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| "Break Through" Reviews/Comments [ 147 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: *slams fist in the air*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: May 25, 2006 00:11 EDT
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OH MY GOD WHOOT!!!! They got back together!!! And she was freaking THERE!! TAKE THAT BIOTCH!!!!! *dances around laughing and cheering* Holy crap, that so made my day! This has to be... one of the best moments in a fic. EVER. I can't even contain my glee. ^____^ Those two little drama queens took SO DAMN LONG, but they made it worth it! YOU made it worth it! And I like the way you showed the sex-a-thon in this chapter, give the details for the beginning, the first time, but if they're just going to go at it for hours more, you don't really need to have all that. And if they make like rabbits after this then we really don't need a blow-by-blow every time I suppose. Oh well. Can Mikka get fired?? Or emotionally tortured more? Made to watch/listen to Eiri and Schu have better sex than she could ever hope to offer? Please?!?! *begs with puppy dog eyes* And pleeeeeeaaase make sure that Eiri and Schu get their freaking issues out in the open soon, b/c all this messing up will be so NOT alright now that they .. kinda.. made up. Okay. I'll stop babbling now. But you are so the object of my worship at this moment. I think I'll print this last chapter out and carry it with me for hours of entertainment! ^_______^ *showers you with love, thanks, and skittles* ~K-chan
| Reviewed By: ur_mom On: April 23, 2006 03:27 EDT
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Whoa, im # 101, "yay" >.> y won't u update, im pretty sure it's been more than a month, but atleast reasure us (readers) tht u havent 4gotten, man only i a couple chpts left & im hooked on ur story like a drug!
| Reviewed By: Her [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:20 EDT
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Holy fucking shit, yes! I'm your 100 comment or! damn 3 digits, jujmps around* WHOOOOOO damn i came real qucik after tht one fucked up bitch lol (sry sry sry, plz dont b made at 1 f'd ^ b, it was ur name!) run away! *runs off* lol, ok! i might, have gone, just a little too far right there! ^^ anyway wicked sweet story it's like a drug, im so addicted 2 it o.O lol, yeah i seriouly need 2 get a life! lmao, up date soon
| Reviewed By: one f*cked up b*tch On: April 20, 2006 22:10 EDT
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damn, tth's the greatest story I evr read
| Title: Fanfic
Reviewed By: Sweet Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heloo again, still going strong? lol. I love it, even though I have grown out of anime and all that stuff I still read this one, and that says something!!! Bravo!
| Reviewed By: HER - Not Logged In On: April 11, 2006 04:00 EDT
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please ^date soon ur driving me nuts! :'(
| Reviewed By: black_rose1396 On: April 10, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I honestly believe you have the potenishal of Maik Murakami I look forward to your next update. You have me losing sleep over this, really!
| Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: BabyNydia On: March 28, 2006 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you win at life. This story is probaly one of the best gravitation story's I have read. Its really good. And please continue, ignore all the lil "When will Yuki and Shuichi Screw" fangirls. I would rather have a story with a good plot development then a story with no plot and just sex sex sex.
| Title: How many reviews are you waitign for?
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 08:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic alot please continue!
| Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippee!!!!! y'know, most fanfics focus on one couple but this focuses on lots of couples, YAY!!! me likey!! me likey!! The're finally together!!!!! Now shu & yuki! I know it takes time with this stuff and i never complained (gotta save the best for last I guess). i never complained though because you gave me my favorite pairing! HiroxTohma. that rocks!! and you would not get the same reaction from me if you wrote "They met, they fucked, they fought, the made up, then fucked some more." cuz honey, i swear if you ever did that to me or to this story (cuz it would so butcher this story) i swear, i will hunt and make you suffer for it! understand? ok now, we got that settled i noticed I missed a few updates so I'll have to check for updates more often. When WILL you update??? plz make it quick!!! (I DON'T WANT THIS STORY TO END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) but i do want to find out what happens so PLZ update!!!!! plz, really you're killing me here. you're really killing me. grrr, just update.
| Reviewed By: noali~dragontamer On: March 11, 2006 17:35 EST
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This is a heck of a long fic. Too long if you ask me, not that it matters much. The whole Yuki/Shu is really starting to get annoying, and you just intended to get them together once just to start this "chain of events" thing. But I am sorry I just feel is a little too much. TT.TT I must confess at times I had to skip more than half of the chapters. I have a headache from this fic, it's overwhealming, and believe me when I tell you that I've read longer fics than this one. Hopefully you will finish this soon. Don't get mad at me. >.< But I had to get this off my chest otherwise I will be in a very hissy mood all day. This is not a flame, just wanting to feel a little lighter, by expressing my opinion. Is your fic, so you decide what you want in the end without no-ones concent. Take care. ~noali
| Reviewed By: mirrorhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I love this story even though I've never seen or read Gravitation I became obsessed after reading a small summarry on the web. I am hoplessly obsessed with anime/manga especially yaoui and Yuri(so I'm perverted, well and gay but what the heck it makes life more fun). Ah lesbianism somehow lead to a gay related obsession(I've always had an anime/ manga obsession) Yaoi just mixes my obsessions mwhhhaaaha!!!!! also as a fellow author and lover of fan fiction I enjoyed your story all the more. If you want to read my fic, the title is MIGHTMARES and it's an Inuyasha fic so I hope you can find the time to read my fic and review of course. Sincerly, Mirrorhanyou ;)
| Title: About time!
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ever since reading this fic of yours I haven't been able to find one story that intrests me and I have waited not so patiently but keep it up and oh by the way what'll happen to suguru or are you just dragging us along because either way everything is great!
| Reviewed By: Anime_catt On: March 03, 2006 00:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, I am so glad that Ryu and Tatsuha are together. It almost broke my heart, when Tatsuha hugged Ryu and told him that he was glad that he and Shu had gotten together. How can anyone not see that he is not a total prick? That was great chapter and it looks like we are down to just one couple now, and I'm sure that their get together will be as awesome as the first two. Great fic, keep writing...
| Title: weeeee
Reviewed By: smirnoff19 On: March 02, 2006 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please.. don't let it be too long..
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