| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Title: Uhmm..
Reviewed By: DemonicChild888 On: May 31, 2007 04:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG....i would have enjoyed this fic very much..if it weren't..for the...last chapter...it was..uhmm.. h-how should i s-say this....uhmm.. anyway!it's just disturbing!
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Title: Weapons of Mass Destruction
Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 06:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is pretty much the frist one that I havent read that was yaoi. It was really nice though even though I dont normallly read this kind of stuff. I look forward to reading more.
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Title: From what I've read so far...
Reviewed By: Prodigal Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say..... it's rare to find a storyline involving one of your favorite manga/animes that is actually unputdownable. Sure, it has its'... what are for me unesttling parts... but I'm a big boy who can sit through the squeamish bits to see the true content underlying the whole thing. As a fan of Mutsumi's (as I know many here are), it's nice to see her side of things. It was all too apparent in the manga and anime that she had feelings for both keitaro and Naru, and was working to get both together, if not getting either of them to be with her. I wasn't surprised at all to see how you made her more sexually aware than she was made out to be. Plus, she's definately a tactician Sun Tzu would respect on or off the battlefield ;). Ultimately, I just want her to be happy... I always did. Now, as for the other characters... The story thread with Naru and Sanosuke was a squeamish bit, but it told yet another story entirely that could have happened. I'm looking forward to see how you weave that particular bit together with the other characters' parts :D . It was mainly the parts that disturbed me that detracted a couple of points from the enjoyment factor. But I know a really good story when I read it. I'm looking forward to more of this novel, W :). Even the parts I won't like, notwithstanding. Gambatte, ne? ^_-
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Title: Hail to the king. The king of kings
Reviewed By: Orihime-chan On: April 26, 2007 19:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The character representation and development have been well handled so far. I really liked the way you did Motoko with coming to grips with her feelings(most authors who try to rewrite the story form the manga often mess that up) and thethree vows she made were my favorite part(non hentai). Mutsumi's loving nature was dead on the mark(who is my favortie character in the series so me telling you that coming form me is high praise). The Naru storyline was also a interesting and entertaining take on a often questioned siutation(After all why did she always abuse him? It never really got explained it was deemed one of those unexplainable anime things. note: Motoko's abuse is hinted at being because of unresloved feeling of her sister getting married leaving her to take on the responsiblities of the Aoyoma family tradition). Shinobu and Su Two words: Fucking Brillant. THe sex scenes are also extremely hot. I get wet just thinking about it. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 01:03 PDT
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An interesting new chapter, I must say. Poor Naru... at least in your version she's a psycho-bitch with good reason! Seriously, I feel sorry for her now, and I'll be glad to see her get over it. In better news... Shinobu and Su's chapter(s) next! Su-chan... Shinobu-chan...
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Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: anon2 On: March 27, 2007 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, it's me, anon2 from AFF.net ;p Awesome to see an update! Although I'm totally anti-Naru so a whole chapter focusing on her was a bit of a let-down, but that's a personal beef and your writing is still good enough to make me read on, anyway. I still hate her, though. :p But if only for Mutsumi's own happiness, I would want her to be happy herself in the end. Can't wait for the ride to begin again!
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Title: ... Dang
Reviewed By: Tury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you find something you wern't looking for, in a place you never thought to find it, in a way that defies reason, should you be gratefull? This fic has taken on so many dimensions, I can't believe you keep finding more. And the whole "Hit me" thing with Sanosuke/Keitaro, and the reason for the double Naru's; If Akamatsu-dono ever reads this I am sure his praise would be neverending. You are like the Earnest Hemingway of Lemon fics, and we are all so very thankfull for it. Beautiful, plain and simple. Thank you. (Said the man standing on tiptoes, trying to balance on a life preserver in the middle of the ocean surrounded by sharks.)
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Reviewed By: TheWhiteMonk On: March 23, 2007 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Finally, someone who thinks that Naru just might have a legitamate reason behind her emotional problems. Instead of just calling her a (Female Dog) and leaving it at that. As someone who has been in counseling with abuse victims just like this, I give you three thumbs up on the emotions. Please continue, this is the only X-Rated story I have ever liked.
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Reviewed By: EverPresentKaze [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 08:50 PDT
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Amazing. Simply Amazing. You take the characters so far beyond what we were shown in the original work, and never comprimise what makes them them. And thank God Naru finally opened up to somebody. I do belive a round of applause is in order.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 08:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
good chapter
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fall to my knees and worship the ground you walk on!!!
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Title: Fresh Meat!
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 21:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ah! New chapter. Hmm. Took me a bit to get back into the momentum of this fic, since it has been a bit since it was upped. As for the subject matter...I'm too cynical to be put off by it. Moving on to the actual review, I see a branch in the approach taken here. It leaves two main paths (and three sub-paths) within useable range, and I look forward to seeing how you direct the action. In terms of how you handled the characters, I think you did good. Allowing for the situation you describe, it makes a good case for Naru's hang-ups. It also sets up for a highly desirable metamorphosis that could prove most...entertaining. ^_^ Well, that's enough out of me - I have my hands full with a stalled content entry attempt... :(
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, looking forward to another chapter.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 08:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you SOOOOOO need to update. PLEASE?
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Reviewed By: wowmczag On: February 12, 2007 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude...this fic totally roxors yo...props...
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