| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lucient, not signed in On: August 12, 2005 16:41 EDT
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Title: Make of it what you want Obviously someone jealous of your talent. Fuck them. I think your story lines are amazing. They twist and wind, and always leave me guessing. And on a side note, when I saw it was you who had left me a note, one of the two people who inspired me to try my hand at it, I was touched and actually felt unworthy. It'd be almost like poppy z. brite complementing my work ((she's my favorite author)). Anyway, thanks, you know I'm not worthy, fuck all opposed to your writing, and uh... the sessh in dog form... well... He wasn't giant like he is in the show. I kinda left that out, lol...............James
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Title: Make of it what you want
Reviewed By: Stray reader On: August 12, 2005 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn have people actually read this I so hate it when fanfics get overrated like this. You should get a beta hopefully one that knows his or hers grammar and spelling. I could not help but notice the story having a lot of american slang which is funny since I could have sworn Inu and the gang are from Japan but who really cares right? Give people a lot of limes and lemons and they'll give you a 10 for every rating
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 04:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I'm really surprised no one has commented since I have. That's weird. MM still isn't telling me when you update. I wish I could draw well enough to show you what I think he looks like. Hmmm... Even if I did draw something I do not have a scanner. Maybe I could convince someone to let me use theirs? We'll have to see, I guess, lol. Awesome fic, really hot. I'm glad you updated. I've been going through alot lately, and this takes my mind off of it. James
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn mm still isn't telling people when their favorites update, so sorry this is so late. :) This is really heating up... I can't wait to see more.
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Title: shrinks
Reviewed By: shessylover89 On: August 04, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i personally think that the shrink is not trying to help rin i think she's hurting her. the reason i think that is probly cuz i can't stand shrinks. they stick their nose in other peeps business and make eveything u say out to be something bad. neway, if i'm right please email me. it's inukaglover815@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, this fic is soo intense. i don't know how else to put it. you are making me so c-crazy with our poor rin. she just can't get a break, huh. i feel so bad that she is getting screwed so royally. it makes for some damn good readin' tho. ;) i can't wait to see how you will handle the climax of the story with everything you have going on. every main character has a heaping helping of crap on their plates. i swear your fic is the best! please, when you can, post us all a new chap. thanks.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: August 04, 2005 17:59 EDT
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wow! great chapter!!! keep up the good work!!
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Title: Leomae
Reviewed By: Corie On: August 02, 2005 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I know I've told you at least a million times but I do. *grin* ^.^ yay Kouga got bashed. I really hate him, I wish he would just go and get himself killed already. He's way too dense. *shrug* oh well it allows for some nice Kouga bashing. I have a question though. "what happened to Houjo?" he was there quite a bit and then he just disapeared. Not that I'm complaining I like Houjo even less than I like Kouga. I would like for him to show back up again though....just so Inu could knock him around some more ^.^ or actually I think it would be interesting if Kag did the beating. she could take Houjo. *shrug* oh well update soon ok ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeishDwarf On: July 30, 2005 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fooking awesome, the lemony scenes very very descriptive and they fit right into the plot. good job.
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Reviewed By: sarahcant08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 21:11 EDT
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i love it . update soon
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Reviewed By: Lucient not logged in On: July 28, 2005 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so glad to see you'd updated, although mm's being a bitch and not telling anyone, lol. I loved this one, especially the last sentence. Hysterical. You still have it, and I'm waiting impatiently for your next chapter... James
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 02:10 EDT
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man...so good! i would have r/r earlier but i was out of town all last week. :( well, i must say that you have provided for me, yet again, an amazing chapter to lose myself in. i am so anxoius about rin and her healing process. i want tsubaki to get whats coming to her. NOW. sorry. had to vent. i am going to try and wait patiently for your next update. i know it will be great. you never dissapoint.
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Reviewed By: The Grave and Beyond On: July 22, 2005 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is freakin awesome. I've been reading this story for like three days and I am impressed. This is by far the best fic of Inu and the gang that I have read (i've read quite a few, somewhere around 20 and it's no joke). This is the best fic that I have yet to read and I hope you continue to write. I have been inspired by your work as well as other author's to start my own fic of the gang. In order for that to happen, I need to read as many fics as I can to start (to let you know, I have no intention of stealing your work or any other author for that matter). Please get going on your next chapter because I have to know what happens in the play. Your awesome.
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 23:50 EDT
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-pounces on Miss Wendy- Hey doll, I'm finally caught up. Rawr. What an evil place to stop. I would love a nice violent lemon. Hehe. Inu Yasha + pissed = Wonderful sex. Mmhmm. I'm sure you've got plenty of plans. Seems like Rin's condition is one of the most believable of any "rape victim" story I've ever read. Kudos for that. Let's see... what else? I love the character you've created with Ryen. He's just... awesome. He's such a great comedic relief. Kagome's mom's character is right on, also. For her situation and standing with her daughter. I kept seeing little mistakes in spelling and grammar, and if you ever want me to look over something, you only have to email. I know you know it. Again, kudos. Your plot is intriguing, your acidic content is yummy, and your characters fit. Have fun with the upcoming chapters. No pressure to update immediately. Till next time.
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Reviewed By: Inutrasha_! On: July 20, 2005 11:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! well ive been reading this story for a while now and i totally love it! i just wanna congratulate your wonderful mind for putting all this together. one day ill get the balls to actually post a rin Sesh story (sigh), but until that day i ghave yours to read from! o just a small comment. please, make Ein stop the madness! i cant take it anymore, i love the fact that youve brought her distress so poignantly to the reader but please tell me this is the climax!? i hope you dont take this the wrong way, i just want you to know that this story is so good i actually care enought o write about it! i know you will do a great job continually, so heres me wishing you the best, and please consider my plea! let sesh find out about Tsubaki! later write back if ya want!
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