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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 › » ] | Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: December 02, 2004 19:45 PST
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well, back to reviews huh? wonderful descriptions on the fights, so he got hurt this time? ouch. i think it's all too sweet how he struggles for any little amount of Kagome's attention. it must be hard writing a terrific story, right? i know i could never use such diplicit words to describe each and every scene to bring a story to a gigantic climax and then suddenly change it into something other than what the reader thought would happen. inuyasha is having some big issues about himself, isn't he? wanting to be with someone, but not feeling worthy enough to be near them. and it must be hard for kagome also, always trying to get close to him and show her love. but he just keeps trying to restrain himself...*sigh* this is what you call mental distress, folks. this is why so many people go into psychiatric institutes... or they turn gay. (no offense) i also don't see how sango could actually give kagome permission to use her husband's 'sperm' to create a baby inside herself. and then give that newborn to sango. it's really sad too how she can't have a baby though, so i can see 'why' she wants a baby, just not 'how' she could accept her best friend's infant-even if kagome declares it doesn't belong to her, that it is only formed by her. i could never give my baby away, much less accept a close friend's offer to have one for me. this is a wonderful story that makes you think, alot. so i guess thank you sueric, for helping us use our brains! lol, till tomorrow tootles!
| Title: WOW@
Reviewed By: Lean17 On: December 02, 2004 19:26 PST
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" I'll get you and your little dog too"....Lol, you put in the one thing I never thought you would have,a Wizard of Oz reference. Hmm..wonder if that kind of thing was actually said to InuYasha, what would he do...interesting prospect. :P Anyways, good job, and keep up the work!!!
| Reviewed By: inu-hanyou06_cherryblossom On: December 02, 2004 19:23 PST
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gotta hand it to ya sueric, ya sure make things difficult for BakaYasha don't ya? lol, i really missed that name! and what ever happened to 'monk-in-pain red' and sneaky wench? as for your new character... monkey shakes? omg lol, wat next? slappin sango? shorty shippou? mischievious myoga? lol! keep up with the name-callin, who knows maybe one day they'll all get into a name-callin brawl! yep i can see it now... "Come see the Inuyasha gang beat each other to a pulp! Now featuring Kagome with a chair!" ...lol somehow or another crazy ideas like these are what make your story so great! so keep up with the wackyness and 'always follow your heart.' be bak soon! to read and review! tata!
| Reviewed By: shogun_90_inu/kag On: December 02, 2004 19:06 PST
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hmmm, seems to me that inuyasha is really in a fix isn't he? (Martin Luther King) I HAVE A DREAM! ... (Shakespere) To be... or not to be? that is the question. ... lol, i cracked up about the 'wicked witch of the west' act! what next? kill her with a house? will the monkey grow wings and fly away to never neverland? lmao! wow! this story just keeps gettin better and better! so as we all say at mcdonalds... I'm Lovin' It! ^-^ ppl have some weird ideas i'll have to admit... but don't they entertain us?! lol, good night! ...and sweet dreams, inuyasha!
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: December 02, 2004 17:19 PST
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great addition, i read the plea for the line (i can't remember which story it went to) and you added it in perfect. i love how your answering all the quesitons like totousi (sp?)....its like yes, no, yes, wait, what? keep up the great work. (and keeping the questions going in circles).
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (lurking quietly in the darkness) On: December 02, 2004 16:06 PST
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Hmmm...why do I have a funny funny feeling that Inu-Yasha may...oh, I don't know, just *happen* to forget to shake the vial one of these days soon. Sorry, strong willed or not he's still just a man. Hisadaicho, Hisadaicho...what shall we do with her? So it seems she has some relation to butterfly youkai. I still stand by my belief that it's not so simple. Purhaps some sort of succubus (or the Japanese equivilant, since your better with realism than most IY fanfic writers)?
