| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: Patiently waiting
Reviewed By: Firetrixs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 07:15 CST
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I have loved this one. I even think that there are times that this is better than its predecessors. Have a good vacation and we'll all be waiting here on bated breath for the next installment. Firetrixs
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Title: No Wedding meeting? Drat!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm disappointed but i'll get over it still cuz i figure they'll still meet sooner or later (hopefully sooner than later.) But it's getiing soo good!!!!!!! Toga and Sierra are soooo cute!!!
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Title: Best OC EVER!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me first say that I think Toga has to be one of the BEST original characters, EVER! He's adorable! Ohh, the first kiss! How wonderful! In the realm of fluff, you are absolutely THE hands-down best! I am going to go out on a limb here and guess that either Sierra doesn't go to the wedding because of something interfering, in which case he is certain to run into his ex, Fujiko? Or Sierra shows up and surprises him AND gets to meet the family? Or maybe, just maybe … both??? Ohh the potential angst! I love it! =Diane=
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Title: taking a quick study break
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (signing in takes too much effort) On: December 08, 2004 17:59 CST
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She can't go?! Well, at least he asked, right? Heh, hopefully something will come up, cause I get the feeling Sierra has to be there... Can't wait to find out what comes next!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 17:04 CST
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loves it loves it loves it! So you plan on leaving us off at some point really really good, eh? APoor us.. :( (is it working-- the guilt trip?)............. (Didn't think so, hahaha) AH, loved the football. Too bad Toga didn't really try to outshine them some. And Sierra's brothers trying to intimidate Toga!? hahaha. Would love to see their families meet. That would be priceless. It would also be fun to see Toga form tackle Sierra's brothers out of the blue, like right in the middle of dinner. hehe. Ah, football, it's in the blood-- up until 2nd grade my dad had me convinced that I wanted to be a quarter back. (he used to play, haha) And I still throw a mean spiral. It makes a girl mad when guys think that I can't throw the ball that well. Then I just chuck it at them as hard as possible, hehehehehe. That's fun. Ah, the benifits of growing up with mostly guys. Maybe Sierra can get some time up and just fly up(?) (down, over, across, what ever way they go.. not sure-- west towards LA?) for a weekend? he he he. hmmm. Well-- I better go do some writing of my own.. boo. You don't happen to also write things on philosophy-- more specifically Kant? haha-- it was worth a try. Bye bye Sue! Take care! ---Aitu PS-- I swear-- I didn't sign in-- it did it for me.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 16:53 CST
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OMG!! I can just see how rough InuYasha and the boys would be if they played 'backyard tackle football'...it's probably a good thing they don't have that there. That game would appeal waaaay too much to their aggressive tendencies. Then again, it might be good skirmish training. Hmm...I'll let you chew on that. Loving it.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 11:59 CST
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Ahhh... Toga's in love. Are you sure she can't get some time off - she wouldn't need to go for the whole two weeks - just a few days - wedding is on a weekend - right?? oh - hey- are we going to me her birth parents before Toga takes off - hum.. Probably not. Okay. So - he'll 'talk' to his Father - he's chosen- (blow an ass gasket LOL). I'm sure there will be some other interesting meetings while he is in Japan - so maybe it is better for Sierra not to be there, it would cause to many questions that he may not want to answer yet. But, if he has chosen her, he has to tell her. Okay - so I'll sit here and think on things - again - you always keep me guessing. You have a wonderful vacation - Adult Married Childless vacations are the absolute BEST!!!
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Title: AWWWW!
Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 04:53 CST
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i'm sorry, but all that comes to mind is 'awww' because the toga/sierra thing is so cute. I absolutely adore this story, and i'm risking alot to read it, i'm grounded(teenagers should NOT be allowed to get grounded!) so i have to get up at 4 in the morning to read this storie! so you better update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in.. maybe On: December 07, 2004 22:57 CST
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ouu, vacation, vacation! Where are you going? Some where warm? Somewhere cold? Somewhere in-between? hehehe. I'm trying to get our vacation plans finalized but that's not till March. Boo-- I want to go now! *pouts* Oh how I love those twins of Kagome and Inuyasha's. They are just too funny. I could just picture that whole scene of them tackling that poor guy to the wall, hehehe. Touche', Sue, Touche'. Yey for Toga, I just love him! Going to miss your updates-- and especially this story-- but I guess that I'll be traveling as well so hopefully that will get me through with the absence of my favorite author. :D hmmmm. You hinted that there will be some Sexxhoumaru story later on in the Meta QandA's? Will this perchance happen in the chronicles christmas story? te he he. One can only hope. Well, bye bye now, take care! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: December 07, 2004 22:09 CST
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'Were you a dog in a past life?' Oh, man! I really cracked up on that one. LOL!! Ooh goody, Toga's coming to dinner! I wonder what he'll think of an American Thanksgiving? Lovin' it! ----Just wanted to make a little plea for another writer. I came across one of her one-shots and it was good, checked out her other 3 (cannon and no OOC) and they were all good...and NO-ONE has left her a review. I find that sad for such a good writer. Her author name is Hikari no Spectrum and it would be a shame if her stories remain unread. Thanks. *^-^*
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 21:47 CST
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roflmao... Kagome's sons are they? That really cracked me up. It was lovely to check in with Uncle Yasha and Aunt Gome!! Good to see InuYasha hasn't lost any of his.....well, I'll say spunk. ^_~ LoL, what a sweet first kiss! I couldn't stop giggling and awwww-ing! Will we get to see Sesshoumaru anytime soon? I'm kind of wondering what he's thinking and if he has any idea about Sierra...
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 21:47 CST
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I signed in just for you, lol. Hope you have a lot of fun on the trip, and maybe come back with even more ideas to piss 'Sexxhoumaru' off..... (I like seeing him tormented....) Of course, I hope you'll get at least a few more chapters out before you leave..... but then, I'm pretty sure everyone else agrees on that point..... ah well, have fun!!!
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Title: Toga!!!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, Toga! He saved her! I take it she believed his line about climbing the tree? Poor guy! Afraid of what his father would say yet unwilling to give up his dream! Terrific! You've once more brought an OC to life with a brilliance unmatched! Can't wait for more! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (ia apparently NOT ALLOWEED TO SIGN IN) On: December 06, 2004 02:56 CST
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lolol, w00t Toga! Do that youkai thang!! Ah, the keyboard should be taken away from me late at night. Great chapter Sue, the conversation between mother and daughter was my favorite part. LoL, but the sweetness between Toga and Sierra was as enjoyable as ever.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 23:26 CST
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Uh huh...Training...hmm. Well, if you'll buy that...I have some ocean-front property in arizona... LOL! Quick on his feet and quick thinking however quetionable the answer may be. When reflexes and instincts take over and you're left with trying to come up with a plausible explanation...you can always ask for more pie.
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