... But now suddenly I get on the Yahoo group thinking man I should try it one more time and poof I get to review... Sorry HAD to get that off my chest... whew... OK now for the review.... I LOVE it... No I mean LOVE... I prolly won't like it if u have weasel girl and Kenshin since I still have a little soft soft for the playboy... I must admit I do Kenshin/Kaoru fanfics... But no matter what I STILL will LOVE Your story.. even if u suddenly kill Kaoru.. it might not be as enjoyable for me to read.. but that is how much I LOVE you story!!! Your story is just SOO fantastic it's actually one that I will leave a HUGE review for.. See your type of fanfics are the ones I look up to.. The ones I try to write like... but alas it will never be so I am stuck reading and enjoying fanfics like yours.. :) And believe me I LIKE reading fanfics like yours. Now on to questions... Ok she is working as a secretary, is their going to be any drama like some other guy hitting on her? I like that type of drama but you are the author so I shouldn't really talk.. Umm PLEASE update soon... I know I knowI am asking a lot.. and please add me on the update notifier I REALLY apreciate it. AND I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING SOONER. Peace Blondie
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Title: me!!!!
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER here [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 14:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IM REGISTERED BUT I HAVE A PROBLEM SO MY NICK FOR NOW IS 'MEGASUPER HERE' TILL THE PROBLEM IS FIXED!AS I PROMISED I REVIEW HERE TOO!THE NEW CHAPTER IS GREAT(I MUST USE OTHER WORD SOON THIS IS REPEATING AND REPEATING!GORGEOUS MAYBE???I DONT KNOW!MY DICTIONARY IS A LITTLE OFF:)) THE DIALOGE BETWEEN KENSHIN AND KISAO WAS VERY FUNNY!I LIKED IT A LOT!I'M SURE THEY WILL END UP TOGETHER!WONT THEY?:))BUT WITH YOU IS ALWAYS UNPREDICTABLE!AND THATS EXACTLY WHAT I LIKE IN THE STORY A LOT!ARE YOU PLANING A LOVE TRIANGLE???I LOVE THEM SOO VERY MUCH!:))))OK TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!GOOD LUCK!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 16:05 EST
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I love this fic! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: December 11, 2004 20:55 EST
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Aoshi isnt a schizo is he?!?!? LOL, just kidding. Loved it Mangetsu...and the lemons are back and sourer(is that even a word?) then ever!
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER On: December 11, 2004 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE GREAT!DID I TELL YOU THAT!THE CHAPTER IS AMAZING!!!(WELL LIKE ALL THE PREVIOUS)THE WAY YOU TWIST EVERYTHING AND WRITE SOO GOOD!OMG!A REALLY GREAT STORY!AOSHI AND KENSHIN BEST FRIENDS?WOW!THAT WOULD BE GOOD!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!GOOD LUCK!THANKS^_^^
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: December 10, 2004 20:00 EST
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Aha! Yay it's me again! Haha! Well yes see I've been busy lately so I haven't been able to check out this fic... But I see that it's updated! So hurrah! Haha! Anyway great as always :) Aoshi was, dare I say it, cute in this chapter! Aww yeah... Well at least that's what I thought :P Can't wait to see more! The plotline is just so intense now o.o
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Reviewed By: ...... On: December 10, 2004 14:39 EST
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Okay, I got it now, I thought it was Yumi. ^.^; But this chapter...it was really nice, wtih Aoshi and Kaoru telling each other their names and all. It was totally sweet how she accepted him and all. Really, really sweet, in fact, if it wasn;t for the fact I was eating candy now I say it would've caused my sweet tooth to be satisfied. ^.^ But it was a nice additive to the mix. And Kenshin being there was also cool, two gnag bosses and their friends? That's a nice twist, especially sense Kenshin's a pervert. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this chapter, and I hope you can update soon! And, as for traffic, I'm proud to say I've never gotten stuck in LA traffic, as whenever we go to southern CA we go around LA and through the desert.
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Excellent writing and I love the character development Aoshi is going through. I feel so bad for the poor baby. Please more. More. (when you can =)
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: December 09, 2004 16:40 EST
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Screams out loud...Grabs BelleDayNight by the hands and jumps up and down in pure glee while both of us hum a lulliby....giggles
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Reviewed By: Sephress On: November 28, 2004 00:42 EST
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Oh yes I finally got around to reading this and I was so happy to see all the new characters. The intro to the villians was great. I don't know why, but I love villians. Whenever we do plays or aloud reading in school, I always take the part of the villan. (I spose its my inner nature mwhahaha) But yes, plot = good. Tho I admit I missed the citrus. It's just not Tsuki-san without the lemon! keep up the awesome work, Tsuki! Sephiress
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Reviewed By: Razz On: November 24, 2004 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fan-freakin-tastic! I loved this latest chapter, and as always, I was completely sucked in by your vivid descriptions. Your take on the relationship between Shishio and Yumi was fun to read about, and I was happy for more information on what the Pack is really all about. Kenshin's role was quite interesting as well - I wasn't expecting the turn you took with him. This was a very well developted chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: twishinky-san On: November 22, 2004 19:13 EST
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Hi sweetie!!!!! another great job!!! I've been back in the philippines (i'm not new guinean... although that made me laugh quite a bit...mistaken identities?) for about a month and I'm glad you wrote updates, even if I'm still lost within my own writer's block. *sigh* I wish i could get back in the game, but these things take time... Anyway... it was a great POV... I never considered Shishio to be human, though, now that was another shocker. Take Care, dear girl :)
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