| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: November 15, 2005 02:32 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did i say i love this story already? Well, if i didn't, i can honestly say that this story kicks all sorts of unholy amounts of ass, each chapter makes it more and more perfect and i can't wait until more show up, this is simply so damn perfect stuff to read! Please update more, hopefully soon too but oh well... i've reviewed this a few times already on AFF so i decided to review it here this time instead. hope to hear from you soon again!
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Title: Sugoi!!!!
Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've officially been sucked in... Your story is wonderful! I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment ^_^ And I humbly offer my betaing services... you can check up on my writing skills via the one-shots or story I've got up and/or Barachan22 here on MM. I beta for her as well. Don't worry about writing Lemons... write em if you feel comfortable doing so. You can always get a hentai beta if the beta you have doesn't do them. Or just use your imagination ^_^ It's a fanfic.. they can be flexible LOL Ciao and keep writing!
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Title: End
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 15:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
Um... is this like the end of the Seduction Game? Cause it sounds like it.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME fic, i love it, you HAVE to update soon, i can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 16:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
update dammit make n-uther chappie!please
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 09:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Not sure exactly how I came upon this one, but Im glad I did. I like how you put everyone in this AU story. Keep it up, and hope you can update soon.
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Title: AFF
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 06:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been reading thois on AFF. Glad to see you here...now I can get updates when you...ahem...update! VERY good story -write more!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 00:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
hun, i am seriously loving this story!! ^_^ you're doing a fantastic job with it! i really hope you continue, very very very soon! please update quickly! xD
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Title: dont stop
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great chapter i prey that u keep going
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Title: dont stop
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great chapter i prey that u keep going
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: September 27, 2005 20:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really do like this story quite a bit. One side note though, you're last chapter has html code throughout it. I wasn't certain if you knew or not. Otherwise, great read! I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:43 PDT
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Wow. -drool- That whole licking scene was HOTT! I love this story. This is the first time I've reviewed in a long time...but, this story is to damned good! The suspense is killiing me! I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it caomes out soon!^^
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Reviewed By: Ouchies... On: September 27, 2005 10:16 PDT
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Your last chapter is too hard to read :( with all the HTML tag things everywhere....But your other chapters were SUPREME HOTTNESS~!
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Reviewed By: SUGI On: September 23, 2005 10:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOKIN REALLY GOOD UPDATE SOON
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Title: Update it
Reviewed By: ReMbY On: September 17, 2005 21:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have very much injoyed this story i hope for you to update it soon you got me hanging here.
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