| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: BlueMist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 00:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed your creative ideas. All of your works have been the best I've read in awhile.
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Reviewed By: tuathafaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 08:29 EST
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Hey! A new story! Eh...sorry I haven't been back in a while, I really get distracted with everything, must admit. And college is finding it's way of eating through my brain. It's not difficult, just amazingly tedious. Anyway, good story so far!! Took me over four hours to read the whole thing, but I'm really liking it! Plus, you've got all my favorite characters included this time around! Kagura, my all time fav, Sesshoumaru, that stoic block, and Akago, who later turns into Hakudoushi in the series. Can't say why I like him, but I always have. ^^ He's really evil sometimes, but he seemed to have a wild streak of his own, you know? And I'm liking him lying to Naraku. Anyway, super job, I love what's going on! Good luck with your bio stuff! Tuatha :D
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Reviewed By: I'm not a member but they won't allow me to use my name?! On: November 08, 2004 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't kill Kagome and leave her dead! I am really enjoying this fic so far, but I am also a sucker for happy endings. You can have angst and good endings at the same time. It's possible! Anywho, thank you for writing yet another high quality, hear-pounding fanfic. I eagerly await your next update whenever it comes. ^_^
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 18:56 EST
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i love your story! i am so glad that i found it! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 09:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why does she have to die!!!!! Your so mean sometimes. I really like your story though, i love it when they bicker playfully. I am still waiting for that kiss!! I figure Inuyasha's just going to break down and kiss her sooner than later. (hint, hint, wink, wink)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 02, 2004 18:34 EST
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Excellent chapter. Like the way you are setting out the various couples, be interesting to see if love can truely blossom in such a dark and stormy environment. Good luck with the GRE's (sorry, but I don't actually know what they are ^_^;). Hope Meche recovers soon, please send my best wishes. Ok, dangerous ground here...as being myself a guy in the age range of 22-26 (although whether I am good or not is open to discussion) I would say that most of them are either in a relationship (as two of my friends are) or still looking for the right woman or horribly tormented by a seemingly near ending supply of work...(^_^;) But seriously, I am sure there is someone outthere, just have to keep looking... Ok, moving swiftly on I better finish now, lest I dig a bigger hole for myself to be burried in...^_^; Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I would just like to say that, that Don Juan name looked soo formiliar. Next, its so sad that you have to go but good luck getting your degree. I feel so sorry for Miroku though, with the whole lonliness thingy. I know how he feels. *tear* ^_^ oh well life must go on. Their probably are some good guys out there but until I find one I'm alone. *sigh* See u in two weeks I'm gonna go read your new summary.
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Reviewed By: Wren On: November 02, 2004 12:57 EST
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You're turning me into a huge Kagura/Sess fan. At this point it seems weird for either of them to be with anyone else. Keep it up. Wren
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Reviewed By: great job! On: November 02, 2004 10:13 EST
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i love your story. i'm sad that you won't be able to update for two weeks. what'll i do in the mean time? hope things go well!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 09:14 EST
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2 weeks?! E'gast! I don't know if I will be able to handle it!!*sigh* I suppose the GRE is important though. ;) Good luck on it! Oh and Fantastic Chapter too!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: November 02, 2004 06:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 15:48 EDT
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another wonderful chapter to incite the imagination of the reader. good job and keep this story going. i can't wait to read the next chapter! update soon! although, if i may make a small suggestion, i noticed quite a few grammer and spelling mistakes (english major, kills me all the time!) i would suggest doing a read over before posting. (reading it aloud as it is written) great chapter. *pouting and whining* don't kill kagome!
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: October 27, 2004 02:39 EDT
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Great chapter, I love the buildup of tension and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 01:43 EDT
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Fantastic chapter as always! I have to put my vote in for Kagome coming back to life ... maybe it is from the series but I have trouble watching Inu Yasha suffer such a loss - I feel like he has already been through so much. I know that in your story he hasn't led the same life ... but the feeling still lingers. Also, I feel that people who are "protective" tend to suffer a great deal when someone in their care falls to harm. Or maybe I am just a "softie" that likes happy endings ... who knows!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 00:11 EDT
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Awwww, you cut it off. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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