| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fall to my knees and worship the ground you walk on!!!
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Title: Fresh Meat!
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 21:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ah! New chapter. Hmm. Took me a bit to get back into the momentum of this fic, since it has been a bit since it was upped. As for the subject matter...I'm too cynical to be put off by it. Moving on to the actual review, I see a branch in the approach taken here. It leaves two main paths (and three sub-paths) within useable range, and I look forward to seeing how you direct the action. In terms of how you handled the characters, I think you did good. Allowing for the situation you describe, it makes a good case for Naru's hang-ups. It also sets up for a highly desirable metamorphosis that could prove most...entertaining. ^_^ Well, that's enough out of me - I have my hands full with a stalled content entry attempt... :(
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, looking forward to another chapter.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: dantes_inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 08:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you SOOOOOO need to update. PLEASE?
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Reviewed By: wowmczag On: February 12, 2007 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude...this fic totally roxors yo...props...
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Title: When are you going to update
Reviewed By: un named On: January 31, 2007 22:10 PST
Comment/Review:
When are you going to update this is so good
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Reviewed By: KC6 On: November 14, 2006 18:22 PST
Comment/Review:
I agree with DrewB1442, and cant't wait to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: November 13, 2006 17:00 PST
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting concept as to why Naru acts so violent towards Keitaro. I hope to ess more soon.
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Reviewed By: Aoshi2 On: November 13, 2006 05:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Please don`t take too long to update.
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Reviewed By: Corarc On: November 12, 2006 15:58 PST
Comment/Review:
I was missing some action form Naru. Hope that is more in the next chapter.
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Title: More
Reviewed By: annony3 On: November 12, 2006 15:56 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey, do more fast the next chapter, i can hardly wait.
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Reviewed By: NFan On: November 12, 2006 15:54 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was good, i am really looking foward to see Na-chan fucking her own father.
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Reviewed By: Tetsurin On: November 11, 2006 20:27 PST
Comment/Review:
Please, don't butcher the Japanese words you try to use like that. At least learn how they're spelled, like "Anata", or "Daijoubu", or "Wakarimasu", and so on. It reflects badly on the story when the writer doesn't take the time to make sure the presentation is the best that it can be. That being said, a pretty disturbing chapter.
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Reviewed By: EverPresentKaze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply (and quite extravagantly) amazing. One of the best fanfics I've ever read, LH or otherwise. Write on, storyteller, write on.
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Reviewed By: Hakudou On: October 18, 2006 17:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! You need to hurry up and update it because I've read through it a good five or six times!
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