| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Yoroy(didn't bother to log in) On: June 26, 2005 13:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter as always, get the next one up soon, i wanna know what happens please!
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 21:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story, please continue writing it, I belive that you should use Shinobu first, because out of all the girls, Shinobu has the pureest love for Keitaro.
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Reviewed By: migele [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 02:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one! missing, Haruka, Kanako, Kitsune, Su. looking forward to next chappie. oh and nice seeing you here, found you on aff first.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 23:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go For It! It's Your Story Write It However You Want.
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: BakaDerkkaDerkkaMuhmmadJihad On: June 11, 2005 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, so good, so crazy. Took you forever to write chapter two, but that's ok. Sometimes perfection takes time. Keep it going, i'd love to see more.
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Title: I was right
Reviewed By: Yoroy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 21:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
You see it is physically imposiible to get something like that ona short wimp like Keitaro, unless he had some sort of birth defect(In this case which is no birth DEFECT in ANY way) or he had it arficailly enhanced, pills, surgery, etc., but if Ketaro has it, it was the birth 'defect'. Definantly Motoko, i find fit woman with morals hot, and it is better if the use a weapon other than mine. Would you know what I mean? I also think to make this story have a bit extra humor to it, you should have keitaro think his weapon is average sized, just for laugh as the girls' chin's hit the floor.
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Title: Baseless...
Reviewed By: grumble On: June 10, 2005 11:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
The characterizations were somewhat off... especially for keitaro... And such size is something that can cause incredible medical damage to anyone experiencing it... Better than some -TB
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: miroku 2258 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was one good fanfici have not luaghed so hard when reading a fanfic but i thick motoko and then su and shinbo and then whenever but damn that was funny little weird but good
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Reviewed By: MaskedGod On: May 19, 2005 01:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interasting, on my personally opion, i say you get Naru first, unless see is some big ending, then, use Kitsune.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: kagomebelongstoinuyasha2340 On: May 14, 2005 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
two things why did he not fantasise about naru and please update
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Reviewed By: Anonymous Rex On: May 06, 2005 10:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
WOW. I say Naru should confront him first unless you have something special for her. Do us all a favor and have Su go to Adult Su or something I dunno. Other than that i'd say mitsune or motoko first.
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: Yoroy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 20:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, very nice and interesting to read. I still knoa that Keitaro(I can't spell either so yeah...)can't have a cock like that, it is physically impossible, but still...makes for a good read eh? I think Naru should go first and confront him, make him explain everything...unless the best for last? Other wise it has to be Motoko first.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: April 28, 2005 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting plot, even though I don't like fics where the characters cock is ridicously huge. ( inches would be more than enough. Also, did you Keitaro wants to fuck Motoko like the woman she is?
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Reviewed By: palio2 On: April 27, 2005 20:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should do Motoko first
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Reviewed By: dsfgjhhljk.m,.bmbmb On: April 27, 2005 19:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you write more
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