| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Title: another great fic! ^_^
Reviewed By: smittin kittin (nlo) On: October 26, 2004 23:56 EDT
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What can i say...ur writing another amazing story! i'm intrigued by the layers of this fic & love how complex ur making the characters. as a reader it's nice 2 see depth of characters Kagura is especially interesting possibly because she is such an underanalysed character. thanks 4 the long chap! can't wait 4 the next update! smooches kittin!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 26, 2004 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo a kiss! it's not going to have some person ruining right in the begining of the chapter is it?? hahaha well i understand how the kagome thing wasn't a threat and you have a reason... hmmm i'd vote for kagome staying alive! aka miraculously coming back to life :P awsome chapter again! brings up the urge to read the next chapter..... love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o0oo0 looove this story...cant wait to read more!!! ^_^ nice job!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 19:35 EDT
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I didn't find the chapter slow at all. I enjoyed that Inuyasha and Kagome actually spent some time together and conversed, Adrenaline isn't really a godd basis for an ongoing relationship.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 26, 2004 17:41 EDT
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*Staggers in looking rather brusied and battered* I'm fine! I'm fine! Nothing a few months of bed rest won't cure... Loved the chapter, really fantastic. Interesting how you delved into Kagura's relationship with the other incarnations and the interactions with Naraku. Inuyasha and Kagome was a master piece though. I like how you are forming their relationship, slowly working down the barriers they have put in place to keep people out and allowing their relationship to form. In answer to your question I would think bringing her back to life would be the prefered option. If she dies and stays that way it would add a sad note to the story and I have to admit I have always liked a happy ending. Up to you in the end, eprhaps bring her back after the fighting is concluded, a last wish from the jewel? Ok, enough now. Better stop before I dig myself into a bigger hole...funny, when did the lights go out... KAMI-SAMA NO! Er...it appears I've managed to end up back in the girls dressing room...can somebody call an amabulance. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: *is going to kill rin*
Reviewed By: kogura_gurl80 On: October 26, 2004 16:55 EDT
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Wow! What a great chapter! I dont normally review but seeing as how your my favorite I'll make an exception...I love how you have portrayed kogura in you storries she is so miss understood and many people make her seam so evil. I have found few who dont but still. I love your work, and i hope you can update soon! -bye- PS:probably wont review for a while
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: October 26, 2004 16:02 EDT
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*does a happy dance* love this amazing story...yeah you do sound like you know what your talking about. great job! have i seen who?
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Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow it was good, I don't know why I'm surprised though. I can't believe your actually serious about killing off Kagome. LOL! Thats very interesting; but since you asked I think that if you kill her, she should stay dead, unless we just think she's dead and she actually isn't or something like that. No ghost though because thats just lame. I'm very impressed with how much you know and that you actually remembered all that stuff. SUGOI!(Cool!) P.S. With a few of the spelling mistakes in the chapter I got confused and had to do some rereading, thats why I rated it a seven. And it was worth the wait. Oh yea, what are your reasons for not going into details with Kago and Inu? (Not that I am complaining...BELIEVE me I'm not.)
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Title: hiya
Reviewed By: lilbunnylulu On: October 26, 2004 01:11 EDT
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well its an awesome story, but sometimes i get very confused and have no idea what's going on because so much is happening at once. The story quickly shifts form one thing to another s sometimes i wind up lost, but its very detailed and u must have done ALOt of research for this story which i applaud u on *starts clapping* Anyways, its an awesome story and hope you update asap ^.~ *~*lilbunnylulu*~*
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Title: Gomen nasai! (I'm sorry)
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I have already reviewed for this chapter, I am writing this to tell to you congrats about the fanfiction award thingy. I must admitt I do feel responsible for you not winning because I forgot about voting after a while. I'M SO SORRY! Oh well, congrats on being runner up. *although you did deserve coming in first*
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: October 24, 2004 11:11 EDT
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I got grounded from the computer! So yeah thats the reason I havent reviewed...and might I add that your story is progressing very nicely...I wish to say that you rock and to please keep up the wounderful cliffhangers! I will be back as soon as my evil parents unlock my account...I am currently on my mothers which she had forgoten to log out of before she went to work. So, yeah I'm going to go before i get caught. All my friends love your work and they are looking forward to a new chapter so even though I'm grounded they still will read...though most refuse to review(those basterds) but I love them anyway so please update, if not for me for then for them...cuz some of them do review! rin_sama@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is REALLY awesome! i read most of ur other fics and i just adore them! this fic is not like another i've read...its usually inu. being the one with the bad pass but this one has blown my mind away. so creative and original! keep up the good work and keep on writing!:D toodles~~
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (wont let me login) On: October 22, 2004 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She may only die if Yash brings her back cuz if she dies and the story just ends i swear i will hunt you down and destroy your computer and make sure you are never able to buy a new one. I can do it i have connections with the software companies!!!! (Just Kidding but i will be never read your stories again if she does really die... or atleast never review.)
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Reviewed By: you know On: October 21, 2004 22:34 EDT
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threatening to kill her is a horrible way to beg for reviews :p keep up the good work! i like what's written so far.
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 22:10 EDT
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Don't kill her, or at least let Yash save her!!
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