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| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 12:10 PDT
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This is a nicely crafted fiction, and I anticipate your next update. Now if you'll excuse me...I need a cold shower because of this. Keep it up, Syn Alexander (Pun intended)
| Reviewed By: very sad man On: August 20, 2005 20:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing this is great lovin u is esay cause your beatyful sorry got my medicataion from Dr. jack danials(ha) to help me deal with my antisipation makes me type like a monkey your not the type to have tama butt in on Su and ketaro time together(this is a joke i think ) keep up the good work *jump out the window laughing*
| Title: LOVE Hina indeed...
Reviewed By: Tury the Master of Mediocrity On: August 18, 2005 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A charred and scorched figure rises slowly to it's feet. "All things worth having, are worth waiting for... most people just don't want to. lol! You continue to improve yourself every time. The only thing I love more than this fic, is the fact that it wasn't really MEANT to go anywhere. Motoko is definitely my favorite female anime creation of all time. And if you are writing about HER, I would wait a lifetime. Props on Shinobu, by the way. Most authors just have her give up to get her out of the way; and I know you would never hurt her. Its nice to know that Haruka won't be left out of the loop, and of course Mutsumi will get her own. After all the things she gives up she has pleanty comming to her. (Yes, it's a pun. Take it or leave it). It might be an interesting idea to have Su switch to her mature form when she has her turn. Let's see... Oh yes! Naru. Well, she's had pleanty of time. She should have taken her chances when she had them. My one regret is that the scoreing only goes up to 10. "Praise to thee!!!" the figure cries as a storm pounds overhead. Suddenly a wave surges up and pulls him off the rock and out to sea.
| Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 03:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah what a smooth read this fix is. none of it feels forced like some of the fics out there. This bad boy just draws you in and makes you want more. All the fun he get to have in this, I almost can't wait until he just excepts it and enjoys all the ladies. But the build up is so great that the waiting is well worth it. Hope you end it with him still satisfying all girls instead of just pick one. And if he can't have them all I hope you pick a group with Shinobu, Mitsune, Kanako, Motoko, and Haruka. (listed in order of perferance) Love the kinkyness of that group plus actual love with most of them. But it is your great story so do what you feel is right and keep up the wonderful work.
| Title: Damn, man
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:27 PDT
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Holy freakin' sonofabiscuit...damn dude, I have no *&^%ing idea how I missed this update. At least I caught it before you updated again. Anyways, another mind-blowing chapter. No joke, this is seriously one of the best Love Hina lemons I've read...scratch that, one of the best lemons I've read period. You actually care about how you present the lemon, instead of just random sexual encounters. Keep this up, can't wait to see how you portray Motoko (I loved the way you've done the others so far). Peace, man! d('')b BTW, I don't really use the rating system anymore, but if I did, you'd get 10's across the board. Hell yea.
| Reviewed By: sarusscarveteran On: August 08, 2005 15:43 PDT
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right more these are so good
| Title: excellent
Reviewed By: gamefreak_12345 On: August 06, 2005 10:15 PDT
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another great chapter to an already great story, this story has become almost like an addiction (O.o), one of the best fics i've read. keep up the excellent work and update as soon as possible =).
| Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 15:48 PDT
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*Claps hands* Another good Update! I see your working in Shinobu, slowly yet stedily...Also, i am not Zeus, That is Zeus *Points, Camera pans to Zeus, whom is playing Cards with Hercules and Hades, Camera Pans back* I am Jaden! Comander in Arms of the Infinite Army! Leader of the Dimensinal Gurdians! Second in Command to the Lawmaker himself! Update soon, or Face my favourite Squardrent of the Infinite army *Camara Pans to a Group of over 100000000000000 Predators*
| Title: Fuckin Excellent
Reviewed By: MudvayneMasochist On: August 03, 2005 10:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frickin Excellent.ONe of the best damn stories I've ever read. Truly a grand design and idea
| Reviewed By: Yue Ryong On: July 27, 2005 04:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is in incredible! I cannot believe how many times I come back to reread this fic. It's almost like an addiction... Please, feed it! I beg you... ...I offer cookie plushies!
| Reviewed By: very sad man On: July 25, 2005 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am asamed to say that i cant wait for the next entry no pun intended after i finished reading your last posting i had to self medicated to feel normal again it was sick and funny and sexy it had the feeling of being on a roller coster and getting stabed in the stomach but i liked it god forgive me
| Title: Ch4
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 11:20 PDT
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Alright, already left a review last chapter, so I'll keep this short. This chapter kicked-ass. Period. Thats a side of Haruka few imagine and fewer write about. Excellant job on that! Can't wait to see the update! Peace be with you! d('')b (Btw, just what in the world made you want to write this? Just curious. Hell, I'm not complaining, this rocks!)
| Title: Ch3
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 10:51 PDT
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Oh damn, that was just too funny! Su, Shinobu and Keitaro all going to the zoo...and end up watching a freakin' orgy of animals...*shiver* thats a wildly hilarious thought, albeit a disturbing one. Then when they get home, Keitaro has to deal with his lusts and Shinobu, lol. I felt that the part in which he dealt with his conscience was very well written out, kudos for that. Finally, you got Haruka and Kitsune trying to seduce the poor bastard...wow, this story has yet to be not funny. Keep it up, peace! d('')b
| Title: *Drops dead* Ch1
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....wow...........WOW!!!! What in the seven hells...? Damn, that was one of the hottest lemon scenes I've ever read, all without any actual sex going on. 'Cept maybe Su and Shinobu, but you don't go into detail there (thank you!). I find that thought a bit disturbing, but its your fic and you may portray it as you wish. In reality, this was extremely well written out. Melding thoughts, words, and actions together seamlessly: seriously awesome. No spelling errors, and I loved how you seem to be sticking pretty close to the real characters' personas. No OOC things I found except for (again) Su and Shinobu, but then again, its almost plausible. And its only the first chapter for crying out loud. I'll drop another review soon, keep it up, I am way beyond impressed here! Peace! d('')b
| Title: Update It NOW
Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! That was weird but cool! Write more! Go Motoko! Go Mutsumi!
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