| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 14:36 EST
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Woo-hoo! That was an absolutely AWSOME chapter! So much suspense though! I really want to know, most of all, who exactly the twins are?! Well, anyway, please update again when you can, your fabulous plot and story in general is very captivating and I really need more...:) MUST HAVE MORE!! (When you have time that is...rushing could be very bad for the plot.)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 14:36 EST
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Woo-hoo! That was an absolutely AWSOME chapter! So much suspense though! I really want to know, most of all, who exactly the twins are?! Well, anyway, please update again when you can, your fabulous plot and story in general is very captivating and I really need more...:) MUST HAVE MORE!! (When you have time that is...rushing could be very bad for the plot.)
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Title: Beautiful Miscommunications
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:42 EST
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I cannot believe you killed Kagura o.0...They chapter was going so well too..you just love messing with us, don't you!?!!
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 18:51 EST
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NOOOOOO! NOT KAGURA!!!*tears* What the HELL happened?! OMG I'm not going to be able to sleep tonight! THANKS ALOT!!!! lol It was a great chapter! I just really didnt like how the ending turned out...I mean I liked it!...Its just...I didnt...Does that makes scense? Oh well, I'm shutting up now! Woderful chapter! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 03, 2005 18:30 EST
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True, have to be glad that Kagome is alive but, at the same time it seems a shame they killed Kagura after Sesshomaru had actually begun to get attached to her... So mnay miysteries, I look forwards to finding out the answers. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: March 03, 2005 16:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeay thanks for the new chapter =D
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Reviewed By: Caprix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 18:24 EST
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I love the intrigue in your story. You let us think we're getting a hang of who the characters are and then *wham*, new development! ^_^ It's really keeping us on our toes! I'm also impressed with the way you pay attention to the fact that Inuyasha's part inu-youkai and that he's instinctively courting Kagome. Nice touch. Oh, by the way, chapter 5's formatting's messed up. Just thought you'd like to know that someone's actually reading your revised chapters! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Happy Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:05 EST
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On chapter 10 you were talking about a story on ff.net you lost track of. I read the story too so here's the title and who it's by: "Helping Hands" by Wendigo. Update this fic soon; it's awesome! ^_^
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness *not logged in* On: February 16, 2005 03:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is...so...amazingly good...It keeps me interested the whole time, nice phrasing, interesting plot, and just plain awesome. The only complaint I have is that I wanna read more. So please update soon!
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Reviewed By: PrncessS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....really good!! I just read the whole thing in one sitting, and now my eyes are killing me but it was worth it! Very original story, lots of mystery and plot twists and also just plain fun stuff. Very well written; I love it! Please update soon, I hope you haven't stopped working on this story! =)
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Title: Like a thirties radio drama
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he he the little blurbs at the end are funny, to me even if they arn't intended to be. I am far beyond impressed with this. I figured it had to be something when i saw that it already had like a hundred and fifty reviews and only been visitied about six thousend times I uselly see it take at least ten thousand visites before a fic brakes the one hundred review mark. So I was figuring this one was going to be good. Well I've put this on my fav fic's list so I'll not miss the next update. Fantastic story line, I'll be waiting for more.
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Reviewed By: ihateyoupeople On: January 15, 2005 02:46 EST
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I love your stories! keep up the good work ^________^
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Reviewed By: serendith (not signed in) On: January 14, 2005 22:37 EST
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I love how you write InuYasha! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Title: that was cool!
Reviewed By: I am Helium!!!!! On: January 14, 2005 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Q('_') *knock* *knock* Hellow? Is anyone there? I LOVED THE CHAPTER!! I LOVED THE STORY!!! By the way...I'm not real... i'm just a figment of YOUR imagination! MUAHAhAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 21:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool, just finished 12th chapter, getting better by the letter..... hey i rhymed..... kool.... over and out
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