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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 01:18 EDT
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Yeah! It was wonderful! Cain is in trouble isn't he? I loved it! (course what can I say, I love them all!) Whining? Maybe a little. LOL. But, I would beg to if I had too! That's great! Gin is gonna grow up even if daddy doesn't like it! (Sweet!)
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 05, 2005 00:52 EDT
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ahhh, now I just can't decide which chapter I liked better. This chapter was so sweet! I love so much that Cain stayed with Gin because she was scared. He is just too sweet. And oh man, Cain's youkai is officially one of my favorite characters...he barked at Cain! lolol. heh, poor cain, he's so doomed! I adore the fact that his youkai has actually said that he likes Gin ::happy sigh:: great chapter! Chat whiners....LOL
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::gasp!:: I did not whine! lol And as for the chappy....AWW Isnt that just ADORABLE?! o.o Gin seriously needs to kick teh Cain's arse
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Title: Eee, she Touched them!
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny with Gin "touching them". I love it!
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Reviewed By: Green Arrow On: June 04, 2005 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excelletn, I've read all of your InuYasha fics,a nd have loved all of them. The Purity series is my favorite though, all of the characters have their own personalitys, some OCs that I read all the characters are like robots. But you have found an excellent balance between humor and romance. 8 Thumbs up. lol.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: June 04, 2005 13:25 EDT
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whoa. ya know, i didnt think i'd really like this one b/c the first chapter was so ...bittersweet? i thought cain would be too sad... but i like that isabelle wasn't all that happy... that'll help out in the long run... anyhow, i really like this fic! i think i like the kich/belle part a lil more... but still! all of your fics are always so good! i haven't read one that i didn't like! and i can't wait till cain fights inuyasha! he will wont he??? ugh! that's great! and i'm really curious about cain's relationship w/ sess... that's weird... i really liked the parts when gin gets mad; it makes her seem older. another fight between her and cain would be fun. ;) and i hope that in the next chapter you put in cains pov of gin in that silk shirt... he seemed a bit flustered in her apt.. ;) anyhow, my fav of the purities is still the nez/ryo one, but this one is really wonderful! i've added it to my favs, and i will check it every day! so dont drop the fic! i know people are giving you grief! but they're idiots! and i have to have the rest of this story! you can't leave me hangin! ;) lol, anyhow, this is the longest review i've ever written, even tho it's just me rambling... oh! and what about kagome wanting a baby? that's hilarous! ha! i suppose she could still do it.. lol, it's just a funny thought... ;) anyhow, i'm assuming that gin is late for her 'human night', so i think it would be great if cain followed her and found out... ;)
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Reviewed By: jadedlati [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 04:57 EDT
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I have to say that this is probably my favorite so far out of the purity series. He made her wings :) Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 04, 2005 03:12 EDT
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Oh wow...so much great stuff in this chapter! You'd think that my inner fangirl would have completely taken over due to Shirtless!Cain (::fans self::), but my favorite part was the reminiscing about Isabelle and the creation of the wings. I've been craving some backstory on Cain and Isabelle and you gave us just enough to set my little brain a'whirling with possibilities about what happened next. Awesome. And the wings...ever since the talk of wings started, I kept thinking of "Ever After" (one of my most favorite movies ever) and Danielle's wings and wondered if Cain might do something like that for Gin. I'm so happy with how you did this!!! I can just picture her beautiful wings...::happy sigh:: Geez...I'm running away at the mouth...er...fingers...here today. Thanks for posting the artist info, too - she's awesome! Shuttin' up now!
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 04, 2005 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is definatly one of your best chapters for this story yet. Its just so cute and cuddly, and...He gave her wings! So, so perfect. And Gin wearing the shirt, and draggin Cain into her bedroom...she really is naive isnt she? Speaking of Cain...Rawr. Hubba hubba. Pantpantpant. Hoowwwwwllll. Soory. Ahem. A great chapter, I enjoyed it immensly. And now I'm off to look at artwork, thanks for the link!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 23:31 EDT
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I just checked out that site for the fanart....that was awesome! I'll never understand how you all can draw so good. *sigh*
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Title: Wings Deux!
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 22:39 EDT
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Ok that was Supposed to be: I (heart) you!! **huggle huggle** (backs away from teh sue) I laughed, I gasped, I got warm-fuzzy feelings. I even got the daughter interested in reading the series, no small feat! I love Cain dealing with past memories. I love the Wings. I love the half-naked Cain at the door, getting 'touched' by Gin. I love that Gin tried on that shirt! I knew that Cain was tall, but not that tall. So, how tall is the Gin? I am just wondering, I had always pictured her at five foot, five inches - don't know why, just seemed right in my head. Kich is Soo going to get his behind kicked by Gin. I hope Gin can keep her promise to Belle and not tell Kich why he's getting an a** kicking! Should be fun!! I'll just flop around in my urn until your next posting!!
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 03, 2005 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job i can't believe he made her wings! i can't wait till the next chapter because whats so importnat about going her parents house and being there in time. bye:p
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 19:21 EDT
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Sue! This was a great chapter! He gave her wings. That was so sweet. And a big YAY goes to Belle for shoving him out the door. I wonder if Gin is going to wear those outside. Oh, and her trying on his shirt was just too cute. He's six foot eight, did you say? Damn! How tall is Gin? She's got to be petite next to him anyway! For that matter, how tall is Bellaniece? She's got to be, like, supermodel height! Anyway! I loved this chapter! So, I leave you this heartfelt, and babbling, review! And I'm going to go read it again! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 03, 2005 19:10 EDT
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::happy sigh:: From the title alone I could tell that this chapter was going to make me smile (and I definitely needed that today!). I could tell that it was going to be so sweet! I think this is my favorite chapter so far, though it's close because they're all so amazing. I can't even really describe why it is my favorite chapter. It just gave me such a warm fuzzy feeling and brought the biggest smile to my face. I liked the flashbacks that Cain had of Isabelle. They were kind of sad, but it was neat to get a little more background on her to see what she was like. I like how similar she and Belle are, like how they both liked the rain and the little look Belle gave earlier. I absolutely love that he made her wings. They seem so beautiful and magical. I don't know, it just seems like it's another little step forward in Cain and Gin's relationship. Heh, I love when he gave her those wings...without a shirt! lol, and she touched his stripes...that's too great! The whole thing was just so cute and wonderful. And I absolutely love seeing Cain so flustered, he's just so cute! You just have such an amazing way of making your characterse come to life, of making them so endearing and real. It's so neat to read a story like that =) Thank you for writing another beautiful chapter!
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Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, quick question....How do you pronounce Bellaniece? For some reason I just can't get it. When I try, it doesn't sound right....but then again it may just be me. ^-^ Another great chapter. I love it!
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