| "The curse of the dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 453 ] |
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Reviewed By: MaD-CoW On: January 24, 2005 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool ficcy....very funny (and sad and....naughty....^^;;) huff.....but i'm a sango (that includes sangoXmiroku) fan...*sigh* not much fics concerning the rather awkward duo....so yeah i luv ur story but sango and miroku are VERY side-character-ish. i understand that that is more likey ur intentions but PLEASE include the 2 more often *puppy dog eyes* im not just talking of nc17 scenes but also general fluff or some other parts in which they are actually given a paragraph or so in the story...yeah....that was longer than i expected O_O keep up the great work and good luck continuing (unless of course u don't need the luck ~_^)
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Reviewed By: Ebony_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 04:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You're killing me! Still with the teasing! I was hoping Rin and Sesshoumaru would've gotten some action by now! Not only that, you've added a crazy cliff-hanger! You are just cruel! Despite all of that though, this story is still kicking major ass! Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: Ashley Cohick On: January 24, 2005 00:42 EST
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oh a cliff hanger. i really love this fic, it's really good. i erally like how the cop Ryen, i think thats what it was, is Inu's father. and i like how you used the swords in the story as well. it seems like things are going to work out, for the most part, with the couples. this is one of about 15 fics i've rated and it's definately one of the best. if you can think of any other fics that you would suggest please send me an email at GothycCoalChambr@aol.com OR noleafclover1342@yahoo.com. i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: January 23, 2005 23:55 EST
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XD good work. You really had me going there. At first i thought it was inu's dad and then his uncle and now i don't know what to think i'm so confused...*Cries* Kagome's mom is a communist! *pulls out pitchfork* uh.. jk well keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. It has pulled at the strings of my heart, made me laugh, cry, and so many other things. That's the measure of a great story- when you can make the reader feel the characters as though they were them. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: January 20, 2005 00:42 EST
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Omgosh what a fucking awesome story! I've been obsessively reading it for the past two days. i bow down to your talent! n can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 11:32 EST
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Awesome story!!!!!!!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: January 17, 2005 06:06 EST
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XD wow.. great chappie.. It's good to know that fluffykins, all right. Please keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! w00t! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 14:14 EST
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this is one of my favortie fics. lemons are good too. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LynneC114 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 17:18 EST
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OMG!! LIKE WOW. First off, well....eh, I tried reviewing a while ago, and they were like "no! ARGH LET ME EAT YOUR SOUL." so i ran away, and then saved what i wanted to write for another day. But anyway, I kind of knew Rin was gunna die, but then, Sesshy comes in with Tenseiga, and is he gonna revive her? Oh, wait *hits head* he did, didn't he? It's been a bit. Forgive me. I can't can't can't can't wait unti you update next, I really love this story to the bottom of my heart. And then back again. So, update soon, and stuff, and I updated DPLF? and I'm gonna be uploading a new Inuyasha story that's WAY!!! better than that one. Ok, I'll stop talking, cuz I ramble....a lot. Ja ne, Lynne
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 14:04 EST
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Wow that was um dramatic. The last part in the morgue was excellent, and i liked the interaction btween Karron and Naraku. The first couple of paragraphs seemed to be over reaching a bit. It was kind of harsh transition from tone of the last chapter to this one. Loved it anyway
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: January 10, 2005 04:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters! I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter...ok I have to say this. Why does Sesshomaru act the way he does? I know he's cold, unemotional and all but the way he treats Kagome, Sango and Miroku is just wrong. I mean their the closes thing he has a friends! I could understand that he hates Inuyasha but still! He needs to lighten up some. And Inuyasha was actually protecting him!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: January 09, 2005 08:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story has taken me days to read and I can't believe it! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next! I was so relieved to find out that rin's alive! XD SO much angst!! w00t! Nothing but the good s----! -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're pretty courageous killing a character like especially Sesshy's girlfriend. I was almost crying when I read how Sesshy's howl shook the rocks. ::OMG, someone hand me a tissue, please:: |_| ::sniff, sniff:: Anyways, glad to know Yash is alright and like you said it was a very dark chapter. ::Can someone change the lightbulb? -_-b:: Keep up the good work and update soon please. Bye!
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Reviewed By: The Master of the Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 03:58 EST
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(And again. Must be the brackets.) c|-| fit. And regarding your question, I like the manga. The reasons why I don't like the anime are the comments (The Tetsuaiga turns red. All: *gasp* Kagome: "The Tetsuaiga turned red!" Me: "-.-") and the animation. In the manga, most of those comments are needed because the art may not be as clear as the artist wanted it to be. But the only reason I can think those would be needed in the anime is for colorblind and mentally deficient people. Being politically correct is such a pain. And I think the problems with the animation are obvious. Also, I admit that I came here to see what kind of *ahem* bad fanfiction is being produced. The people here are the first semi-intelligent InuYasha fans I've met online. I'm sorry for prejudging most of you.
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