| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: JGoodman On: October 12, 2006 00:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best LH lemons I've ever read. I hope you continue it sometime soon.
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Title: Well Written
Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: September 28, 2006 18:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I hope to see more of this done in the future.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. I'm looking forward to any and all future chapters.
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Title: true killer
Reviewed By: Zaara the Black [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fuck i would never think of that
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Reviewed By: TurbodieselBeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, get this animated... like YESTERDAY!! I'd love to see how this would turn out on DVD, as it would be sold out before it even hit the shelves! Kaolla Su would turn Keitaro inside-out with the talent she has, and Shinobu's pure innocence will kill any resistance he'd have left. As for Tsuruko & Hanako, let's just say that Big Sis Aoyoma has finally met her match in a non-violent way while his little sister will get her wish of being with her 'onii-chan'. Stories like this are huge reasons of why talented authors like you are on fave lists all the time. KEEP 'EM COMIN', AND DON'T STOP!!!!
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Reviewed By: Okami_Kitakazeno [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sir, I too extend to you a high-five of brotherhood. You are the first to go with the concept of Keitaro getting to cash in on his karma and maintain an acceptable level of quality. I applaud you, and hope you keep up the good work! p.s.: Oh, and I highly recommend you read the Love Hina manga the first chance you get. The anime is alright, but the manga is far superior. Though, that's just my twenty yen. Ja matta, ~Okami
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Title: GAH
Reviewed By: GenocideHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 03:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Disregard my review below. I messed up with teh login -_- Damn MediaMiner redirected me here... -_-
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Title: sweet!
Reviewed By: anon2 On: July 06, 2006 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great to see an update to this fantastic fic! when adultfanfics went down I almost cried. took some doing but I found this place and I can watch the rest of this great story unfold. still no footplay, tho. ;p Mutsumi and Motoko are the 2 hottest girls in the series and no one deserves Kei's love more (Shinobu being a very close 3rd only because Mutsumi knew him longer and her age puts her out of a serious running). I'm glad Naru's getting what she deserves, but even if only for the sake of Mutsumi's happiness, she "cums" around. Keep writing, friend!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: July 05, 2006 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome, I love it. I hope you update soon, it is so awesome, I don't know what I would do wit out it.
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Reviewed By: Lieutenant Mike Powell III On: June 28, 2006 17:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell of a job, soldier! This is simply put, one of the most kick-ass, hottest hentai LH fic I've EVER read! Man, this is FUCKIN' AWESOME! Soldier, you've made this old marine, a very happy man. Soldier, I just LOVE how you've bashed Naru! Hoo-rrah! She's finally GETTING IT! Soldier, Mo-chan and Mutsu-chan? Man! THAT kicked ass! Outstanding work, son! Now, let's see what sick, kick-ass perverted shit you're gonna put up! Hoo-rrah! Semper-Fi! Carry on!
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 16:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice job, loved it.
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Reviewed By: someoneelse On: June 24, 2006 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the chapt. looking forward to more and more
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Title: Dammmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnn
Reviewed By: !!!!!! On: June 24, 2006 20:34 PDT
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Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn. You updated quick. Now this is what I'm talikn about! Long chapters and frequent updates!
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 07:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Good to have a new chapter up. :) Lots of good stuff here, sex, character development, some necessary plot links, sex...and did I mention sex? :) The development between Motoko and Mutsumi was refreshing and bodes well for future hook-ups. Ah, Naru...I can see some interesting possibilities there, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: On: June 24, 2006 05:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great Story : I love it. I hope we will soon see Kaolla and Shinobu lost their flowers. It will be fun to see Mitsune "discover" Keitaro sleeping with Motoko and Mutsumi. I hope that you 'll update soon. Légion, a French reader.
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