| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 15:39 PDT
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Thanks for starting this story again. I just about gave up on it. I love this story please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 12:51 PDT
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I am so glad you've started up this story again! It was one of my favorites. This chapter was great and I can't wait till the next one comes out! Good luck!
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Reviewed By: CherishSerenity On: October 19, 2007 11:55 PDT
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Two thumbs up!!! Amazing story..I've been following it since the beggining, and I'm exctited for the new update!!!!
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Reviewed By: redney [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 09:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a totally cheap shot to try and insert your biased and ignorant political views into an IY Fan Fic. Stop using this forum as a platform to try and indoctrinate people to your way of thinking...or not thinking really. You should be ashamed of yourself...but you probably aren't!
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 14:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. I Hope that you update very soon. You know I like the idea that you do express your views. It makes it interesting. For you that don't agree then IF YOU DON"T LIKE IT THE DON"T READ IT.. Simple as that. I for one think its a very good story and will continue to read.
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Reviewed By: future author On: October 18, 2007 12:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad that you were able to update after so long. I enjoyed reading this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially now that if my suspension are right, Naraku will be getting involved soon if the mist is a clue. So things are about to get even more interesting. Until the next update good luck!!
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Reviewed By: adara205 On: October 17, 2007 08:45 PDT
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I agree with Fed up. Show some resources to your facts if you're going to make statements like that. My cousin is in Iraq and you've insulted him in the worst way. You should be ashamed.
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Title: one more thing
Reviewed By: Tink2kagome On: October 17, 2007 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that expressing you opinion in a fan fic is very creative and a good way to get your view across. Evreyone has a right to their own opinion and sharing it is alright...My friend read this and said she didnt appreciat it so i just wanted to tell you that i suport you!
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Title: Loveed it!
Reviewed By: Tink2kagome On: October 17, 2007 08:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this!!!! This is tottaly in my top 5 fics.
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Reviewed By: Fed up. On: October 16, 2007 22:54 PDT
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I think it is disgusting that you're forcing your opinion on your readers. I read fan FICTION to read fiction not regurgitated media propaganda. Get you're facts right and show your resources (i.e websites, books, or essays) if you plan on turning fiction into your misguide fallacies. In responses to your undoubted "you don't have to read it" remark that will follow this comment, you are most assuredly right. It won't ever happen again. By the way -->"While no people agree that Iraq will become a second Vietnam, the fact tell a different story. " you are the type of person who helped American soldiers lose the war in Vietnam. "Celebrating the 29th anniversary of the fall of Saigon, the North Vietnamese general who led his forces to victory said Friday he was grateful to leaders of the anti-war movement." my sources: http://www.9thinfantrydivision.com/html/actualenemy.htm
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 14:22 PDT
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Omg! I always checked in from time to time to see if you updated this story and everytime you didnht? I was so sad. But now that you did Im so happy to see how the story is continuing. I really cant wait to seee how Inuyasha and Kaogme's relationship will progress. And I wonder if Inuyahsa will be dumb enough to hurt the one person who actually cared about him and not the things that he came with. Anyways great chapter and please UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 00:09 PDT
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Hey, USC lost to Stanford! Whooo!! Sorry, unrelated to the story, but hella-awesome nonetheless. My allegiances are probably obvious now. I'm very happy to see that you are indeed alive. I like how this chapter veers away from the sexual tension of the relationship and more into the personal attractions. I love the tension and nuance of your writing. A great chapter, as always, and I hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 22:22 PDT
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Glad to see this fic back in action! Inuyasha's gonna break one of these days, I bet... thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: October 15, 2007 19:39 PDT
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finally! i have waited so long! great chapter, i love kagome's speech thing, totally proves that girls KICK ASS lmao you're a great athor, i will now applaud you *applause* =D
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 17:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finaly....great ch
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