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Reviewed By: RisingPhoenix On: April 19, 2012 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep checking back to see if you've updated this story and am disappointed when I see you haven't =( I must have read the entire thing at least 15 times from the beginning! Please please please finish the story. I have come across about 3 fics which I think should be animated and this is at the top of the list ! |
Title: Good!
Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was great! I had to take a day to read through the whole thing, but I think that this is so awsome! I liked that you named all the chapters titles after Gravitation songs, be they Nittle Grasper or Bad Luck. Keep up the good work, hopefully you will post sooon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 09:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And everyone was so happy for a while! I would've never thought of Hiro and Tohma as possibly being a couple, but now that you have paired them together I think they're cute together! I do like Ryuichi better with Shuichi though rather than Tatusha. I think it was so cute in Gravitation EX when Ryuichi confesses his love for Shuichi. But ultimately Shuichi belongs to Yuki! Yay for Shuichi and Yuki! I'm glad you had Shuichi dye his hair pink too! I love his hair in the anime! I can't wait for you to update! Hopefully everything works out in the end. Man, there are some ruthless women in this story! ^__^
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Reviewed By: ~Sami On: July 04, 2007 15:08 EDT
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WOW!! Just sat and read your entire fic in two days.......SO much fun!.. and angst!... and drama!! ^_~ I was so hoping I could read the _entire_ fic...to conclusion -- and you left me dangling!! -- and I see it's been months since your last update -- oh, please, Please, PLEASE say you'll be updating soon!??! You can't just leave your readers hanging on such a cliffie!!! I gotta know what happens -- those b*tches better not be getting their way -- they SO don't deserve to!!! ^_^ Anyway -- thanks for the great read and here's keeping my fingers-crossed that I'll see an update/conclusion soon. Ja!!
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Title: waiting
Reviewed By: dharmaserenityishere On: May 13, 2007 18:07 EDT
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So there's just one chappie after this, right? I found this one to be a little too long but I still enjoyed reading it. It just took me a long time to get through. Well, looking forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: ~Dhampir~ On: February 26, 2007 13:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed your story thus far, but I have to say that your grammar needs work. Even though you thank beta readers at the top of your chapters, there still seem to be some major, but minor mistakes that take away from the story. I keep finding myself focusing more on the mistakes than the story. The main repeats I've seen are "Is" when it should say "it's", "out" instead of "our" and others like "hem, then, the and ham" instead of "them, than, them/then and than." I really do like your plot, but detail seems to be lacking in places as well, though that might just be me. I do like detail. Anyway, I will read the last two chapters, but even after your complete this story, I beg you go back and fix any mistakes you find because others will still read it even after it's no longer updated. Thanks again. Dhampir
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Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next chapter :XD It's like a soap opera except with the gravi cast XD. Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: angel (tenshi of hikari) On: January 14, 2007 09:23 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never forgot about the flashes. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO YU AND SHUKI!?!?!?! I mean... Yuki and Shu... *cough* I really like how well Ryuichi's taking this. But I'm worried how people at Tatsuha's school are treating him. hee hee, That sex tape mentioned... Is Yuki going to marry Mikka then release a sex tape of him and Shuichi... HA! I'd love that even if you don't do it that way, It'd show Mikka her place. PLEASE MAKE HIRO TELL SOMEONE ABOUT MIKA'S THREAT THAT KNOWS IT IS A BLUFF!!! Please lat it be a bluff. I was like, crying when Hiro was telling Shu that! *sigh* just... please... update soon. I can't believe it's the end... I agree with fullmetalguitar (nli): Please don't break my heart with this last chapter.
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Reviewed By: Fadingstar On: January 14, 2007 04:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I haven't reviewed in a while but just wanted to say, great chapter. It's kinda sade to see an awesome fic being finished up. I can't wait to read the next part and will be checking back often to check to see if the next chapter is posted. Again...GREAT JOB can't wait to read the rest
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: January 13, 2007 13:46 EST
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Nooo!!! Yuki and Shu just can't end. they just can't! I mean, goddamn.. Yuki's being an absolute idiot, and well!! *bursts into tears again* I have gotten SO CAUGHT UP IN THIS! Normally their break-ups don't leave me feeling TOO torn, but following this fic all they way throug, and waiting to see what happens... I mean, I SOBBED when Shu left, after finally, FINALLY getting back with Yuki, he left?? I couldn't stop crying. And Hiro needs to talk to Touma!! Stupid Mika... *grumbles* She should get OVER IT, Touma already said that even without Hiro he won't go back to her crazy butt... And Tats and Ryu will make it thourgh, I'm certain < .... Please don't break my heart with this last chapter!
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Reviewed By: leilachan nsi On: January 13, 2007 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, your cliffies!!! i hope you post the last chap and ep soon. the suspense is maddening. poor shuu, he has to finally get his way, somehow. yuki is always screwing him around. ^_^ as for tohma and hiro, they should be fine, right?? ahhh, i gotta find out. man, tats and ryuu have me mostly worried about jail time. please, not that. take care. p.s. *hates mikka*
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Title: AAAhhhhh
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 08:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaaaaahh! U got to finish the story soon Im gonna die o_O Aaaaahhhh!
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Reviewed By: crazeme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 11:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I have spent the last three days reading it and nothing else. I was very impressed with your writing skill. Excellent work. Looking forward to your next update.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: theundefeatablemj [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stayed up for quite some time to read this fic. I love it, really. You have a great and interesting plot that isn't too hard to follow; even though I felt that some character interactions (or lack thereof) were drawn out I still couldn't stop from reading. Your lemons are quite amazing too.
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Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 09:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this totally kicks ass write moer write more please evil fanfic junkie here O and watch out for some of my work by Villagefox coming in a few months
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