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| "On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 441 ] | | Pages (30): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: OtNoaBRM
Reviewed By: Orange colored banana-grapes On: July 17, 2005 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, me again. Woooooo! Same reasoning for the rating as the last review I left you. Thanks for uploading all my chapters to this site. Dmit, it took me forever to find the review button again. I couldn't find it. That's just lame that they do that to you. Anyway, I like it and I'm not really good at reviewing and I don't want to be mean but when you go back and do the whole re-writing thing you mentioned you wanted to do, you might want to fix this chapter a little bit. It seems like it's rush-forced. Do not take the story down or feel bad because I say this! If you do, I will... Take away... um... *brain dead at moment* Hiei. Yes. Torture right there. You're going to take this and just fix it up a little, but you're not taking it down, and you're not feeling bad, and you're gonna be happy because that is one long friggen run-on sentence. T.K.
| Reviewed By: silver_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story; you do a grate job in making it so people will now what's going on. I've got just one question thou, how many more chapters are kagome and Hiei going to be with Masakazu? Im interested to find out how kagome and Hiei get away form him and how they get to the human world. I have one plea to make, pertly pleas kill Masakazu before the end of the story. His just a character and I hate him as if he were real. Sad I now, but its true. You're doing a grate job of keeping Hiei in character, keep up the grate work. I hope u up date soon, but take your time, your readers don't want you all stressed out. Talk to u later. ~silverpup~
| Title: On the night of a blood red moon
Reviewed By: Orange colored banana-grapes On: July 10, 2005 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reasoning for the style being so low is because of the whole thingy where you split up the dialogue and discriptive. It makes it harder to read. Anyway, I really enjoyed this first chapter and I would like to know what's going on with Hiei. Who is this human who he met and made a promise to? Why did he say he'd find her again? ... you know what? There appears to be more chapters, and I will go read them. I'm not doing too good at the chapter anymore. Your story has distracted me. Oh, damn! And I will say again that I do not like mm's format. It took me like three whole minutes to find the damn "review" button, and that was at the top of the page. Maybe that's why less people review mm posted stories because it's so hard! ff makes it way easy. Go ff! Anyway, said I'd go to the next chapter, and I shall! T.K.
| Title: Ch 1-6
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 16:35 EDT
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ugh, I anxiously await retribution at the hands of Hiei and hopefully Kagome. Please write more, I can tell their suffering is not to end soon, but just the same... I also want to know how their shared suffering influences the totality eclipse and the sceptre of darkness (I hope I got those terms correct). Are Inuyasha, Shippo and Sesshomaru still around? Will they find her? How is Kagome going to deal with this torture?
| Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 14:11 EDT
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awsome story. i love how you've portrayed the char. i enjoy reading this story and i hope that the chaperts come soon! because you are one of my fav author's :) well update soon and toodles!
| Reviewed By: Annaku On: May 24, 2005 20:32 EDT
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OHHHH POOR HIEI POOR KAGOME TO HAVE THERE VERGINITY TWORN AWAY. THIS STORY IS REALY SAD BUT ITS STILL REALLY GOOD. DOSE KAGOME FINNALY GET AWAY OR DOSE SHE DIE THERE??? WILL SHE MEET UP WITH SHIPPO OR SESSHOMARU IN THE FUETUER?? PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
| Title: Kuroneko13 (tltsi)
Reviewed By: Kuroneko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 20:27 EDT
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I love your fic, I can't wait for you to update again. Also I love how easy it is to follow, also easy too read. Even the chapters are pretty long and it's original!!! This is such an addicting story!! Now I shall beg, and bribe you. Please, please, please update soon, I will give you ice cream, and cake!!!!!! (I'm probably scaring you now aren't I? ^_^*)
| Title: On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 14:28 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 22:24 EDT
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i like it a lot i hope u update soon
| Title: NOOOOOOOO -_-,
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: April 26, 2005 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo!!!!! it stoped. there was no more. I need it, i crave it. Thats it! you are going to the very top of my list of favs, so you see you must update soon or i shall cry -_-, see You are very talented and i can't wait to read how they get out, what they find out about each other and, the most important part, thier meeting in kags time... OMG, i wonder if inu and shippo will find her comming out of the well and find out what happened... awwwwwww, now i want it even more. PLEEEEEAAASSSEEEEE update really really soon, you have no idea how much i worship your fic. Darks are always the best... ^_~
| Title: NOOOOOOOO -_-,
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: April 26, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo!!!!! it stoped. there was no more. I need it, i crave it. Thats it! you are going to the very top of my list of favs, so you see you must update soon or i shall cry -_-,
| Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY F***ing s**t! I love, no i worship you fic. I love dark fics and i am only on chapter two of yours but it is already turning out to be my fav fic of all... ^_~
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 04:24 EDT
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@_@ eh... next chapter 'tis up... read to your heart's content... must.. sleep... *snore* Eh, next chapter's up, and Masakazu hasn't been killed in a week... so I won't bother killing him tonight, as I just want to sleep... hmm... tests... I promise myself, after all the tests are done, I'm going to re-read 'Whispers in the Night... no wait... no I'm mixing up your stories... sleep now! Yes, sleep.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 01:16 EDT
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Eh... Shabopo's review makes far more sense than mine, so I may have had more, but she had more meaningful stuff. Hm... though she does bring up an interesting point, with the heat cycle. I hadn't thought of that, as I was far too focused on thinking of way's to murder Masakazu... speaking of that, here's another way. Stick him in a room full of... cute things! ^-^ He'd go insane soon, and then murder himself. Anyways! The next chapter is up, just figured you'd like to know! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And then I started thinking... how long will she be imprisoned? ...long enough for Hiei to go into heat again? I could so see Masakazu getting a sick kick out of confining the two if/when Hiei has little to no control over his physical desires and perhaps actions. For him to be set loose on the one he refuses to hurt. Keh. I've got a twisted mind. Though... Kagome'd understand, I think. If they were together that long, she'd know it wasn't what he wanted to do. I'm eagerly waiting to see what is coming... I'm trying to procrastinate studying, which is bad as finals start monday, but I can't focus and I'm sort of hoping you'll update soonish! ...sort of rambling review, but I believe I left a thorough one on ff.net, so lackage of guilt here. Heh, for killing Masakazu, there's always flaying alive and then burned to death.
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