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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 › » ] | Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 07:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how Hisadaicho seemed disturbed about the madonna-like characteristics of Kagome (future virgin birth) in this pre-Christian setting. I just hope Hissy won't think the baby is some object of power to acquire. Since the baby is Miroku's and Sango's, they may not take kindly to InuYasha's protective interference if it comes down to kidnapping attempts once the baby is born. Keep up the good work. Your updates get me out of bed and stumbling towards work in the mornings. *grin*
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: December 01, 2004 22:08 PST
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I am pathetic! Trust me, I'm a pitiful person. LOL But thanks! Ok, so Kagome knows what kind of dreams Inu's been having, but she still doesn't know the details! As in how "raunchy" and "naughty" they are. Hehehehe. Can't wait till he tells her about that. Could that possibly be leading to a lemon??? Hmmmm???? Just kidding! I'm not begging for a lemon! Don't take it the wrong way! Hey, if this is a lemon-free story, bring it on. I love a story lemon-filled or lemon-less. See? I am pathetic. I'm making up my own lemon-y words. LOL!!!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:34 PST
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Haahaahaa! I knew she didn't realize how bad InuYasha's dreams were! Extreme embarrassment! Mama giving him the 'eye' was pretty funny too. Gee, I wonder if Kagome managed to keep HER thoughts pure enough for her little purification before the 'blood letting'...hmm, we'll see. Ah, I just loooove deviant minds!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:25 PST
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Why do I have a funny feeling these dreams aren't going away *any* time soon? Though I do think that they may change, become not so much a part of Hisadaicho. Of course...that remedy has to do with *Butterfly youkai....And Hisdaicho is quite possibly anything but. Oh what a wicked web you weave.....
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 01, 2004 15:41 PST
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Ah sweet fluffyness. I love it when you write the tender stuff. Thanks! I needed some lurv today.
| Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter! What to say? Ahh the angst! Poor hanyou, not sure what he do to protect Kagome against a youkai that can take on Kagome's appearance? Something tells me that would be REALLY bad… As for Kagome's angst? So bitter for her to think that, even for a moment! (And yet we all know that is her one and only time she doubts, when Kikyou is involved.) And yet so sweet when InuYasha can't cut her finger, even just a little one … Then that last bit? Him holding her and her getting all flustered? How beautiful was that? I tell you, you have a knack for causing angst yet leaving the reader fully satisfied at the same time … now will this 'binding' work? I can't wait to see! Carry on, Sueric! Oh great and powerful Writer of Oz… hee hee hee!!
| Reviewed By: inu-hanyou06_cherryblossom On: December 01, 2004 15:29 PST
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okay, first i want to say is i was in dying laughter from a misread i thought you wrote in your story! the part that says, "I see . . . ." Standing up slowly, she moved over to the rifle in the cupboards. "I have a few I saved from candy flavorings . . . They're clean . . . will this work?"... i thought you wrote that kagome's mom was furious at inuyasha for having dreams about her precious kagome, and she headed to the cupboards to get out her rifle! LMAO! a simple mistake on my part, but what the hell? it was sooo damn funny just the think about it!
| Reviewed By: shogun_90_inu/kag On: December 01, 2004 15:23 PST
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great story! just finished the last update, but i can tell this story is gonna be fun! i wanted to know a few things. what if someone crashed into inuyasha's chest and smashed the vile? ewww... and is this butterfly sex creep gonna try to be kagome and fool inuyasha into sleeping with her? that would be disasteriffic! and how can rin actually be THAT stupid? i know she's just a little girl, but i think she knows when to shuddup. poor inuyasha, having these odd yet pleasurable dreams... does the blood binding not work and they end up having to act out his dreams? lol! i feel sorry for shippou and the monkey. they should file suit against inuyasha for child abuse! lol,jk! couldn't do that to our favorite hanyou now could we? many thanx, and have a merry christmas sueric!
