| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Title: When are you going to update
Reviewed By: un named On: January 31, 2007 22:10 PST
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When are you going to update this is so good
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Reviewed By: KC6 On: November 14, 2006 18:22 PST
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I agree with DrewB1442, and cant't wait to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: November 13, 2006 17:00 PST
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This is an interesting concept as to why Naru acts so violent towards Keitaro. I hope to ess more soon.
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Reviewed By: Aoshi2 On: November 13, 2006 05:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Please don`t take too long to update.
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Reviewed By: Corarc On: November 12, 2006 15:58 PST
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I was missing some action form Naru. Hope that is more in the next chapter.
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Title: More
Reviewed By: annony3 On: November 12, 2006 15:56 PST
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Hey, do more fast the next chapter, i can hardly wait.
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Reviewed By: NFan On: November 12, 2006 15:54 PST
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Wow, that was good, i am really looking foward to see Na-chan fucking her own father.
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Reviewed By: Tetsurin On: November 11, 2006 20:27 PST
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Please, don't butcher the Japanese words you try to use like that. At least learn how they're spelled, like "Anata", or "Daijoubu", or "Wakarimasu", and so on. It reflects badly on the story when the writer doesn't take the time to make sure the presentation is the best that it can be. That being said, a pretty disturbing chapter.
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Reviewed By: EverPresentKaze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply (and quite extravagantly) amazing. One of the best fanfics I've ever read, LH or otherwise. Write on, storyteller, write on.
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Reviewed By: Hakudou On: October 18, 2006 17:56 PDT
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I love this fanfic! You need to hurry up and update it because I've read through it a good five or six times!
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Reviewed By: JGoodman On: October 12, 2006 00:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best LH lemons I've ever read. I hope you continue it sometime soon.
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Title: Well Written
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: September 28, 2006 18:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I hope to see more of this done in the future.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. I'm looking forward to any and all future chapters.
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Title: true killer
Reviewed By: Zaara the Black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fuck i would never think of that
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Reviewed By: TurbodieselBeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, get this animated... like YESTERDAY!! I'd love to see how this would turn out on DVD, as it would be sold out before it even hit the shelves! Kaolla Su would turn Keitaro inside-out with the talent she has, and Shinobu's pure innocence will kill any resistance he'd have left. As for Tsuruko & Hanako, let's just say that Big Sis Aoyoma has finally met her match in a non-violent way while his little sister will get her wish of being with her 'onii-chan'. Stories like this are huge reasons of why talented authors like you are on fave lists all the time. KEEP 'EM COMIN', AND DON'T STOP!!!!
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