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Title: Oooh...elevator
Reviewed By: AirashiiKuraku On: October 19, 2004 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, all tens. I can guarantee you from experience, work and school get in the way of everything. Hell, I'm suprised if I nearly pass a Pre-calculas test. To date, I've failed each test. Damn people that have no time but to go "Hmm...I wonder if I graph this...it'll be a leaf! I shall call it...FACTORIALS!"...Damn them to hell I say! On a lighter note, I really like this. It's very unpredictable without making me wonder what the hell is going on. And I demand more fluff! That's believable of course.
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Reviewed By: Squishy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i was busy with school they just keep piling work. when im finished with one they they go 'suprise!' and pop out something else. i'm slowing down alittle but labs are a killer plus with other classes who decided 'hey lets give her hw everyday even though she already spends (what?) 7 hours in school doing only work with a lunch break only 45min which is spent doing work too! intstead of eating' yea.. i got to read this it was great but i didnt get a chance to read the chapter before (boy you are the queen of updates =P) well i'll try over the weekend but i dont know.. my moms making me excersise (this girl's getting fat right here lol and tall girls arent always seen as fat so it looks really weird..... yea i'll try my best but i'll keep looking out for the chapters, sorry for the lack of reviews from me =( --Irene
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Title: Meow!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say you are improving on your writing style so much. *sniff* *sniff* They grow up so fast. You write so much more detailed fics. Though I am sad to say that it is a bitter sweet moment. Why? O_O I...I... I wasn't ready for a lime/lemon scene yet!! But it was still good. So whatever, as you know you rock! I am seriously proud of you, although it sounds stupid, I seriously am. Unlike in The Ad, you are showing character developement. You are showing their relationship developement too, and what-not. Yea! I think you get it. Well anyways, I love you and you rock. Can't wait for the next chappy! ^_^ P.S. School is seriously a killer.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so we can assume that Sesshoumaru has claimed Kagura, now how long will it take for Inuyasha and Kagome to work things out?
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 18, 2004 17:50 EDT
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Absolutely fantastic chapter! Sorry, work is getting to be a pain, big project coming up so time is limited...^_^; I have to say the moment with Kagome hoping for her knight in shining armour and Inuyasha showing up almost had me in tears, that was very very funny! Excellent moments between Sango and Miroku, nice to see their relationship progressing so well... Sesshomaru and Kagura...I just knew it was coming. Nice way to keep them busy while someone infiltrates the building, wonder what will happen if daddy finds out... Ok, got to go. Sorry all the reviews won't be this long, or longer...not much of a thank you for all your hard work is it? Sorry. On a final note, still stick in the ladies dressing room from the other story, haven't made it back to this one. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot whether or not I reviewed your story before. Great story. I like the plot alot.
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Title: excellent!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:14 EDT
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Oh, that was good! Too bad you didn't elaborate on the motorcycle with InuYasha. I can't wait to read more Inu/Kag fun.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:05 EDT
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well... (fans self) that scene could certainly have been more citrusy. although i did enjoy the beginning of it. i hope for a little more detail, ne? i love this story and i can't wait for more between inu and kago-chan. (panting) inuyasha... on a motorcycle wearing leather.... (thoughts wonder off...)
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Reviewed By: skne On: October 18, 2004 15:32 EDT
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Marvelous, quite marvelous. I'm loving the relationship between Miroku and Sango. Also, Inu Yash is quite adorable (although, is there ever a time he isn't?). Well written as always. Looking forward to the next Chap.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 18, 2004 15:26 EDT
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Love it!!!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 15:10 EDT
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"Now Sango, you have spent the entire day following me around. It's obvious you've been trying to work up enough courage to ask me to dinner, so I'm going to make it easy on you." That line had me falling out of my seat laughing! *Grr* for the cliffie though - that was just cruel! That scene was hot and to cut it off like that ... I haven't the words!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 13, 2004 23:26 EDT
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serious lime duh =P tho if its a really good cliffie then that too...as long as u update soon lol =D great chapter. i adore the story!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 13, 2004 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so addicting! like The Ad!!! ahhh! hahahah i absolutely love your story if you can't tell... you never dissapoint me! i'm so happy =] >hands pocky< hmmmm and you put... Ch. 3: The Kidnap ... when it's suposed to be Ch. 4: The Kidnap by the way. awsome chapter! i'd rather have.... a serious lime! hahaha i can't wait for chapter 5!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the plot. Very interesting. Keep the updates comin'...
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 13, 2004 19:16 EDT
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Sorry, I appear to have developed a Ryoga like sense of direction and am presently unable to find my way out...so it's not just because of the girls ^_^ Excellent chapter! The little moments between Kagome and Inuyasha and Miroku and Sango were perfect. I can't help but wonder if and when their relationships will go further. I suspect that Kagome isn't just a reporter...that last part already raised suspicions as to her other occupation... Cliffhanger...hmmm...well there do seem to be a lot of them but it does make the story more fun. With regards to a hint of lime, depends on who's involved. Look forwards to the next chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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