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Title: Supah Drive
Reviewed By: Reyn (too lazy to login) On: January 19, 2005 16:45 EST
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YaY! It's Ryu-kun!! He's here he's here!!! ::Dances around:: Y'know, I'm vaguely wondering what Yuki will think when he finally meets and gets to know Shuichi. Will he be annoyed beyond words or will he be too in lust to notice? And when will things start to really accelerate between Hiro and Tohma? Will Hiro mind if he ever finds Tohma's and Yuki's rumored relationship to be true? Wah! The suspense is killing me!!
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 14:27 EST
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Ryuichi's coming next chapter, you say? YaY!! Does that mean the introduction of K as well?? Eek! Can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 23:04 EST
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I'm sooo glad MM decided to fix their review issues. I just love this fic and hated that I couldn't post a review on it! You're really weaving a great tale so far. The relationships are amazing. Tohma/Yuki was a shock, but after reading their background, it made more sense. Poor Tohma - is he ever going to break through Hiro's shell? Funny how Yuki's such a hard ass to everyone except Mikka, huh? I'm really looking forward to what else you have up your sleeves, especially when Yuki and Shuichi finally meet again!
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Title: Reyn's review ^_^
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! I like how it's AU, but still somewhat sticks to the original plot. I do feel kinda bad about how Shuichi's not really doing it for the love of the music and how he's willing to give up his friendship with Hiro for the music contract, and how Hiro is sort of the little lost victim so far. But I'm sure all of it will be fixed as time goes on. I couldn't help but bark out a laugh when I read the cause of Yuki's father heart attack. Of course, I had to cover my mouth and scold myself right afterwards since you jumped over to show how Tatsuha felt, but that really was a good scene. I especially like how how the chapters are named after the Gravitation songs and how they each seem to fit (in their own weird way) with what the chapter is actually about. Lessee...I really don't know what other specific points I can compliment you on...oh yeah! I really liked the way you gave each character with their own little life summary as you introduced them. Somehow you made it fit jest right into the flow of the story. Personally, I don't think I could ever pull something like that off. Great job! Overall, I've gotta say this story RAWKS!! You are an awesome writer! I can't wait for more updates so I can see where all this is going to end up!! I'm counting on lots of broken hearts and lots of fullfilled lusts! Oh! I also like how you made Maiko! Totally in manga character! I salute you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had fallen in love with Gravitation the first time I watched it. It has been one of my favorite animes and I'd not yet read a fic that did it any justice. Until now... ^_^ Please continue your awesome writing and update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: superxela On: December 15, 2004 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 18:38 EST
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tee! thanx for telling me you updated! you don't have to anymore...this is in my fav. section...i honestly thought that it would be tohma and hiro to be the ones with the lemon...oh well, yuki and tohma are just as good! ~_^ you must update quickly!
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 09:11 EST
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Lookin' good, are you by any chance trying to make this into a Hiro/Tohma side-pairing? ~narrows eyes sucpiciously~ Because i think that would be...a great idea! The story is pretty original, keep on moving.
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Reviewed By: Phoebe On: December 05, 2004 16:02 EST
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Before I started to read this story, I had tried five horrible ones and thought that there are no good fanfics anymore. But this was excellent, thanks for saving my day.
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 05:24 EST
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You are sooooo good. Please write the next chapter soon. I'll cry if i can't read it soon, and we wouldn't want that! right? ~puppy eyes with tears in them~
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:56 EST
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Hey, I didn't know you wrote Gravi fics! I really like what you've written so far. Your little character summaries are a great idea. Shuichi's answer was something I can imagine him saying (obviously, Yuki liked it too!) Looking forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:03 EST
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I'm really liking this, you must continue.
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