| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Title: aww, that's just super...
Reviewed By: hinazero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 10:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Hail to thee and thy writings" indeed :D I love this story. While it goes against what I normally read (in that it features a GUY), I think this series has great potential... particularly if the chapters continue in the vein of chapter 3. I love Kaolla's shock at the animals :) More Su! More Shinobu! More of them together...? And Sarah's interruption XD and it appears that Haruka and Kitsune work well together. Kei-chan... good to eat XD consider an update requested!
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Reviewed By: not any On: July 14, 2005 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say nice! keep up the good work and update!
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Title: Master of Mediocrity
Reviewed By: Tury On: July 14, 2005 02:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got the name and title backwars in the last one I did. So why not do another one with them right this time?
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Title: Tury
Reviewed By: Master of Mediocrity On: July 14, 2005 02:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you a perfect score my friend. An excellent chapter, and more than well worth the wait. I may have come across as more rigid tan I actually am in my last review, I just happen to like to write that way. I am loving this story more and more. I love your "antenae" Idea by the way. Anydangway, what I am trying to say is... "Hail to thee and thy writings!!!" (Standing on a mountain with my fist in the air while, simultaneously, a flash of lightning and crashing waves apear in the background. Suddenly I look down to see that I am standing in the water and sweat-dropping before bieng fried to a crisp by the lightning. Smoke slowly rises...) Tury (2 - rye)
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Reviewed By: tomdj On: July 13, 2005 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Keep it up. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:15 PDT
Comment/Review:
*Clpas hands* Very good update, you finally got to a lemon,Update soon, or you will feel the wrath of Jaden.*Makes Thunder boom,and lighting come out of his palms, which he shoots at Kentaro((In my personal opion, a complete moron))who then burns to a crisp*Rememeber, update soon Signed, Empeor Jaden
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Title: Master of Mediocrity
Reviewed By: Tury On: July 10, 2005 00:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't give it perfect marks due to the current lack therof... of lemons. However, do not think me unkind, I am a patient man. And something of this magnitude is worth waiting for. (Was that a Joke? You decide (creepy laugh)) I commend thee for thy writing thus far, and urge thee toward thy future writing creations. Until that time, "Be thee Well".
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Good Update, it was fasinating, I know why those Animals acted,as it has....Happened before. Update soon, i don't feel like uses my powers today. Signed, Emperor Jaden
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Reviewed By: gamefreak_12345 On: June 28, 2005 16:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story I must say...and the cliff you left us hanging at in chapter 3 just makes me want more. Keep up the awsome work and update as soon as possible ^.^
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: June 28, 2005 01:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.3 was very good and that cliffhanger was just perfest. It had me craving more and I can't wait for the next chapter becuz I know that it will turn out just fine. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Yoroy(didn't bother to log in) On: June 26, 2005 13:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter as always, get the next one up soon, i wanna know what happens please!
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 21:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story, please continue writing it, I belive that you should use Shinobu first, because out of all the girls, Shinobu has the pureest love for Keitaro.
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Reviewed By: migele [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 02:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one! missing, Haruka, Kanako, Kitsune, Su. looking forward to next chappie. oh and nice seeing you here, found you on aff first.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 23:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go For It! It's Your Story Write It However You Want.
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: BakaDerkkaDerkkaMuhmmadJihad On: June 11, 2005 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, so good, so crazy. Took you forever to write chapter two, but that's ok. Sometimes perfection takes time. Keep it going, i'd love to see more.
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