| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wren On: October 21, 2004 21:37 EDT
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I'm liking this more with every chapter, now that I can kind of see where you are going with this. It is a little darker than TRCL and the Ad. Plus I really like the way you've characterized Miroku in this story. Of course, that's not to say I'm not dying to see LCL. Wren
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 20:37 EDT
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Blackmail! You can't kill Kagome! ... well you can - that is it is within your power but ... but ... bah. ;) I have to say *ewww!* to the brother/sister thing ... twisted and interesting but - EWWW!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 21, 2004 19:46 EDT
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First I am going to say that that was an absolutely excellent chapter, once again. Second, before I get in ear shot the males, I am going to say that if you intend for Kagome to die, then I for one won't stand in the way...so long as you promise to bring her back afterwards. I will admit, quickly, that I liked the part with the doodle of Inuyasha, I found that rather amusing. Like the way the plot is going, more intriguing with each part. Ok, thats all from me for now, I think the guys will be too busy dealing with the girls so I should be safe there, at least for now... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that was a very enjoyable chapter. I found it very funny and hot to picture inuyasha in spandex. I'm just odd like that to laugh at that. Anyways it was a very interesting and good chapter. It seemed short though. Oh Well! And how can you kill off Kagome (don't answer that). Its just that the entire story would pretty much die because she is practically the center of conflict. Overall it was awesome I don't want to write to much and bore so I won't go into detail on what I really like in the story.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 21, 2004 15:14 EDT
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how many times do i need to review so that kagome doesnt die? and if you've already figured out a way for her to die then will my review have any affect on that? great story. i really love it. here's to hoping kag lives...mm inu in spandex =P
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 21:19 EDT
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more, more, more, more! Write more!! Lemon, lime, whatever!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 19, 2004 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome chapter! i just reviewed on ff.net! well another cliffhanger... a gun to inuyasha's head! >dun dun dun with thunder in background< lol awsome job again! i love your work, keep up the work!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was a fast update! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 21:54 EDT
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Miroku maybe? hmmm ... I wonder what Sango would do if she knew what Kagome and her people were up to! Fantastic chapter! Update soon! :)
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: 1Miroku On: October 19, 2004 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I already wrote a review and it was longer but I lost it so I will just cut to the chase. You rock! Love you! Can't wait for the next chapter. I think you spelt Kanna wrong by the way, thats the only reason you have a seven for spelling & grammar. P.S. I wonder how long your new account will last for this time. ^_^ Peace and love dude! Chow! One more thing did you just make up all that stuff about all the secruity stuff and generator stuff or did you really research it. Either way it sounds all scientific and real so whatever! (wow this review is too long...SORRY!)
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 19:50 EDT
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so interesting!! great job!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 19, 2004 18:47 EDT
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Fantastic chapter, sorry but this is going to be one of thsoe short reviews I spoke about. Ok, left and a...oh...er...got to run, seems I turned the wrong way...bye! Good luck & best wsihes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not stop laughing at the Miroku/Sango car scene. That was too funny. It always tickles me when he acts so serious and makes people feel bad. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 09:06 EDT
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You should know I'm never too busy to review! I got nothing to do but sit around the house, read fanfics, draw, and write. Oh yes and talk on the phone...very rare...(
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 19, 2004 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've just come back from reviewing this chap on ff.net, and i'm extremely happy that you're back on ff.net! yay! all thanks to FrameOfMind that i know of this... it seems those little details that you editted out make the scene a whole heck hotter! hahahah, awsome chapter once i again! i'm totally addicted to your writing! ahh i might need a doctor... ok maybe i'm not that obssessed... i can't wait for chapter 6! and i forgot to mention that you don't seem to accept anonymous reviews? just wondering why... well great, you never let me down!!
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