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 Reviewed By: relientk_fan13  On: January 15, 2006 04:14 EST
Comment/Review:
god damn it, im getting pissed off @ how o prolong it thiss way, please make happen bewteen YxS soon! & watsw/ SxRxTxS thing oing on O.o ihis is getting veyr annoying, i mean ur story's good but im go insane, and when said "married" i slamed the key board, ^^. oh, wait, thts not good lol i hope u update soon again, and will u make sumthing finally really happy with SuxYu
 Reviewed By: Anime_Catt  On: January 14, 2006 03:40 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you updated. You did a wonderful job, and personally, I love the sap and angst. But hopefully the next chapter will have a happy get together? I'll check everyday for the next chapter (I'm not kidding). Keep writing!
 Title: omg I just read this all in one sitting
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in)  On: January 13, 2006 21:46 EST
Comment/Review:
I am so in love with this fic, I am in utter awe of your abilities. This is really a one in thousand fic., I mean.. wow. I am almost totally incoherent I loved it so much. Needless to say, I'll be dying for an update ^_~ Oh, and one more thing. If Yuki doesn't realize that Shu-kun was NOT sleeping around, then SOMEONE needs to slap him REALLY hard for me. ^_^
 Reviewed By: dbzlover [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 11, 2006 07:43 EST
Comment/Review:
hi i just wanted to tell you what a great writter you are and that every story you wrote has great taste but i totally fell for your fic MEANT TO BE i just read ot and noticed that you havent update in a long while 1yr almost and i would just love it if you update that one (i would even buy the book if there was one)SO PLEASE update it
 Reviewed By: anime_babe92  On: January 10, 2006 21:42 EST
Comment/Review:
OH! this is such an awesome fanfic! I love it! plz update soon. I dont have an account on this site and dont know if it costs money but I will check this fanfic everyday. It's so awesome. I want Ryuichi to make a big scene in front of Tatsuha's class... or not. ^^ WHen are the main idiots (Shu & Yu) gonna get together.. And that annoying Mikka get out of the way?? *whines* Why are you torchering me like this? BTW, I really liked the Minna, Minna, Minna chap. ^^ I can't wait for more. You got me and my friend a fan of Hiro x Tohma pairing now. ^^ oh and I kept finding the same little grammer mistake every time you used the word. When they are on the phone you always say "hanged up" but hanged isn't a word.. It's hung up .... so sry!!! really sorry if that sounded rude.. It was just getting on my nerves. >< But who cares as long as you update!!! if you wanna say anything to me my email address is anime_babe92@msn.com or anime_babe92@yahoo.com !!! plz update!! I'm begging!!
 Reviewed By: Fade_star  On: January 07, 2006 05:31 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeah...Finally an update. I am so happy, you have like made my year. I love the way you write, it actually makes my heart ache for all these damn men who can't get over thier stupid pride, and finally Ryu figures out who he likes. I'm so glad its Tatsuha. I can not wait to read the next chapter, I hope it will be out soon, but I know I must be patient, greatness occurs slowly. Thanks for the update :)
 Reviewed By: monica19  On: January 05, 2006 02:54 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
to show you how devoted I am. hah. I read your story twice.. twice here.. and twice in aff.net. obsessed? yes. I am soo sorry of you feel pressured. can't help it.
 Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2006 00:06 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its been awhile, that i reread ur story. Its got to be one of the hotest Gravitation stories out there. You have a few grammer issues and that one chapter thats all in italics, but hey... ur do'n good. Keep post'n
 Reviewed By: >o  On: December 07, 2005 19:18 EST
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Kishimoto Masashi-sensei created Naruto. AND DON'T YOU EVER FORGET IT AGAIN!
 Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 28, 2005 00:53 EST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this sooo great! You have 2 hurry up w/ those next chpts =D sry, i forgot, u cant rush perfection! lol xD omg, or story must b made 4um crack! b/c it's a dug & it's accdictive! lmao, i cant yet 4 the next chpt! im so- so, hey, y is there a puddle under the chair, it wasn't there b4! lol OMG ewww, jk, it cant b puddle, cus tht aint no water! xD ok ok, eww god, tht's sick, yeah, im a prev! ^^
 Title: it keeps getting better
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2005 19:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
As always, I'm enjoying this. I just feels so bad for Suguru.. :( Tatsuha should be with him! LOL But hot fun with Ryu isn't all bad :p Mikka's annoying. I wouldn't want to be with her so I can understand why Eiri wouldn't.. woman needs to buy a personality. Great job! Dharmaserenity
 Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2005 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i am so into this fic it is scary! this is the 2nd gravitation fic that i've read. wow. woman, you_are_gifted! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. shocked really. if you notice on my profile, i pretty much read just inuyasha fics, but i have recently gotten into grav. i have yet to see the anime, tho. i will now. ^_^ i love how you portray ALL of the characters. you give them alot of depth that most writers simply can't achieve. i truly hope to see a new update soon. you have something good going here, and i am eager to see it through to the end. ahhh. what a place you left it. @.@ but, i'm happy for hiro and tohma-san. anyhow, just know that you have a big fan here that is patiently waiting for more. thanks.
 Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 10, 2005 03:53 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG this is so great. If i gave medals for stories i read u be one of the top five in fanfictions. Congrats, ur so added to my fav authors.
 Reviewed By: Joh M  On: October 01, 2005 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Me like. It's something good that you decided to continue this story. I mean, I know its really hard to continue because you have all these thoughts running aroun. ^^ It happens a lot to me. I start my first doujinshi page with one plot and then I want to make a new plot. ^^'' You get the idea.
 Title: sept.'s chapter (forgot ch. name ^_^')
Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2005 15:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
wah! I missed a few errors!! gomen nasai!!! I must commit sepiku!!! right now!! (grabs sword and aims it at belly) I am UNWORTHY!!! wah!! Heh...sorry. I'm currently working my way through the Peacemaker series. After that, I'll be working on the FullMetal Alchemist series. And then hopefully I'll catch up on the Saiyuki Reload series. And in the middle of all that I'll be happily dancing around my three dvds of Kyo Kara Maoh, which is the best anime ever. Anyways, back to your story. I feel so bad for Tatsuha. I really hope Ryuichi falls for him in the end. But then who would Fugisaki get? wah!
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