| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 11, 2005 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting turn in events. Keep up the good work. I wonder how this will work out if koga's mate wants her dead to... ^_~
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: September 11, 2005 20:20 EDT
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Wooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Leep it up, nice angry wife touch...lol
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Reviewed By: reimei-kage (not logged in) On: September 11, 2005 20:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooo, someone sounds angry...with good reason, of course. I kind of feel bad for Aiko, but I feel worse for Kagome. I can't wait to see how Hiei works this out! -rei
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: September 10, 2005 20:16 EDT
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That was deep... but VERY good... lol
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Reviewed By: Rabid(not logged in) On: September 05, 2005 00:34 EDT
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Heh. I reread chapter 5 - having been sucked onto mediaminer for the first time all summer... ^-^; Ah well, one thing that really bother me during this chapter, using the word 'ass'. 'ran his claws over her ass', my pet peeve I guess. It just seems a waste to use the word 'ass' when there are different words to convey the same thing. Other than that, nothing obvious at all... ^-^; Writer's block on my own story. 'till next time.
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 15:23 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 02:22 EDT
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I can't wait to read more, you really know torture. Its a great fic and I hope to read the next chapter soon.
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Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 17:06 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (not logged in) On: September 02, 2005 09:01 EDT
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twisted fic ill be waiting for more... awsome...your really know your torture
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Title: 3 reasons
Reviewed By: Arukas09206 On: September 01, 2005 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am writing this for 3 reasons. 1: I'm going to start out by saying that I have been a fan of yours for quite awhile. I first read your work on ff, and since then your originality, creativity and down to earth perspective has never disappointed me. I look foward to when your other stories are revised and/or updated. Now enough of my hero worship on to number 2: this story has kept me on the edge of my seat for quite awhile. It has to be one of the most twisty, gripping stories I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens next. 3: I have been checking the update dates on the story and it says it's updated twice but on chapter 1. I don't know what's up but it's killing me. well i look foward to your updates.
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Title: 3 reasons
Reviewed By: Arukas3223227 On: September 01, 2005 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am writing this for 3 reasons. 1: I'm going to start out by saying that I have been a fan of yours for quite awhile. I first read your work on ff, and since then your originality, creativity and down to earth perspective has never disappointed me. I look foward to when your other stories are revised and/or updated. Now enough of my hero worship on to number 2: this story has kept me on the edge of my seat for quite awhile. It has to be one of the most twisty, gripping stories I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens next. 3: I have been checking the update dates on the story and it says it's updated twice but on chapter 1. I don't know what's up but it's killing me. well i look foward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 23:04 EDT
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*smifles* I liked Kouga. *sniffles* But keep going it's a good story, heart-wrenching and horrifing but good. *wipes eyes*
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 07:34 EDT
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I must say the darkness can be a bit disturbing but I think it adds to what will be Kagomes strangth if I'm not mistaken at what you are attempting. Poor Kouga. I understand why it had to be that way but still poor Kouga. You have a few grammatical errors but the story is still very well written. The darknes is a bit upsetting but I still like the story. You definately get points for orginality. I hope you get the sufficent reviews to keep writing this fic.
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 14:41 EDT
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how clould you do koga like that oh my god god god wow that was intese im going to go take a bath now.
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Reviewed By: ~kim~ On: August 28, 2005 14:28 EDT
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so sad. i was really hoping that kouga would make it out somehow, but... a well it is still a great story and i can't wait to see what will happen next and how you're going to take it from this dark place it is in now. i really hope that it will look better in the near future.
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