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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 › » ] | Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:10 EDT
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Great writing as always! You always know how to satisfy our needs but leave us waiting for more. Kich is in extreme denial, though his youkai realizes he has feelings for Belle. I can't wait to see their next encounter.
| Reviewed By: EAP On: June 01, 2005 02:38 EDT
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Another great chapter Sueric, I loved all Kich's internal dialoge. Belle and him are insuch denial...gotta love the drama. I just have to say again, P3 was ended excellently, and I'm really excited to get to read this one now. On a side note, I hope you find some relief from the flamers, they can be harsh. Just take it with a grain of salt, because there are sure alot of us out here who care about you and your stories (not to mention your phyche) and really admire you. Thanks!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 01, 2005 00:56 EDT
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Whew! This relationship is starting out almost as rocky as the Ryo/Nez pairing. It's hard to imagine a tougher start than those two had, but this one is close. I am constantly amazed by your ability to create these conflicts for the characters. Both the troubles and the characters are so unique in every story. Fantastic writing! Belle/Kich remind me a little bit of very early Inu/Kag with the attraction/aversion thing. Maybe Kich is more like his father than he gives himself credit for. As always, eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your work!
| Reviewed By: ll_kocoumll [nsi] On: May 31, 2005 23:13 EDT
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i love it!! please continue! i noticed that gin's with a youkai, kich is with a hanyou, and ryo's with a human... just pointing it out!
| Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: May 31, 2005 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sue if some one made you mad tell me who they are because i know some people who know some people who can make them never say a hurtful thing again and plus my brother who is 15 is 6'5 and still growing and he could shove his size 15 foot up thier... well you get the point anyway please don't stop posting so many people love your stories and i think we all already know that becaus like 150,000 people read the first purity alone and that puts my story to shame big time so please don't let those people get to you because thier are thosands of people who will kick any ones butt if they say one of your stories is bad. please update soon!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Kesstral [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 22:39 EDT
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ewww.. my weird capitalizations.. ewww.. normally i'm more eloquent. I actually do have a second thought to add. I like how you added that insight into Kich--how he feels envious of his brother, and how he's really kind inside, and why he hates people with facades, etc. It makes him all the more endearing. I want to give him a big hug and say it's all right (belle isn't that bad, kid, if you can get over your pride).
| Reviewed By: Kesstral [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 22:35 EDT
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YEagh! I wish people would stop complaining about trivialities like that.. i mean it's that the whole POINT of the story in the first place? AWwwww... and i was waiting for Cain and Gin to return just as Kich left.. THEn the drama would never have ended...
| Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: May 31, 2005 21:59 EDT
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This was such a wonderful chapter, Sue. I loved being able to get a deeper feeling as to just what exactly is going on in Kich and Belle's minds. It helps give perfect insight as to why it is that Belle does use the little girl facade. This just goes to show that there's so much more to her than what she appears to be. This chapter just made my heart break for her. I liked the little time line effect that you had, with stories of her and Cain as she grew up. No one can deny that he was a good father, yet there was always a lingering sadness and I think those little bits helped express that perfectly. Kich's little flashback with Gin scraping her knee was so adorable too. The first time he's a hero...awww. Then I liked how, in the beginning of the chapter, Kich started to recognize that he and Belle were alike in a sense. lol, then of course he had to go and ruin that =p And the ending was so perfect...he SO wanted to kiss her, it was great! heh, a bit of tension like that is always fun! But yeah, this was a wonderful chapter, I enjoyed it very much!
