| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kray On: September 09, 2016 02:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please upload another chapter
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Reviewed By: C Viper Fan On: February 17, 2012 13:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been awhile since a new chapter was written for this. Is an update coming soon. Was hoping for that Haruka/Kei lemon, not some flashback lemon with a OC. Love me some Haruka/Kei. |
Reviewed By: Okami_Kitakazeno [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2011 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, my friend, have been on my watch-list here longer than any other LH fic writer for WoMD. I'm very happy to see you get a new chapter up! As many people as have probably ofered, I'll toss it out there that if you need a sounding-board or proofer, or whatever, shoot me a message. P.S. Bonus points for the "Tommy" reference :D |
Reviewed By: dusty-san [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2011 13:13 PDT
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yea at long last the story continues!!! im excited to see how naru is going to make it through this time of trial. please continue. |
Reviewed By: VanBlaz On: July 15, 2009 05:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you've returned and continued this story. It's been quite some time since the last update no? Keep up the good work, and lets see how long Keitaro can last
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Reviewed By: Dorian Nightblood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that you've returned to writing this! This has got to be my favorite Love Hina fanfiction that I've ever read to date(that's over 1000 fanfictions). Keep up the good work, but don't work yourself too hard now. Can't enjoy the writing if you burn out your creativity.
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Reviewed By: anon2 On: April 12, 2009 00:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goddamn it's been too long since the last update...but hoorah~ Titplay with Shinobu was awesome. Could use some more footplay, though. ;p
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 18:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the lastest chapter you posted which is 13. I can't wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapter. I would like you to send me a copy of these so I can have them on my computer so I can read them any time I want. Please and thank you. I will help you with any idea's you might need so please E-Mail me if you need any help
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Title: youre awesome :)
Reviewed By: mitoshi~pyro~lover On: October 27, 2008 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You probably have a good idea how hard it is to find a decent Love Hina fanfic. I can count the stories I read that were actually worth looking at, and this story definitely makes the cut. This is without a doubt the best Love Hina lemon I have read in my life. Drama, romance, and plot all mixed together into a wonderful story of massive epicness. I eagerly await the next chapter with great impatience.
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Title: hurry up already
Reviewed By: awesomesnake222 On: October 27, 2008 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, when will the update come?!?!?! I can barely sleep wondering when another chapter of the best love hina story ever made will come out!! for my sanity of me and all your followers, satisfy our hunger XD
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Reviewed By: Un named On: July 11, 2008 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a good story. So I have to ask when are you going to update it. You usaly have one chapter in the summer
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Title: Update! This is a great story!
Reviewed By: narutofreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, upload another chapter. This story gets me hot and bothered every time I read it!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: rincewind2012 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story and i sincerly hope you write and post more of this story. ur an amazing writer. if ur still intrested in a translated version and if you havnt already found onethe link below has it and other ones translated but not that many sadly. http://lu.scio.us/hentai/albums/gachinko_2/page/1
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Dmen10711 On: March 15, 2008 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update please!!!!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Dmen10711 On: March 15, 2008 14:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update please!!!!!!
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