| "Beautiful Miscommunications" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: kittyfire On: November 28, 2004 00:11 EST
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man oh man!!! this story rocks! i havent read a story like this before its really origanal. please please please update soooooon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (On a Turkey cooking break) On: November 27, 2004 20:09 EST
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Ooooohh! The plot thickens! MWAHAHAHAHA! Oh and when you figure out what that story was called can you tell us in a author note cause it sounds really cool! And if you enjoyed it(atleast what you read of it) then it should be good! Is Kagome that naive or did she just want him to think that?
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Reviewed By: mkiz On: November 27, 2004 03:31 EST
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The story you're looking for is called Helping Hands I believe, by Windigo. However the story hasn't been updated for almost two months now but it really is a nice read. Hope that helps, lates
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 26, 2004 22:05 EST
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Don't worry about it, not a problem. I hope the exam went well, good luck with the ones that remain. Loved the chapter, liked how you kept switching scenes and have now left a whole load of cliffhangers (yes, I actually like them, more of a challenge that way working out what will happen) and events that no doubt will come together to reveal all. Ok, enough ramblings...again. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: November 26, 2004 21:03 EST
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idc how long it takes luv the story =D
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: November 26, 2004 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it seems that at the moment, ff.net isn't working (for logging in and reviewing)so i'm here!... awsome chapter, as usual! a couple cliffhangers huh? i wonder what's gonna happen between kagome and inuyasha ;] and... >GASP< naraku knows... awsome cliffhangers. you've done an awsome job on character development and the flow of the relationships between characters! loved this chapter! oh and as for the story you're looking for... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1597857/1/ Helping Hands by Windigo! well i'll definetly be back when you update again! ADIOS.
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Reviewed By: tuathafaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:59 EST
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^^ I won't get angry, though I will wish you luck on your tests. This was a good chapter! I liked the developement of Kaede, and Kikyo's statements were interesting. ^^ Could have wished to see more of Kagura, but I know she's important to the plot line, so I guess I'll see more of her later, right? Oh well, update in three weeks please! Tuatha :D
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Miroku 1 On: November 26, 2004 16:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You finally updated but I guess with a life as busy as yours seems to be you wouldn't have time to update. I must say normally I would be fine with you having slow updates, but with a cliff hanger like that....I might just go crazy. O well it will be worth the pain in the end I guess. Good luck with everything! Talk later!
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Reviewed By: Meka-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 12:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, the entire backstory is massively intriguuing. And I love intrigue! Can't wait for your next chapter! Happy Turkey day and good luck studying for your GREs. ~Meka btw the story your looking for is Helping Hands by Windigo: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1597857/1/
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: November 26, 2004 11:27 EST
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That was great! exuse me *blows nose* I got a cold from the unexpected snow down here. It hasn't really snowed in Barstow for four years and I didn't have suitible clothing. But anyway! I cant stop smiling(even though my lips our chapped Ouch!) I just love this chapter! Please update within the scedualed time, you kinda threw me off last time. rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 11:07 EST
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Was the story called "Helping Hands"? Here's the address to it http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1597857/1/. bYE! Upadte soon!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: November 26, 2004 07:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hapy Thanksgiving to you! Nice story (now I have to start from the beginning!) I think that the story that you are looking for is "Helping Hands" by Windigo (not sure if I am spelling the author's name right).
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Reviewed By: Dragon777 On: November 26, 2004 04:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic along with all your other ones. You should consider doing some kind of high school fic. The story your looking for is called 'Helping Hands'. Great work
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Reviewed By: Rues_Vides [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 04:07 EST
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I heard about that story too but sorry I can't remember the name. Anyway, great chapter. Funny thing is that Kagome told Inuyasha she wouldn't bite, like Inuyasah had something to worry about. But in actuality, she might want to ask him if he does. (no pun intended)
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!
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