| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Title: Groovy
Reviewed By: Lady Glass [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally in love with this and I can't wait to read more! I think I've added it to my faves but just in case I'll do it in a mo. Lovin the way you've set this up, it's hilarious but vair hot at the same time. Much love, Lady Glass
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Reviewed By: Samuel Kelly On: November 06, 2005 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, have someone do a hentai movie using this story!! I so love your work, keep more chapters 'cumming'! One more thing to mention, Su is very, VERY talented with her tongue.(As expertly demostrated in book #5 when she heard from Sarah that 'If you can tie a knot in a cherry stem with your tongue, then you're a great kisser.') A girl can really rock your world if she can turn two cherry stems into the shape of a small cactus with just her tongue!! ;-D
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 08:18 PDT
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Alright then, You have yet to Update, so you will now pay the Price of Wrath.....Hmm....Must think of something Motoko is scared of....Hmm....Can't think of anything, mabye Turtles...No, to overdone...I'll just use these *Raises his Army of Xenomorphs((Aliens for you out there that don't listen to well while watching the movie))* and as an added bonus..*Summons his Dragons((Both Western and Eastern type))* There, that should get you gear...by the way, Since this story is one of the best i have read, if you ever need any help with a Flamer, or idiot, or just feel like causing violence. give me a call.
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Reviewed By: JehutyKiks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 07:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn your fics good. keep it up, lookin 4ward to ur future works...
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Reviewed By: KillerRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear god, you went far and away beyond to norm and and, im still in shock that was amazing, congratulations. i certainly like the way this story has been turning out so far, but i have to wonder, will Su and Shinobu eventually get to him? i Hope So.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy On: October 10, 2005 23:58 PDT
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Dude... all I can say is NICE! I've read many many many many(let's just say a lot of) lemons, and I've noticed that the words written hardly ever change, but somehow, someway, your writing style or SOMETHING makes this lemon(s) give off a sense of total hawtness above and beyond. Good work, dude, and keep it up. Just so ya know, Mutsumi is my personal favorite, and I patiently await her turn with much anticipation...
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Psychlone(Yoroy) On: October 04, 2005 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, as usual, this is Yoroy, but i got bumbed off so yea, love the chapter as usual, and yes motoko did deserve that one chapter to herself, she is a goddess and she deserves her own chapter, also i am assuming, that one of these times its gonna involve all of the girls, just wonder...
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 12:08 PDT
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*Nods* sounds interesting that hentai game does...Wait! stop trying to distract me!....good update, and no, becasue you updated, the Predators will not attack....But update soon! or i'll come up wih newer ways of wrath!
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Title: ch.6
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good job on the Motoko chapter and I am very pleased with the final result. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out becuz I know that it will be good. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: though you were dead
Reviewed By: shiki On: October 04, 2005 07:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool, i was looking everyday for your update, keep the good work
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Title: Chapter 06
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 04:12 PDT
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Good job, I got a very vivid and sexy image of Mokoto in my mind. Yes, she does have trillions of fans. I'm not particularly a fan of Naru, she's the standard boring anime violent girl, mostly. Good to hear that the lolilicious members of the cast are going to see some action. Keep it up, thanks for writing and I look forward to next time.
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 21:38 PDT
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Excellant! Good to see you updated - it's even better to see that you have maintained that level of quality that attracted me to your fics in the first place. Excellant work with Motoko I must say. The title and chapter themselves fit together wonderfully, and I thought the chapter itself was appropriate for someone like Motoko. It's gonna be interesting to see how all these different relationships between Keitaro and the girls are gonna play out. Keep it up, you have been doing an excellant job so far. Can't wait until the next update. Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Ryuro On: September 20, 2005 15:39 PDT
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Ummmmm... I think I speek for all of us when I say, whats the wait for? Its been just shy of 2 months since the last update and i want to know why there hasnt been one since?!?! Please update as soon as you possibly can.
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Reviewed By: Silverback [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 14:24 PDT
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Wow! Ok, this is the first Hentai fanfic I have ever read and it ROCKS! I love the way you portray the characters, so true to their personalities. Shinobu is my all-time fave anime girl, followed by Motoko, so I look forward to the next installment and hope Shinobu keeps the hope alive (she always did, didn't she?) I also loved they way Mitsune discovered and thrilled in that feeling of "ownership" she felt he now had over her. That was sexy as hell. Congrats and thanks from a n00b.
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 12:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Please update this story as soon as you are willing and able.
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