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Reviewed By: dbzlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 07:43 EST
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hi i just wanted to tell you what a great writter you are and that every story you wrote has great taste but i totally fell for your fic MEANT TO BE i just read ot and noticed that you havent update in a long while 1yr almost and i would just love it if you update that one (i would even buy the book if there was one)SO PLEASE update it
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Reviewed By: anime_babe92 On: January 10, 2006 21:42 EST
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OH! this is such an awesome fanfic! I love it! plz update soon. I dont have an account on this site and dont know if it costs money but I will check this fanfic everyday. It's so awesome. I want Ryuichi to make a big scene in front of Tatsuha's class... or not. ^^ WHen are the main idiots (Shu & Yu) gonna get together.. And that annoying Mikka get out of the way?? *whines* Why are you torchering me like this? BTW, I really liked the Minna, Minna, Minna chap. ^^ I can't wait for more. You got me and my friend a fan of Hiro x Tohma pairing now. ^^ oh and I kept finding the same little grammer mistake every time you used the word. When they are on the phone you always say "hanged up" but hanged isn't a word.. It's hung up .... so sry!!! really sorry if that sounded rude.. It was just getting on my nerves. >< But who cares as long as you update!!! if you wanna say anything to me my email address is anime_babe92@msn.com or anime_babe92@yahoo.com !!! plz update!! I'm begging!!
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Reviewed By: Fade_star On: January 07, 2006 05:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah...Finally an update. I am so happy, you have like made my year. I love the way you write, it actually makes my heart ache for all these damn men who can't get over thier stupid pride, and finally Ryu figures out who he likes. I'm so glad its Tatsuha. I can not wait to read the next chapter, I hope it will be out soon, but I know I must be patient, greatness occurs slowly. Thanks for the update :)
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Reviewed By: monica19 On: January 05, 2006 02:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to show you how devoted I am. hah. I read your story twice.. twice here.. and twice in aff.net. obsessed? yes. I am soo sorry of you feel pressured. can't help it.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 00:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Its been awhile, that i reread ur story. Its got to be one of the hotest Gravitation stories out there. You have a few grammer issues and that one chapter thats all in italics, but hey... ur do'n good. Keep post'n
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Reviewed By: >o On: December 07, 2005 19:18 EST
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Kishimoto Masashi-sensei created Naruto. AND DON'T YOU EVER FORGET IT AGAIN!
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Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this sooo great! You have 2 hurry up w/ those next chpts =D sry, i forgot, u cant rush perfection! lol xD omg, or story must b made 4um crack! b/c it's a dug & it's accdictive! lmao, i cant yet 4 the next chpt! im so- so, hey, y is there a puddle under the chair, it wasn't there b4! lol OMG ewww, jk, it cant b puddle, cus tht aint no water! xD ok ok, eww god, tht's sick, yeah, im a prev! ^^
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Title: it keeps getting better
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 19:39 EDT
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As always, I'm enjoying this. I just feels so bad for Suguru.. :( Tatsuha should be with him! LOL But hot fun with Ryu isn't all bad :p Mikka's annoying. I wouldn't want to be with her so I can understand why Eiri wouldn't.. woman needs to buy a personality. Great job! Dharmaserenity
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so into this fic it is scary! this is the 2nd gravitation fic that i've read. wow. woman, you_are_gifted! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. shocked really. if you notice on my profile, i pretty much read just inuyasha fics, but i have recently gotten into grav. i have yet to see the anime, tho. i will now. ^_^ i love how you portray ALL of the characters. you give them alot of depth that most writers simply can't achieve. i truly hope to see a new update soon. you have something good going here, and i am eager to see it through to the end. ahhh. what a place you left it. @.@ but, i'm happy for hiro and tohma-san. anyhow, just know that you have a big fan here that is patiently waiting for more. thanks.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 03:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is so great. If i gave medals for stories i read u be one of the top five in fanfictions. Congrats, ur so added to my fav authors.
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Reviewed By: Joh M On: October 01, 2005 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me like. It's something good that you decided to continue this story. I mean, I know its really hard to continue because you have all these thoughts running aroun. ^^ It happens a lot to me. I start my first doujinshi page with one plot and then I want to make a new plot. ^^'' You get the idea.
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Title: sept.'s chapter (forgot ch. name ^_^')
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 15:00 EDT
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wah! I missed a few errors!! gomen nasai!!! I must commit sepiku!!! right now!! (grabs sword and aims it at belly) I am UNWORTHY!!! wah!! Heh...sorry. I'm currently working my way through the Peacemaker series. After that, I'll be working on the FullMetal Alchemist series. And then hopefully I'll catch up on the Saiyuki Reload series. And in the middle of all that I'll be happily dancing around my three dvds of Kyo Kara Maoh, which is the best anime ever. Anyways, back to your story. I feel so bad for Tatsuha. I really hope Ryuichi falls for him in the end. But then who would Fugisaki get? wah!
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 11:16 EDT
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Okay, here's the thing... I started reading this fic this past summer and I didn't write down the name or the author-- I download them to a disk b/c I don't have consistant internet access. I've spent the rest of my time searching for it so that I could put it into my favorite stories... I FINALLY FOUND YOU!!!!!! I'm soooo happy!!! You're doing so very well with this!! please keep it up! I'm really excited to see how all of this goes down!! You've especially got me intrigued with this Ryuichi, Tatsuha, Shuichi, Suguru love... square -_-VV that you've got going here!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!! Please update soon! And by the way... longer chapters are the best!!!! *Writes the longest chapters anyone's ever seen, and takes ten times longer than usual to write them -_-VVVV* Thanks again and good luck (Tee-hee or Bad Luck >.
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Title: Fantastic! X3
Reviewed By: Aots On: September 15, 2005 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, has it ever been a long time since I reviewed! n_n; Sorry about that... Welp! I'm finally up to date with your story, it gives me an ache in the stomach-not in a 'your story sucks' way (DON'T YOU DARE THINK THAT!) it's just all the problems going on with the characters, they're real problems (and to tell you the truth I love all the in depth everyday love problems in this fic, it hits home you know? Hence the stomach aches...). So, I've enjoyed everything I've read so far- though I really wish Yuki and Shuichi would get together soon (seeing Shuichi miserable makes me sad -pats Shu on the head-) though I can understand with the realtionship issues that it would take a while... and Ryu hitting on Shu is starting to make me nervous (like he's going to rape the poor boy or something O.o). You have to write more soon, you have no idea how much the suspence is killing me!! I need to know what's going to happen next!! Please update soon! -gets on her knees to grovel- PWEASE~!
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Title: Break Through
Reviewed By: Lady Rave On: September 10, 2005 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome. No, I'm soo not bored. As you can see i traveled all the way from the FanFiction site to review lol... true fan! ::smile:: I love the nail biting wait and build up. I like the fore shadowing because it's not too obvious... like we got no clue what Mika's gonna do. And i can't wait for the Yaoi Goodness you promised. I wonder what's up with Noriko... okay enough with my rambling.
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