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! sorry you are upset Sue and I pray blessings to you. Just wanted to share with you that I loved P3 and absolutely love P4 (especially the pairings). A QUESTION PLEASE: Didn't quite understand it but was Belle's mother hanyou? I think this and the last chapt are my two fav ones so far. The way you write Sue, I can really feel the Characters emotions. So thought-provoking especially seeing Kiche's viewpoint on things. As always very well-written. I know you write for yourself but please forgive me for being a little selfish in that I look forward to reading and rereading your stories. They make me feel good and happy. thanks again. J
| Reviewed By: Crolynx On: May 31, 2005 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you stop i'll scream at you in e-mail till i get more damnit. Why does everyone have to always fuck with my favorite writers heads and make them think they don't get appreciated for there work. you write some of the best stuff out there. i need more. please hurry on your homepage to give me a link to some PDFs. I'd love that that way i can take it on the road with me when i go deployed and other places.
| Title: ranting and raving
Reviewed By: TheGreatMinionRalph [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 20:52 EDT
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As always, love the story! I just got caught up on the purity series. I love the parings. It will be so funny as they work out the awkwardness in the relationships. Honestly, though, if another author were trying to write this storyline, I might not like it. Somehow, though, you can pull this spectacular story off. I truly admire that you can do this so tastefully, and can see idiots who just disparage your work as the idiots they are. You are very brave to not only take on this convoluted family issue, but to have two simultanious storylines that you can mesh so well, and still find time and space to throw in the good o'le guys (like Inuyasha in an italian reastraunt, which is to funny to try to picture!) Those who critique your work with constructive criticism I understand, but someone who just flat out states that they dont like something or someone, or that they dont like a concept on which the entire story is founded? Thats just mean. Nobody should ever, EVER simply state that they hope that something doesn't happen, or that they dislike a charecter in a story, unless the are a villan or someone you are meant to dislike. Insulting a author's story, that they themselves worked so hard on... It's like going up to someone, pointing to their baby, and saying "how ugly! What were you thinking?!",or something like that. Such people just need to be intoduced to the tetseiga's business edge. I do hope that you can ignore them, and do continue this series, because we all love it. | Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Belle. She hides behind her grown-up facade just to hide her pain. Anyway, I love the story. I love the way Kich and Belle butt heads against each other and the way Cain tries to deny the developing feelings that he was for Gin. :)
| Reviewed By: Deplora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. I just spent the whole weekend reading P2, P3, and now this. It's usually my habit not to read second generation character stories, but I think you've completely changed my mind. Kichiro is just... wow... I think I like him the best out of ALL the characters in your Purity series, including InuYasha. And Gin and Belle are adorable. And Cain is just perfect. I just can't wait until Kich finds out that Belle is setting up his little sister with her father. That is going to be SO much fun to read. *sighs and giggles* I can only sit here and wait for the next update.
| Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: May 31, 2005 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intense intense!!!! This is good. Both Belle baka & Kichiro Baka just maybe starting to realise an attraction. I like the "wench" bit (like Inuyasha & Kagome). Hey, I hope U will ignore those people who give u bad reviews. What do these people know about a good story? Gee I have read all your stories & I like no LOVE them. See ??? So U ignore those creeps. Don't stop posting the chapters & other stories in your head. Okay back to your stories.
| Reviewed By: IfIcoulfmarryInuyashaIwould (nsi) On: May 31, 2005 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally with fiction, I make it a habit never to read anything that has characters/children of characters that aren't in the actual manga/anime without cringing. You are the exception to that rule, and I commend you for it. It takes me a while to ever to feel like I know characters as well as Inuyasha and Kagome, and to care about ther problems (unrequited love, drama, life threatening events and the like), but you've done it. You've fleshed them out and integrated them so well into the classic plotline that it's as if Gin, Kich, Ryo, Cain, and Belle have been there all along. Screw anyone who thinks differently. By the way, I thought Belle would be more partial to baths, like Kagome. Any reason why you chose a shower instead? And for the chapter before last, why did Kich order for Belle? Kich must have balls if he orders a "salad and water" combo on all his other dates, because regardless of his resemblance to his stunning father, I'd still be pissed as hell if he did that while I was on a date with him. Salad and water? Give me a burger and fries anyday. ~Ja ne! I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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