| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 19:31 PST
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(T.T)I think I've read over your first two chapters at least 20 times now! Your writing skills=FANTASTIC!!! I can SOOO Not wait for the next chapter hope I dont have to wait much longer!*wipes tear*
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Title: Very Nice!
Reviewed By: DarcKyHlt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 13:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting scene,and setting.I love every minute of it.-I can't wait for the next ch. plz email me at: QtPi_1404@yahoo.com when a new chapter is made.-Very good wording,and imagination.I am able to paint the scenes in my mind as I read,which is a very good thing.
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Reviewed By: buyo On: February 07, 2005 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz hurry and write the next chapter
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 14:02 PST
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WoW Omg I LOVE your Fic so Far!!
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Title: i luv it
Reviewed By: sweet-mizery On: February 02, 2005 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! i LUV ur fanfic...itz so awesome!!! can u lyk...write more plz?!!? itz rly awesome -ur fan
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Title: CONTINUE!!!!
Reviewed By: ihatepurplemonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 19:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was frickin great! awesome story.please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TweetyReviewer On: January 28, 2005 19:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, the spelling/Grammer would be 9.5. You're style of writing is very refreshing. I review only the very best, and yours is. Your speeling has a few minor mistakes, but what doesn't? The enjoyment factor would really be 20 , it's a great story. I enjoy how you portray kagome and fierce-sexy-stuborness. Write more - and I'll review more.......promise.
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Reviewed By: Inudemon On: January 28, 2005 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and how Kagome didn't just fall over Inuyasha! your story is really original and creative and I admire how you didn't make Kagome some weak ditz like most people do and you added a competitve spirit to her! and i just LOVE YOUR STORY!!! and I can't wait til you update!
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Reviewed By: seashell On: January 20, 2005 21:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story, can't wait till you update.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Hopes_fall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 13:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's all around! PLEASE UPDATE FASTER! :(! PLEASE! And add yummy lemons PLEASE! ^_^ For me? Anyway LOVE IT LOVE IT~ As usual...lol. Well Bai!
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Reviewed By: ficfan7 (logged out) On: January 11, 2005 19:36 PST
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i realy like your fic, keep updating and i'll keep reading
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Reviewed By: animeangel779 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 15:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the way you didnt rush into a lemon or anything. You gave each character a unique personaliyty and then inforced it instead of just being like "oh well...Kagome likes inuyasha so besides the point that shes a virgin shes gonna fuck him anyway". u dont have to go painfully slow though. Just a medium pace. I could wait one more chapter for a lemon. Good job so far though. Im looking forward to another chapter.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: January 11, 2005 14:32 PST
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wow. great story. really interesting since i usually like sess/kag pairings. can't wait until the next chapter! :]
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 08:44 PST
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LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: moomoo On: December 12, 2004 09:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, i hope u update soon
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