| Reviewed By: renatanocis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 15:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hello! I've been a major lurker, but I really wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying this fic. It's WONDERFUL, really. (I know--you must hear that every chapter, but it's true). It's one of the best I've read EVER, in any fandom (Kingdom Hearts, Buffy, Harry Potter, or this one, Inuyasha), and I have read a lot of fics. It's also THE most frequently updated. You really spoil your readers--thanks! *hands cyberbrownie* I also want to know--is Kouga going to be a big part of the plot? Are we going to see more interaction between the "Brothers of Fang"? Oh, yeah! I've read Chronicles and Purity, too, and I LOVED them. I'm going to read Purity 2, now (I like Toga!), and I promise to leave a review when I read the latest chapter--whatever that is by the time I get there. Um. That's all. ~Renata (By the way, I'm 14 and I "get" this fic. Just wanted to let you know...)
| Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: December 01, 2004 15:09 PST
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i'd just like to say that your story is amazing! i love the way you explain every little detail as if you were really there. it's an awsome story, but i never would have thought that kagome would go to the length of actually getting pregnant by another man's 'sperm.' the binding of the blood ordeal is quite common to us fans of inu/kag fanfiction, but the way you describe it just amazes me! by the way, i've never been able to actually catch up with the writer of a story in order to write a review that follows the storyline. so this is a very new thing for me! ^_^ and sense i didn't put up a review for "Chronicles" i would just like to take the time to congradulate you on that wonderful, epic story! i look forward to reading more of your other fanfics in the future, but for right now i just hope i can finish this one! i might be a new reviewer and you probably won't post this message, but i will try my hardest to post a review on every update you make. your a great writer so don't let anyone tell you differently, okay? everyone has there own opinion, but it's yours that counts the most. so till next time, tootles!
| Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 11:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ponders* im thinking the blood bonding they just did is going to cause some interesting side effects... please tell?? ~Kat
| Title: Metamorphosis
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 09:42 PST
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Well, it's time for me to join in the guessing game. I'm guessing that Madam Butterfly is trying to bring back her Master, and in order to do this, she will need a body that is beyond strong (Sexxshoumaru?) that is why she is courting him? yes, no, maybe, close, no cigar? She is gathering souls to increase her power in order to do this? She used to be mortal, but her master changed her into something else? Something about sexual gratification increases her power? As you can see, I have more questions than answers, but this fic has my mind constantly wondering, and guessing (second guessing, actually) what our Marvalous Sueric has in store for us. I love what Kagome is doing for Sango and Miroku. It is totally Kagome, and how Inu Yasha is reacting hits my idea of him right on the nose. I love the plots within plots, and those dreams are completely growl worthy. Just wait until Kagome finds out whats REALLY in them. Are we using "Monk in pain red" descriptions in this fic? FOMCLMAO. (bows in respect to Sue's talant) You Go Girl. Looking forward to the next update.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 08:37 PST
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i can't wait for more..
| Title: Crazy-Mad Skilz
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 03:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled upon this fic last evening and just wanted to make a comment. I already knew you had crazy-mad skilz with Chronicles, I love how you showcase that prowess now. I'm sure you could have written something just as strong and just as powerful as the aforementioned 'Bertha', but what really cements your absolute writing powers is that you aren't content to let it lie. To go on to do something as different as this work takes not only skill but big brass … gazongas. I'll admit that, like many, I was a little skeptical, not because I didn't think that the choice to become a surrogate was something that Kagome would have done, but because of the devastation her choice could have caused InuYasha. I love how you dealt with that. It makes sense, too. That he could tell that she hadn't been with anyone else was just beautiful, yet another testament to those crazy-mad skilz. You've won me over forever! Glad to be one of your minions!
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 30, 2004 19:24 PST
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Well at least he told her. But I don't get it...does Kagome believe Inu about him saying Kikyou's name but not really wanting to, but really wanting to say Kagome's name? LOL I know I just totally confused myself and probably you too. LOL Sorry. I would make more sense if I wasn't feeling so ill. Not that I'm sick but I do feel sick. I'm just gonna stop now before I bore you to death with my pathetic life. LOL
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