| "Break Through" Reviews/Comments [ 147 ] |
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Title: This is Gr8
Reviewed By: vegez_lush [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic it's gr8 and i really hope u update really soon!!
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Sweet Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 18:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best Gravitation Fan Fiction I've ever read...^^ I give you 'props' man...((lol)) It's really well-written and if you changes the names and some occupations, you could call it your own^^. I think it's good...even if I am repeating myself a couple of times...^^;;;
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Reviewed By: weeeee On: February 24, 2005 17:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. You might however want to double check your work since there are some minor spelling/grammar errors. Besides that, I like the plot! This fic is addictive and I love what you did to Yuki...a mangaka...heheh ^0^ Just a suggestion; it'd be great to see your fic over at "http://fiction.gurabiteshiyon.net" It's an archive for gravi fics ^___^ Can't wait to read next chap!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:54 EST
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You're weaving one seriously tangled web, kiddo! Mikka's a bitch, Yuki's an ass. They deserve each other. I think Shuichi should chalk it up to experience and move on. Yuki would have to do some extreme apologizing before Shu-kun should even acknowledge his existence. Ryuichi would be a safe friend for the time being.
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Title: Anti-nostalgic review
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 04:33 EST
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Oh no!! Poor Shuichi!! Everyone loves him too much! Gad, I am so fucking in love with this story!! ... I did notice a few mistakes (namely the second half of the chapter being in italics) but for the most part all went smoothly...I can't help but feel sorry for everyone!! I feel bad for Mikka getting caught up in her own little delusions, I feel bad for Yuki having his heart pierced by the sight of his brother kissing Shu, I feel bad for Shu for being rejected by Yuki only to have his situation go from bad to worse, I feel sorry for Tohma for being with a bitchy wife, I feel sorry for Hiro for getting pulled into it all, I feel bad for Suguru cuz he deserves better, and I think that's jest about everyone ^_^ I can't wait till your next update!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 22:41 EST
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Well thanks for bringing me back to "reality" damnit. I almost forgot how much of a jerk Yuki can be. Poor sweet Shuichi handed his heart over on a silver platter. It's probably best that he left when he did. Maybe it'll throw the Ice Man off kilter a little... Love how Tohma sleazed his way into this chapter!
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Title: No Style review
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:36 EST
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Aw. Poor Shu...I LOVED the extended sex scenes! You rawk!! I'm keeping in mind how Shu never gives up!! YaY! Right, so I'm running behind schedule...I'll leave a better review on aff.net...maybe...
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Mc-88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 06:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHEHE!!!! I'M HERE!!! Well, I had nothing to do so, here I am once again.... ANd yes If you're thinking what I think you're thinking... I've read this chapter ALL over AGAIN!!!! Even the one in Fanfic.net... YUP! I did!!! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: shii~chan (love101) On: January 27, 2005 03:25 EST
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OMG!!! YAY!!! they all finally got together!!! and mikka was jealous!!!! this has been marked my favorite chapter in this story...despite it being so long!!!!!!!!!! i will wait as long as u need to update....i m very happy with this chapter, and i think i'll reread it^^ yay!!!!!!!!!
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Title: 10
Reviewed By: shii~chan (love101) On: January 27, 2005 02:19 EST
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heya...sorry i haven't reviewed in a while ^^. yay! go ryuichi! hmm...well, off to the next chapter^^
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Title: In The Moonlight
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:59 EST
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Jeez girl, I need to take a nap in the deep freeze after that chapter! I swear, your lemons just keep getting hotter and hotter - and you can write some hot lemons kiddo! So, are Shu and Mikka going to have a knock down, drag out, mud slinging, hair pulling, bitch match over Yuki? I mean come on, is the girl like, you know, clueless, or what? I just keep thinking "Bimbo" whenever she's in more than a sentence or two... This is such a juicy fic!
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Title: oops!
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 15:37 EST
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I forgot to ask something!! (well, that and I ran out of room) Are you gonna end up opening the next chapter with another lemon between Yuki and Shuichi? Cuz you made it seem like you would...plus, one can never get enough of those two ^_^
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Title: In the Moonlight review
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 15:33 EST
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Wow!! A long chapter deserves a long, well rounded review, so I'll do my best!...I find it interesting how you've sort of switched Shuichi's and Hiro's roles from the manga. Suddenly Hiro is the overemotional one while Shuichi keeps his feelings inside him and lets them drive him forward...I really like how you're depicting the relationship between Hiro and Tohma, its interesting to see how Hiro can crack Tohma's shell with his misplaced anger....I also like how you've made Suguru act a bit more like his age rather than the 'grumpy old man' he usually is. It's refreshing...YaY! You brought in K-san!! Hehe. "I'm K-san, but you can call me K-san"...I'm surprised Ryu did the line 3 times! Considering Bad Lucks popularity, that must have taken all day!...ah Shuichi's one track mind. Irritating at times, but entertaining overall. Ah! I'm running out of character space! I noticed that a few lines were in red...is there any reason for that?...I like Shu's shirt ^_^ When I read Glaring Dream, I couldn't hear it in my head. For some reason I kept hearing Iceman's Tearless. This drove me nuts...Ok now for the lemon! YaY! The way you wrote it jest completely blew me away. You didn't go on and on in full detail, but sort of hit the main points with a vague descriptiveness. It was awesome. I also liked how you were able to fit everyones personalities into the way they had sex. That always makes for the most intense scenes when it gets pulled off right. All in all, totally awesome chapter! |
Reviewed By: Mc-88 On: January 26, 2005 07:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHAHAHA!!! YO!!! I'm also here!!! Ooooh.... (^_^) SUGOI WA!!!! COuld you believe that I just found out about this website two weeks ago!!! How utterly embarassing!!! (~_~) Anywayz.... NYAHAHA!!!! GREAT!!! And YES! The night is still young!!! Hey!!! Are you planning on making Eiri ask Shu-chan to pose for him so, he could paint the little mynx..? Hehehe... Hey if not maybe you could, you know... insert it or something!!! (^_^) That would really be amazing.... (^_^) ANywayz, I'll end it here... Keep up the good work, ne?! ---> PEACE OUT!
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Title: Cool fic!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you named each chapter after a Gravi song!!! PREDILECTION ROCKS!!!!!!!! SO DOES GLARING DREAM, THE BEST I TELL YOU! Anyway,nice fic! JA NE!!!!
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