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| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: GenocideHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 05:26 PDT
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Good job, man. I still don't much care for Naru, but hey, your fic. I'm more interested in Shinobu and Su's turn. Hehehehehe... Keep it up. And please don't leave us high and dry this long again.
| Reviewed By: Psychlone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 21:58 PDT
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A great chapter, very lemony...gotta get those citruse juices flowing. I difinintly love Motoko, and it is great Naru got put in her place, she needs adjustment, even if her father was a prick or w/e. That's no excuse in my book. But otherwise, like the lesbian shinobu and Su...great touch.
| Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 20:33 PDT
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Alright, I'ma little bit more active now *tries to hide the seven empty cups of coffee behind him* So, let's put my review into better format. First things first, I'm loving the Shinobu and Su thing, so much, I built that *points to a state of you, with the plaque, god of Love Hina Hentai Faniction on it* Plus a see your starting the fondations of "Let's all share Keitaro so we can ALL jump his bone, okay?", very clever the way you did it to. Naru is getting a rough time, I say she derserves it just a bit though, If she wasn't Keitaro's "promise Girl" I wouldn't ever support the couple myself, Naru is simple to mean to him. Sure, she has her moments, but she's mostly mean to him on a regular basis. Loved the scene with Kit. No more wrath for you, least from me, others might, but no more from me, you've earned it *holds up a "I'm immune to EmperorJaden's wrath, yay for me!" badge, and sends it to you in inter-dimensional mail* be sure to update soon! Signed, Empero Jaden
| Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 19:04 PDT
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Wel, it's about time you updated. good update. Kinda tired write now, so I'll thearthen you with wrath later.
| Reviewed By: egg_affnomore On: June 12, 2006 04:42 PDT
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MOAR PLZ. (Heh, I've gotta lay off the 4chan.) Seriously, it's good seeing WMD updated, but man, what a tease! Please give us all the rest of chapter 9 soon!
| Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 13:41 PDT
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I liked the title for the new chapter, (that song'll be stuck in my head for a while now...) I hope you get the next part up fairly soon, but I'm in no position to make a comment like that, am I? Still, great work overall...
| Title: Weapon of Mass Destruction
Reviewed By: Erosborus On: June 05, 2006 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I'm happy that Keitaro finally had the spine to stand up against Naru, I do hope that they reconcile.
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: June 01, 2006 13:41 PDT
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Awesome story. I really like it. It was confusing cause like 5 chapters before this it said the story was complete but when I got to chapter 9 it said it was still in progress *stupid computer*. Oh well. I am wondering if Naru and Keitaro will ever makeup. I hope they do. Well keep up the good work. XD
| Reviewed By: ichijoji On: May 31, 2006 21:48 PDT
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I've been waiting forever for this fic to update. Thank you and keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 13:49 PDT
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You've done it again! LoL, but why tease us with this little bit? As short as it is, I can see your slight absense on this story has not diminished your sense in writing it, and for that, I am grateful. From this little tidbit you fed us, I can gather this next chapter will be very, very satisfying. Can't wait until you put it up (lol, me and the legion of others waiting for this to continue)! By the way, in reading that chapter, I couldn't help but feel there was an Evangelion reference in there, despite the fact that you said you got those computer's names from other places...however, calling them the Magi sorta sealed my theory for me. LoL, awesome lemon writing, an awesome anime series, and EVA references all in in one? Sounds like a winner to me (though that was established a long time ago). Cheers man, keep it up. d('')b
| Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: ? On: May 29, 2006 08:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, ummmm i left a review a while back and sorry about that. I probably didn't get the chapter because my computers been acting weird. P.S. Sorry
| Title: YOU ARE A GOD
Reviewed By: wowzies On: May 28, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, your work is awesome and I look forward to reading more! great story blah, blah, blah just update soon please.
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 08:39 PDT
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Sweet..... you finally update..... Well, keep up the good work, and stuff..... Then I wont have to shoot you..... Not that I would.....
| Reviewed By: Psychlone(too laxy to log in) On: May 27, 2006 21:08 PDT
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great chapter like usual, could help to be longer, anyways, im am still looking foreward to the next update.
| Reviewed By: Psychlone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 15:33 PDT
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It is good, but i have kinda been hoping for an entirly new chapter. Please come up with it soon!
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