| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 13:41 PDT
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I liked the title for the new chapter, (that song'll be stuck in my head for a while now...) I hope you get the next part up fairly soon, but I'm in no position to make a comment like that, am I? Still, great work overall...
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Title: Weapon of Mass Destruction
Reviewed By: Erosborus On: June 05, 2006 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I'm happy that Keitaro finally had the spine to stand up against Naru, I do hope that they reconcile.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: June 01, 2006 13:41 PDT
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Awesome story. I really like it. It was confusing cause like 5 chapters before this it said the story was complete but when I got to chapter 9 it said it was still in progress *stupid computer*. Oh well. I am wondering if Naru and Keitaro will ever makeup. I hope they do. Well keep up the good work. XD
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Reviewed By: ichijoji On: May 31, 2006 21:48 PDT
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I've been waiting forever for this fic to update. Thank you and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 13:49 PDT
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You've done it again! LoL, but why tease us with this little bit? As short as it is, I can see your slight absense on this story has not diminished your sense in writing it, and for that, I am grateful. From this little tidbit you fed us, I can gather this next chapter will be very, very satisfying. Can't wait until you put it up (lol, me and the legion of others waiting for this to continue)! By the way, in reading that chapter, I couldn't help but feel there was an Evangelion reference in there, despite the fact that you said you got those computer's names from other places...however, calling them the Magi sorta sealed my theory for me. LoL, awesome lemon writing, an awesome anime series, and EVA references all in in one? Sounds like a winner to me (though that was established a long time ago). Cheers man, keep it up. d('')b
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: ? On: May 29, 2006 08:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, ummmm i left a review a while back and sorry about that. I probably didn't get the chapter because my computers been acting weird. P.S. Sorry
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Title: YOU ARE A GOD
Reviewed By: wowzies On: May 28, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, your work is awesome and I look forward to reading more! great story blah, blah, blah just update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 08:39 PDT
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Sweet..... you finally update..... Well, keep up the good work, and stuff..... Then I wont have to shoot you..... Not that I would.....
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Reviewed By: Psychlone(too laxy to log in) On: May 27, 2006 21:08 PDT
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great chapter like usual, could help to be longer, anyways, im am still looking foreward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Psychlone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 15:33 PDT
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It is good, but i have kinda been hoping for an entirly new chapter. Please come up with it soon!
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 14:17 PDT
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*Cracks knuckles, and neck* Your taking your time again...time for some wrath then, but how to do it? *thinks for a second, then gets an idea* I know! You, you, you, you, and you *points to Sephiroth, The Hulk, a 100 foot turtle, Brolly((Super saiyan 4, legendary mood)), and Sync ((master of technology))* Go cause havoc until he updates *The fivego to your dimension to do so* Be sure to Update soon!
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Reviewed By: personaohnlyne On: May 12, 2006 07:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is great. Very, very, VERY good. I enjoyed the eight chapters so far, and I'm really looking forwards to more of it. Please, keep up the good job, and continue your great writing.
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Reviewed By: frikinIdiot On: April 03, 2006 16:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh FallenMessiah u spelled writing and writer wrong...just want u to noe o, and ur fic is really good too ...
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Title: ummm hello?
Reviewed By: Zero21454 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 08:13 PST
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Hey, great fic and I love it, and I've been reading it since you started it. But I mean, when's the next chapter coming out!? its been over 2 months, I dont know the prep and work that goes into writing a fic, but please tell us your working on the next chapter and that it will be out soon. Take care, Godspeed!
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Reviewed By: Fallen Messiah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 17:35 PST
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This......is......WOW...I mean....WOW!!!!! *let's try again* THIS IS THE GREATEST LOVE HINA FANFIC EVER MADE BY THE HANDS OF A FANFIC WRITTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!EVER!!!!!!DOWN WITH NARU!!!!ME AND MY ARMY OF LAZY BASTARDS BOWS DOWN TO YOU!!!!!THOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!*pant* *pant* well...yeah...there you go, you're great, keep writting!
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