| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: forbidden On: June 10, 2005 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't stop after the purity series are done. I love your stories and can't wait to see the next chapters of justification.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 00:21 EDT
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i really like the touch with adding Bunza ( i so butchered that spelling) into this. this has to be the first fanfiction i've read mentioning that little guy....he really was cute...and almost as annoying as Totosai, so it fits. LOL. man...inu's gonna go apeshit when he sees all of this and his little girl. have to say, you had me laughing freakin hard with the toga/ryo/kich thing. the minute i read one going for the others ear, i knew someone would have to walk in (i was rooting for toga...yay!!!) great chapter, made me smile :-)
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 21:37 EDT
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Oh, he did it! Kich managed to grab Ryo's ears to compare softness!! And now Toga has something to pay Ryo back for revealing that beefcake picture. Hehehe, I was rolling! My seat-belt sure has been handy lately. -- Dress shopping for the girls, a slinky little black number and a fairy princess gown. I wonder how Cain will take the knowledge that Gin has gone dancing? Dancing...usually means a partner...a male partner. LOL "...I predict a jealous rage in the near future..." Can't wait for the fun!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:53 EDT
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One question I hadn't written in my previous reviews is: Do you plan on a Purity 5? And if you do where will the focus lie? Just curious.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 09, 2005 20:51 EDT
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The last few chapters have had some of the best dialogue. The argument between Kitch and Ryo was a hoot! Thanks for the laugh and thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:49 EDT
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You have me in suspence. Gin's slip of the tongue phrases are endearing and amusing. I can't wait for more. I'm actually kind of waiting for the moment that Cain decideds to shut her up with a kiss, if ever he chooses to do so. ;)
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:38 EDT
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Awesome once again!!! You have done it!!! I just wanted to comment again briefly, for I forgot to add this in my last review... wouldn't it be interesting if somehow, one way or another, Gin ended up modeling for Cain? Hmm... oh!! And does Belle harbor any of Cain's artistic talents, or is she mainly fashion-steered? Hmm... just some questions... thanks again! Keep up the posting!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: June 09, 2005 20:09 EDT
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ohhh you're spoiling me... updates every day????!!! :O ugh! this was a great chapter! her underware! lol... that's hilarious... oh! and why didn't she buy new ones at the store? and i'm so excited for the next chapter! oh! and what about the end?? will they end up going home to america w/ kich and gin in tow? eeee!! i'm so excited!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just so preciously funny! Gin must really feel so fed-up with the you're-a-little-girl thing that the men in her lifedo all the time. Good for her for throwing Cain out of the house. Gin and Belle's night out, that would be very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 09, 2005 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was guffawing so loudly, while reading this chapter, that my family asked me what was wrong with me! This chapter was hilarious . . . especially, the ear scene and the bust in by Toga! I was really enjoying reading it. Story is going great. Keep up the good work and thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: June 09, 2005 18:31 EDT
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wow, lots of underwear in this chapter! cute tho ^_^ I was wondering, would you mind if I did a drawing of Gin in her pajamas? For some reason your description just made me itch to use my prisma pens and capture the look. also, the scene with the ears and toga recording it was hilarious!! ^_^ great chapter, as always. i think i actually like this story best out of all of the purity stories so far. but seriously, Gin's brothers and dad are ridiculous. they keep her on such a short leash (no pun intended) it's almost abusive...I know that's not your intent, but still, that's REALLY controlling behavior, even from someone who loves you. and it's kind of insulting, like they don't trust her enough to make good choices. if you protect someone forever they'll always be naive and won't be able to tell the difference between good people and bad and will end up hurt either way.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 18:27 EDT
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Salsa dancing is the best! I love to salsa...I just need a good leader.
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Reviewed By: katamari damashii (not logged in) On: June 09, 2005 18:26 EDT
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Yay for Master Bunza! That's a great little touch - I "squee"d when I read it :D
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu NSI On: June 09, 2005 18:25 EDT
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That was a very good chapter, and i really enjoyed it. It's nice to see Gin and Belle spend time together, and Ryo and Kich.... oh man!!! >.< I bet that's a DVD toga will NEVER get rid of! LOL
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 16:56 EDT
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O.o Belle doesn't wear panties hmmmm.....I think that'll please Kich (although he'll probably get mad about it first). I think there is a Gin temper explosion considering the over protectiveness of her male relatives coming. She'll kick all their a**es. Great chapter Sue! ~ teh mackie [mel told me i ranked a teh =)]
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