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: December 02, 2004 14:13 PST
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That Wizard of Oz line fit Hisadaicho perfectly. So why do I have this feeling that InuYasha is going to forget to shake the vile on purpose? You know he just loves to have those "dreams" of Kagome. He may be hentai, but he's a hentai with cute ears! You can't forget that! LOL. So is Hisadaicho planning to make him have these dreams again or is she just gonna wait it out? I'm confused and slow. LOL
| Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine (not signed in) On: December 02, 2004 13:17 PST
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Okay, I died laughing over the Wizard of Oz quote...anyway, just wanted to tell you how much I look forward to your updates. One thing I've been wondering, though, is why the idea of adoption wasn't explored by Miroku and Sango. Now before you roll your eyes, let me say that I *do* understand why you used the surrogate pregnancy - I'm just thinking that in an age where war and disease left so many children orphaned, Miroku and Sango would have at least considered raising a child under those circumstances. Or maybe there were no orphaned children in their particular village? Just some wandering thoughts... Anyway, keep up the great work! Lavender
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 12:46 PST
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Aww...Inu's plans to get Kagome's attention get bent. He still gets it, but not quite in the way he planned. I'm so glad that you understand that there is a brain under all that silvery hair and doggie-ears and that he can be devious sometimes...what a riot!! ----Frustration...thy name is 'InuYasha'---- Thanks for the laugh! ----Also, about Kaede's speech; direct translations aside (as if I know how to translate...) Kaede is a product of the past and her rural upbringing, as well as her priestly training and a strong sense of social station and manners. She has always been portrayed speaking in an archaic way so it's normal to use an 'olde english' style of speech for her to show the differences. Just as Miroku and Sango speak differently with a more polite form of address and InuYasha is quite rude at times. Exposure to Kagome's modern slang is slowly corrupting the group, but Kaede is older and calmer and not exposed on an almost daily basis to Kagome's more relaxed style because she doesn't travel with them on their searching. --'So ye should not be much surprised if my manner of speech be not yours,' the old one-eyed Miko nods her head and disappears inside her hut.--
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 11:52 PST
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loved it.. can't wait for more..
| Title: Yeh
Reviewed By: kikyou_104(can't sign in can some one help) On: December 02, 2004 11:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
`I'll get you, my pretty . . . and your little dog, too . . . .' ha ha ha....that line fit in perfectly...another great chapter...so Kagome has to stay with Yasha so the ritual can work properly...i wonder wat happends if they don't do the ritual does his dreams come back 10 fold hmmm...and poor kikyou i really liked her...so now that kikyou is dead does kagome have her soul back well all of it back..i guess so...well i wonder wat Hisadaicho has planed next...and another question will we find out soon why she is after Kagome what is so important about haveing her soul complete...well thanks for the chapter and i'll waite for your next update....ja ne
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: December 02, 2004 10:44 PST
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hehehehehehehehehehehe. There's good possibility that I may continue laughing the entire day. So is the crazy butterfly lady an ancestor of the wicked witch of the west? Permaybe that quote has been past of generation after generation, and slowly it's meaning changed from the dog demon, to the pet dog, hehehehe. And WOW... the part about Inuyasha waking up and telling Kagome that she slept on his lap and should know that he didn't have those dreams because she was on his lap.. I cracked up.. still laughing over that, actually. hmm, now you have me wondering over the consequences of breaking the vile.. Will they be good or bad consequences.. or maybe bad in a good way or good in a bad way.. hahaha-- All depends on how you look at things I suppose. So will it end up getting broken!?!?!?! Inquiring minds want to know! Great chapter, loved it!!! Take care! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 08:39 PST
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Hum. The binding worked, sorta, but now they have to be together - I wonder if they skipped a night if it wouldn't work at all? Kagome still has 2-3 months before the baby comes. They still have to figure out what to do with that jewel and how to do it. They have that person really hunting them, but don't know it yet. She has plans to get the jewel. And just NOW Inuyasha seems to be ready to get closer to Kagome; at least he formed a plan. So much going on, and not only here, but your other stories too - and you write them all at once!!
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 08:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, keep them comming! :)
| Title: Ch. 22
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 08:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow, where to start? Brilliant chapter, as always! Hisadaicho seems a little perplexed by Kagome's impeding birthing… interesting! I have to say that I thought it was hilarious, the 'Damn it.... I hate poison youkai... scorpions…. Sesshoumaru…. bastards, every last one…' but it was definitely the entire Wizard of Oz line that made me laugh like a lunatic. Do I sense a bit of foreshadowing about this 'almost' failed attempt at sealing Inuyasha's dreams? I want to venture a guess here. Going by what Kaede said, is there a chance that the two will somehow have the same dream at the same time if they fail to shake the vial? Wow, the mental image of that phrase scares me…and I read the teaser off your yahoo group and I found it just intriguing! I can't wait to get my hooks on that chapter since I am the biggest Sexxhoumaru fan on earth! *dies* Till your next update! =Diane=
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