| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: Awesomness!!
Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 14:44 CST
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Man. I am realluy liking your fic here. It's really good!! *roots you on from the sidelines* Man, I wonder though...*Is eating a goodyness granola bar right now, with no clue why it is good* What will happen. I mean, Toga will probably go back to the us.....sooo....hmmm......Sesshy can't be happy at all..:P
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 23:28 CST
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You've managed to make me angry at Sesshoumaru (whom, as you know cause it's your fault, I worship) and Lily, (who, while I thought she seemed a bit desperate, was still pitiable) and that's kinda sad...LoL. Amazing yet again. Three days in a row now while you're on vacation. Just amazing ^_^ Sierra is so lucky to have such a darling White Knight, is she not? I'm almost jealous. Hehe, well, can't talk and review at the same time... so enjoy the rest of vacation and can't wait to read when you return!!
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Title: I'm still not complaing...LOL
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh...Shippo almost spilled the beans! Well, actually he did spill them, but since she is not versed in Japanese lore...it went sailing over her head. But I wouldn't be surprised if she doesn't go looking for a Japanese to English translation dictionary the first chance she gets. I actually expect she has one in her purse...although "Inu" will probably be in there, I don't think that "Youkai" is a word that people need much for ordering coffee. ----"Tessaiga shoving..." Is that legal? LOL!! - -Thanks ever so much for posting. *squinting suspiciously* You ARE spending time with your family...right? ----Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 01:28 CST
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Sue, Sue, I miss Sue. Look *points up* I signed in for real this time. How many more days until you come home again? hehe >.
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Title: ANOTHER Cliffhanger?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist (nsi) On: December 12, 2004 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And yet another cliffhanger. Jeez, woman! What are you trying to do? Kill us all with anticipation? Goodness! Can't wait till you get back! Wow! I hope Sierra isn't scared off by Sesshomaru's intentions. Toga to the rescue? We can always hope! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (at work) On: December 11, 2004 17:43 CST
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Why do i feel like you ended it like that on purpose? (sorry for the short review, I snuck away to see if you updated and i can't let my boss know I was using the company computer for person use... AGAIN)
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Reviewed By: hopuchan On: December 11, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another question...when sierra gets to japan, is she speaking in japanese? i assume that toga's family is fluent in english and all but is sierra also assuming she'll be able to communicate in english too? or does she know japanese?
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Title: jennifer_luvs_fluffy
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Have fun on ur vacation! lol.....And that last chapter was really good lol...i never would have expected her coming to visit! i can just taste the drama!! Cant wait for the next chapter! ----------Jennifer
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Reviewed By: Gemini Dragonstone On: December 10, 2004 22:23 CST
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LOL, I have no clue and am totally hyper but is Siera a descendent of Miroku and Sango's? That would be hilarious, ;) Hate the cliffie but nice chappie lol Gemini
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Title: meanie poo poo head
Reviewed By: chichiwvu-being lazy nsi On: December 10, 2004 21:15 CST
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oh sue.. you're MEAN! seriously.. 2 weeks to find the next chapter?!?! I don't think sesshomaru will do anything to sierra, he's too much of a gentleman, but what will the Inutaisho do? I can only imagine what Toga will do. He misses her, yes, but he didn't want her to go really. I'd like to see Sesshomaru get upset that the two work so well together.. hehe
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:11 CST
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oh no...poor siera....DAMN YOU SESSHOUMARU! I swear, if sess does one mean thing to her...i shall torture him! MWAHAHAHAHA! I hope toga sticks up to lord fluffers! I could help him, parental defiance is a skill of mine...
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Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: December 10, 2004 14:30 CST
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hmm... this does not bode well... i DO hope Toga catches her scent and finds them before Sesshoumaru does something he may regret later. enjoy your vacay...
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate ^_~ On: December 10, 2004 14:05 CST
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Sesshy needs to get that stick surgically removed from his ass before it crawls up his spine and does brain damage. LOL, so Sierra came to surprise Toga, eh? Why am I not surprised? Now, if Toga just comes down in time to play knight in shining armour and chase off daddy.... I guess we'll just have to wait and see ^_^
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Title: HAHAHA- I got this again.. Told me I was signed in but aparently not!! "Error: Missing Information! Who are you? Please enter your name."
Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: December 10, 2004 13:52 CST
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NOOOOOO!!!! More, Sue, More!!! hahahaha. You were right.. you did leave off at a ridiculously good spot. I'll just sit over here for awhile and pout. Is it working? Are you feeling guilty yet? I doubt it, haha. =P Oh wow. I didn't even put 2 and 2 together until you had Sierra paying for the cab. Wow. I must be slow today. Amazing-- simply amazing. Wow. Loved it. I don't think that I can get that point across enough. Have I ever told you that you're the best? (Do you feel the need to be reciprical by giving more chapters for this before you leave? haha If yes. YEY! If no. DAMNIT-- all that persausion class for nothing!) Well, anyway, Have a great vacation-- you deserve it!!! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 11:47 CST
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Evil!! EVIL!! Sierra on Sesshoumaru's doorstep...and smelling like his son! Goooood Cliffhanger. Evil for doing it!! LOL ----Can't wait for the next chap-oh yeah, gonna have to wait. Arrrggh! ----Loved the little sparring session with Uncle and Kagome yelling at him afterwards. God I love them as a couple!
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