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| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 14:17 PDT
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*Cracks knuckles, and neck* Your taking your time again...time for some wrath then, but how to do it? *thinks for a second, then gets an idea* I know! You, you, you, you, and you *points to Sephiroth, The Hulk, a 100 foot turtle, Brolly((Super saiyan 4, legendary mood)), and Sync ((master of technology))* Go cause havoc until he updates *The fivego to your dimension to do so* Be sure to Update soon!
| Reviewed By: personaohnlyne On: May 12, 2006 07:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is great. Very, very, VERY good. I enjoyed the eight chapters so far, and I'm really looking forwards to more of it. Please, keep up the good job, and continue your great writing.
| Reviewed By: frikinIdiot On: April 03, 2006 16:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh FallenMessiah u spelled writing and writer wrong...just want u to noe o, and ur fic is really good too ...
| Title: ummm hello?
Reviewed By: Zero21454 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 08:13 PST
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Hey, great fic and I love it, and I've been reading it since you started it. But I mean, when's the next chapter coming out!? its been over 2 months, I dont know the prep and work that goes into writing a fic, but please tell us your working on the next chapter and that it will be out soon. Take care, Godspeed!
| Reviewed By: Fallen Messiah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 17:35 PST
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This......is......WOW...I mean....WOW!!!!! *let's try again* THIS IS THE GREATEST LOVE HINA FANFIC EVER MADE BY THE HANDS OF A FANFIC WRITTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!EVER!!!!!!DOWN WITH NARU!!!!ME AND MY ARMY OF LAZY BASTARDS BOWS DOWN TO YOU!!!!!THOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!*pant* *pant* well...yeah...there you go, you're great, keep writting!
| Reviewed By: KageChidori(logged out) On: March 19, 2006 14:42 PST
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Ok dude, ive been reviewing your fic from aff.net (under which names it could vary to kagechidori or ... ordhfjuhbsd and so on lol. aff.net crashed that really sucks huh? but i bet you wrote a whole bunch now ddint you? DUDE, MY MAIN POINT.... PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE TO GOD HAVE KANAKO ON YOUR FIC, I BEG YOU TO NOEND. lol, this fic is so good i actually saved it to my comp and put it on my psp, i can read it anywhere i want now (a bit perverted lol but its that good!) keep up the excellent work and please have kanako be a part of this pleaaaaaase
| Title: My God!
Reviewed By: DarkiveDracormia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 15:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read alot of Fanfics in my day, but this one really had it! Congrats, you have the right stuff! honestly, i would preffer that YOU write for love hina (if those bastards in japan hadn't ended it) that was how good it was!!! loved the character developement and how their state of minds changed. keep it up my friend!
| Title: yeah
Reviewed By: ardias On: March 15, 2006 01:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want MOre please it would be nice Yayy
| Reviewed By: AzureSky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 05:04 PST
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Great chapter. I like the way you describe Keitaro as the king of Hinata Sou, what a fucking man, etc. lol Keep it up.
| Title: Hahahahaha
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 18:47 PST
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OH MAN! You are an excelent writer and i will never threton you again with my mrec army *awwwwwwwww* SHUT IT! Any way nice chap and was that red stone Shinobu referring to the Philosopher's Stone?... Also when you say Magical Girls are you talking about Pretty Sammy? Also my mrec forces are yours to borrow at any time, but I cant loan you Chrono you understand dont ya? Any way Update soon! Rateing at completion of story...
| Reviewed By: Gmusick On: January 23, 2006 12:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES. Finally, BigW has come back to WMD. That was stupid and pointless but I'm almost giddy you updated. Like, no love the new chapter. Also hoping your RL gets worked out too. I may be wrong but I love what your doing to Naru. Anyone female character with that Akane complex needs help seriously. Hopefully by the end she'd change some. I know she hates missing out. Keep up the excellent work.
| Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 10:03 PST
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Another good chapter. Wonder what you got planned for the next one. Keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 00:21 PST
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Damn, you've yet to disappoint me. Not that I want you to =P. All jokes aside, this chapter is more of the same. In other words, excellant! Otohime was up this time, and just like everyone else you've done so far (no pun intended), it fit her perfectly I think. Her character, one of being such a tender-hearted and caring person, is expressed to the letter in this chapter. What's more subtle is what you did on the sidelines. Setting up Urashima as the "alpha male" (as you put it) can only lead to more interesting situations - heck, him telling off Narusegawa was pretty awesome, in that horrible but cool way. And then, you have apparently have something cooked up for most of the girls he has already been with, PLUS something involving Maehara and Su (btw, I found those references hilarious. Cheers to you, it'd be fun to see one or two more fo those). I can not wait to see the next few chapters (there will be more than one I assume? I hope? ...I plead?). 'Till then keep it up! Peace man. d('')b
| Reviewed By: Psychlone (too lazy to log-in) On: January 21, 2006 15:34 PST
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great chapter as always, and very erotic, but i was kinda hoping for that bath scene with motoko, i just like her best is all!
| Reviewed By: Blayze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 10:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aha! Keitaro's now dominant, eh? This'll be fun to see. So sad though, that so many women in life lack the emotional strength to submit.
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