| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: very sad man On: July 25, 2005 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am asamed to say that i cant wait for the next entry no pun intended after i finished reading your last posting i had to self medicated to feel normal again it was sick and funny and sexy it had the feeling of being on a roller coster and getting stabed in the stomach but i liked it god forgive me
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Title: Ch4
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 11:20 PDT
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Alright, already left a review last chapter, so I'll keep this short. This chapter kicked-ass. Period. Thats a side of Haruka few imagine and fewer write about. Excellant job on that! Can't wait to see the update! Peace be with you! d('')b (Btw, just what in the world made you want to write this? Just curious. Hell, I'm not complaining, this rocks!)
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Title: Ch3
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 10:51 PDT
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Oh damn, that was just too funny! Su, Shinobu and Keitaro all going to the zoo...and end up watching a freakin' orgy of animals...*shiver* thats a wildly hilarious thought, albeit a disturbing one. Then when they get home, Keitaro has to deal with his lusts and Shinobu, lol. I felt that the part in which he dealt with his conscience was very well written out, kudos for that. Finally, you got Haruka and Kitsune trying to seduce the poor bastard...wow, this story has yet to be not funny. Keep it up, peace! d('')b
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Title: *Drops dead* Ch1
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....wow...........WOW!!!! What in the seven hells...? Damn, that was one of the hottest lemon scenes I've ever read, all without any actual sex going on. 'Cept maybe Su and Shinobu, but you don't go into detail there (thank you!). I find that thought a bit disturbing, but its your fic and you may portray it as you wish. In reality, this was extremely well written out. Melding thoughts, words, and actions together seamlessly: seriously awesome. No spelling errors, and I loved how you seem to be sticking pretty close to the real characters' personas. No OOC things I found except for (again) Su and Shinobu, but then again, its almost plausible. And its only the first chapter for crying out loud. I'll drop another review soon, keep it up, I am way beyond impressed here! Peace! d('')b
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Title: Update It NOW
Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! That was weird but cool! Write more! Go Motoko! Go Mutsumi!
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Title: aww, that's just super...
Reviewed By: hinazero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Hail to thee and thy writings" indeed :D I love this story. While it goes against what I normally read (in that it features a GUY), I think this series has great potential... particularly if the chapters continue in the vein of chapter 3. I love Kaolla's shock at the animals :) More Su! More Shinobu! More of them together...? And Sarah's interruption XD and it appears that Haruka and Kitsune work well together. Kei-chan... good to eat XD consider an update requested!
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Reviewed By: not any On: July 14, 2005 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say nice! keep up the good work and update!
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Title: Master of Mediocrity
Reviewed By: Tury On: July 14, 2005 02:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got the name and title backwars in the last one I did. So why not do another one with them right this time?
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Title: Tury
Reviewed By: Master of Mediocrity On: July 14, 2005 02:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you a perfect score my friend. An excellent chapter, and more than well worth the wait. I may have come across as more rigid tan I actually am in my last review, I just happen to like to write that way. I am loving this story more and more. I love your "antenae" Idea by the way. Anydangway, what I am trying to say is... "Hail to thee and thy writings!!!" (Standing on a mountain with my fist in the air while, simultaneously, a flash of lightning and crashing waves apear in the background. Suddenly I look down to see that I am standing in the water and sweat-dropping before bieng fried to a crisp by the lightning. Smoke slowly rises...) Tury (2 - rye)
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Reviewed By: tomdj On: July 13, 2005 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Keep it up. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:15 PDT
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*Clpas hands* Very good update, you finally got to a lemon,Update soon, or you will feel the wrath of Jaden.*Makes Thunder boom,and lighting come out of his palms, which he shoots at Kentaro((In my personal opion, a complete moron))who then burns to a crisp*Rememeber, update soon Signed, Empeor Jaden
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Title: Master of Mediocrity
Reviewed By: Tury On: July 10, 2005 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't give it perfect marks due to the current lack therof... of lemons. However, do not think me unkind, I am a patient man. And something of this magnitude is worth waiting for. (Was that a Joke? You decide (creepy laugh)) I commend thee for thy writing thus far, and urge thee toward thy future writing creations. Until that time, "Be thee Well".
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Good Update, it was fasinating, I know why those Animals acted,as it has....Happened before. Update soon, i don't feel like uses my powers today. Signed, Emperor Jaden
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Reviewed By: gamefreak_12345 On: June 28, 2005 16:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story I must say...and the cliff you left us hanging at in chapter 3 just makes me want more. Keep up the awsome work and update as soon as possible ^.^
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: June 28, 2005 01:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.3 was very good and that cliffhanger was just perfest. It had me craving more and I can't wait for the next chapter becuz I know that it will turn out just fine. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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